Finished "Only, Lonely, Lovely, Beautiful Girl"

Could someone please review "Hang the Memories Up My Wall" please? Thank you!

I reviewed "Hang the Memories Up My Wall".

I know my concrit sounded a little strong, but I'd rather get a review telling me what to do better next time than something like "omg!!!11 that's so good/bad i loved/hated it!!!11"

why did you love/hate it?

Trust me, you are not bad.

Could someone review Little Vampires (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2478980/1/) for me?

Or if you know, cutting really isn't your thing, I'll See You Again (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2477668/1/) would be nice.

:)

Cheers,

Rachel.

Done "Little Vampires" - excellent poem. Subtle and well-structured.

One of the "A Hard Holiday" poems, please.

Thanks!

I've reviewed the last poem of "A Hard Holiday". Appropriately titled.

since "leave/stay/wander?" is sadly unloved, i'd appreciate if someone could review that one- or "new age (saint) valentine".

thanks so much!

Reviewed, "Leave, Stay, Wander?"

Loved the format!!

Could someone please review something of mine?

It doesn't matter, whichever suits your fancy.

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

I did "leave/stay/wander".

Good write, indeed.

Could someone do Boy?

I did "Hidden Plea" (for writtingxonxwalls).

Sorry about the whole repeating review thing.

So could someone do Boy or Addictions?

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@doctor's diagnosis : if you and the person above you reviewed the same thing, you should follow Rule 10 in the Read This First! topic. It deals with this issue.

So, by following that, ilovetheopera should do a make-up review to writingxonxwalls , while the next participant reviews you.

-- END OF OFF TOPIC --

Story to review: Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

i've done i trusted you! a bit too short for my taste, but alright.

sorry about the mix up, hope i did the correct thing!

-- OFF TOPIC --

Yes, you did your make-up review, so all is good. Now,next time you post in a RG that is not about that you are playing, put it like I do, in an off topic place, and then state who is up for reviewing. Yeah, that's actually a rule :P (the last rule, I believe)

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It's either Boy or Addictions by doctor's diagnosis

Jumping into the fray, I did 'Boy' by doctor's diagnosis. Great poem!

Authenticity (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2231621/1/Authenticity), pretty please?

I reviewed "Authenticity" (nice poem)

please review "Just for you" thanks

Reviewed "Just for You". (Fantastic job)

Could someone please review "She's Third"?

Thanks so much!

--WxOxW

I reviewed She's third.. could someone review My Prince? please and thank you.

I reviewed 'But' One word--WOWNESS!

Can someone please review 'Love’s Messing with My Mind'? It's the first poem in my 'I Used to Be An ANGRY Poet' collection

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I appreciate your review (and Ill return the favor) but you have to review the piece the author asks for if they specify s piece...

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My piece My Prince (link above) up again...

My apologies. I misunderstood the rules. After I finish my chapter and send it to my beta, I'll start on your fic. :)

-ilac

Okay, I read 'My Prince' and...wow! Just...I have no more words, honey. Go to your review 'cause I'm spent. LOL!

Can someone please review 'This Guy I Know'? Thankies! ;)

Reviewed 'This Guy I Know' =)

Could someone please review 'Crayons', 'She's Third', or 'If He Knew'? (Haha, gave you some variety!)

Thanks so much!!

-WxOxW

Reviewed "Carnivorous Shadows"-Quite nice!

Could someone please review "Truth" or "Disaster" please?

Reviewed "Disaster"

Could someone please review "She's Third" or "If He Knew" please? Thanks so much!

-WxOxW

Okay, I reviewed "She's Third" - loved it.

Could someone do any of mine? Thanksabunch.

Reviewed "If He Knew" Very nice. loved it.

Please review "Truth" or "all mine" please

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Okay my children. Frac's here to clear out all confusion.

First things first: doctor; when you double review someone here, that is no problem. We have rules designed to handle that efficiently. So don't worry about reviewing the person that managed to get in front of you. And if there is any problem ever, go to the Problem thread.

Here's the deal:

Lime owes Doc a review, as she double reviewed him with Billie, but Doc let him get away with it :P

Writingxonxwalls - you also owe doc a review, because both she and Billie reviewed your piece.

Billie will be treated as the next player to review.

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"Truth" or "all mine" by Billie.Joelle is up

I reviewed "Truth," by Billie Joelle, could someone please review "Greed," or "Confusion"? Thanks.

I reviewed "Greed" -nice piece

Could someone please review "All mine" or "protector" please?

I reviewed "All Mine". Loved it. ^ ^ Can someone please review "The Daydreamer" for me?

I reviewed The Daydreamer...

Could someone review Sadness... Ch. 1 is the old version and Ch 2. is the new one.. if look at both for comparison I promise you a nonreview game review back, but if you only look at one do the 2nd chapter please.

Reviewed "The Daydreamer", nice job!

Could someone do Stars or Rabbit?