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miscellanea

Reviewed, "Together." Can someone please review http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2515274/1/Dilating ("Dialating")? Thanks.

#451 May 14th, 4:31pm
a silenced revolution

Reviewed 'Dilating'.

Anything from 2008 with fewer than five reviews, please.

#452 May 14th, 4:52pm
Almsivi

Reviewed "if just for a minute, or a second"

"Someone Else," please.

#453 May 15th, 7:41pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Someone Else".

Can someone do "Forever me"?

#454 May 15th, 8:13pm
doctor's diagnosis

I did "Forever me".

Could someone do "Hold on"?

Thanks. :)

#455 May 17th, 4:53pm
Take the Money and Run

Reviewed "Hold On."

Could someone review "Broken Road," thanks.

#456 May 17th, 5:38pm
Untitled and Unfinished

Reviewed Broken Road. (Very good). Any of mine are up.

#457 May 17th, 5:57pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed.

Can someone review "Even if it's just friends"? http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2490097/1/Even_if_its_just_friends

#458 May 17th, 8:59pm
fairytale failure

I reviewed 'Even if it's just friends'. I'd like a review on 'Swing Dancer' or 'Twitterpated', if you please.

#459 May 17th, 10:29pm
Kiss.Today.Goodbye

Reviewed "Swing Dancer" - lovely piece.

Please review any of my poems, thanks.

#460 May 18th, 3:43am
miscellanea

Reviewed 'Roses' [really nice] could someone review 'the Everthing'? Thanx.

#461 May 18th, 7:20pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "The everthing".

Can someone review http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2492070/1/Weird_feelings_that_I_have_for_you ?Thanks!

#462 May 18th, 9:12pm
VulnerableStrength

''Weird feelings that I have for you'' Reviewed.

#463 May 19th, 3:01pm . Edited May 19th, 3:08pm
Sexy vampirechick

OFF TOPIC

Um..which poem do you want reviewed? 'cause preview can't be viewed by others than yourself.

END OF OFF TOPIC

#464 May 19th, 3:06pm
VulnerableStrength

Oops lol wasn't thinking

Aaanyway, ''each way someone bleeds''

#465 May 19th, 3:09pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "each way someone bleeds".

Can someone do http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2434930/1/Waiting ?

#466 May 20th, 6:41am
Untitled and Unfinished

Reviewed! Anyone of mine are up.

#467 May 21st, 7:40am
Horror and Mayhem

I reviewed "The Fake Smile" review any of mine.

#468 May 21st, 10:58am
miscellanea

Reviewed "Touch of Matt."

Please review anything that interests you... thanks!

#469 May 21st, 4:05pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Opposites attract".

Can someone review http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2480981/1/Unable_to_describe?

#470 May 21st, 4:17pm
foreversmiling818

Reviewed Unable to Describe.

Please review The Lemonade Beach. Thank you!

#471 May 21st, 10:25pm
pendisciple

I reviewed 'The Lemonade Beach'

Anything of mine is fine =P

#472 May 22nd, 2:35am . Edited May 22nd, 2:35am
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Blank".

Please do http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2348056/1/Typical_me. Thanks!

#473 May 22nd, 11:29am
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Sexy vampirechick, you lack a "why" regarding your first comment, thus not meeting the review requirements.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

pendisciple is up with any poem of choice

#474 May 22nd, 12:05pm
foreversmiling818

Reviewed pendisciple's "And With The Tide". Really good.

Please review "The Lemonade Beach"

#475 May 22nd, 5:05pm
Drallimer

just reviewed "The Lemonade Beach." could someone review The Forgetting Smoke? http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2483146/1/The_Forgetting_Smoke

thanks!

#476 May 22nd, 9:29pm
.sweetless.sugar

Okay that's done. It was nice

Someone review "The Angels May Cry" please.. =]

#477 May 25th, 9:52am
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

.sweetless.sugar you review did not fulfil the review requirements that are clearly stated in the first post. Please show respect to your fellow players and read the rules before joining.

Due to your review not meeting the requirements of what is accepted, you are do not count as a player.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Drallimer is still up with The Forgetting Smoke

#478 May 25th, 10:02am . Edited May 25th, 10:04am
America's Rockstar

Reviewed, please review my only story

#479 May 26th, 7:07am
.mate.feed.kill.repeat.

Reviewed as requested.

Well, if you'd like something a bit out of the ordinary, try FAWK this SUUXXX. Otherwise, read whatever you'd like.

#480 May 26th, 12:13pm
BlackestOpal

Hmm... this is my first post, so I'm hoping that I'm doing it right.

I reviewed it.

I'd like a review on one of my haikus On Existence or Peonies.

#481 May 26th, 2:56pm . Edited May 26th, 2:57pm
America's Rockstar

Reviewed On Existence....

again, review my only story

#482 May 27th, 4:53pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Love equation".

Can someone do http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2348056/1/Typical_me? Thanks!

#483 May 27th, 5:02pm
miscellanea

Reviewed.

Review anything you would like.

#484 May 27th, 5:16pm
Jesusfreak43091

reviewd The Everthing

could someone please do Haikus

#485 May 27th, 5:26pm
Midnight In Eden

Reviewed Haikus.

The After or Preservation please.

#486 May 27th, 5:43pm
Colorize

Reviewed Preservation.

Can you do "Our Thing" for me? Lovesssss.

#487 May 27th, 7:08pm
Sexy vampirechick

OFF TOPIC

Colorize, I think you posted in the wrong forum.I just checked out "Our thing".It's a story not a poem.

So what happens now?

END OF OFF TOPIC

#488 May 27th, 7:13pm
Midnight In Eden

OFF TOPIC

According to the rules

4) In your post, you will state what story/poem you want reviewed. Be sure to choose right thread. If you want a story of yours to be reviewed, don't go to the poem Review Game. You will not be counted as a participant then, and thus won't earn a review, even if you have given one.

I think that means that my poem is still up for review...

OFF TOPIC

#489 May 27th, 7:16pm
Untitled and Unfinished

Reviewed The after. Any one of mine is up next!!

#490 May 27th, 7:46pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "I have a dad".

Can someone do http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2353625/1/Tick_Tick_Tick ? Thanks!

#491 May 27th, 7:52pm
America's Rockstar

Reviewed and can someone review Behind The Eyes?

#492 May 27th, 8:08pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Behind the eyes".

Can someone review http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2496760/1/This_crystal_figurine ? (Great critique and suggestions are appreciated) Thanks!

#493 May 27th, 8:13pm
Midnight In Eden

Reviewed The crystal figurine.

Can someone look at The After. Concrit is much appreciated.

#494 May 27th, 8:24pm
Kyllorac

Reviewed The After.

Today I Learned in Biology, The Wrong Turn to Nowhere, or The Ninja Way please.

#495 May 30th, 9:42am
Mahone-chic-89

done the Ninja Way

Please do My Song Collection...only two songs are posted so you can pick one if you like...doesnt matter which

#496 May 30th, 10:36am
Kyllorac

---Off Topic---

I'm sorry, Mahone, but your review does not qualify. You must state one like and why and one dislike and why or 2 likes/dislikes and why, but you only stated 1 like and why.

---End Off Topic---

The Ninja Way, Today I Learned in Biology, or The Wrong Turn to Nowhere are still up.

#497 May 30th, 10:49am
Untitled and Unfinished

reviewed The Ninja Way ( a good poem to read for a little chuckle.) any of mine are up!

#498 May 30th, 5:40pm
America's Rockstar

Reviewed I Need A Second Chance.

Any of my 2 are okay with me

#499 May 31st, 9:54am
BlackestOpal

I reviewed Behind the Eyes.

Could someone review any one of my haikus On Existence or Holy War?

#500 May 31st, 5:34pm


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