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Faithless Juliet

I reviewed God can't speak pig latin

Could someone please review Persephone, Eve, Mary please. Thank you.

#601 Aug 21st, 11:12am
in theory

I have reviewed 'Persephone, Eve, Mary'

Could someone please review 'Whimsy is for Beginners'

#602 Aug 21st, 12:50pm
ArekuKawaii

I reviewed 'Whimsy is for Beginners'

Can someone please review Tales From the Deep.

#603 Aug 22nd, 11:32am
Faithless Juliet

I reviewed Tales from the Deep.

Could someone review Persephone, Eve, Mary please. Thank you.

#604 Aug 22nd, 3:04pm
deathtotal9

I reviewed Persephone, Eve, Mary (wow!)

Can someone please review The Pharaoh's Poison Heart?

#605 Aug 25th, 12:23am
Faithless Juliet

I reviewed The Pharaoh's Poison Heart

Could someone please review Margarita with the curls in her hair. Thank you.

#606 Aug 28th, 10:07am
George Doctanian

I reviewed Margarita with the curls in her hair

Please review Justifcation of Infactuataion.

#607 Aug 30th, 10:20am
MarkMonosyllabic

I just reviewed Justification of Infatuation, so if anybody cares to review "The Highway, My River of Unforgiving Concrete" or "Winter Poem for a Summer Girl", I would very much appreciate it.

#608 Aug 30th, 3:11pm
Faithless Juliet

I reviewed The Highway, My River of Unforgiving Concrete

Could someone please review Margarita with the curls in her hair. Thank you.

#609 Aug 30th, 3:27pm
MarkMonosyllabic

Just read and reviewed "Margarita with the curls in her hair."

If anybody'd like to review "Winter Poem for a Summer Girl" I'd be much obliged.

#610 Sep 05th, 10:39am
Philodice

I reviewed winter poem for a summer girl.

Please review Secret Smile.

I'm new to the RG, hope I'm doing this right.

#611 Sep 05th, 8:07pm . Edited Sep 05th, 8:07pm
MarkMonosyllabic

==OFF TOPIC MAYBE?==

I hate to nitpick and everything, but Philodice's review fell short of the 8 sentences required. Obviously I'm not just trying to call her out or anything, especially as she's said she's new, but if perhaps I could get a longer review I would very much appreciate it.

#612 Sep 06th, 12:51am
vitriolicvertigo

I just went ahead and reviewed Secret Smile and Winter Poem for a Summer Girl so that whomever I was supposed to review got reviewed.

It would be lovely if somebody would review Paranoia.

#613 Sep 07th, 6:13pm
Lime-Cat

-- OFF TOPIC --

==OFF TOPIC MAYBE?==

I hate to nitpick and everything, but Philodice's review fell short of the 8 sentences required. Obviously I'm not just trying to call her out or anything, especially as she's said she's new, but if perhaps I could get a longer review I would very much appreciate it.

Yes, I saw the review and it meets the Easy Fix review requirements. However, this is Depth, so you are right. Since vitriolicvertigo reviewed you and Philodice, and vitriolicvertigo is the next player, it seems I should have Philodice owe a review to vitriolicvertigo because they received a review that they were not supposed to, but it could easily be seen as a courtesy review. I shall consult my fellow mods about this and PM the verdict to everyone involved.

EDIT: It has been deemed the review Philodice received is a courtesy review. No reviews are owed by anyone. :)

In the future, please bring up questions/comments of this nature in the Problems/Questions thread - they are more easily caught there. Thanks.

-- END OFF TOPIC --

vitriolicvertigo is next with "Paranoia"

#614 Sep 08th, 2:19pm . Edited Sep 09th, 6:45am
Twyla Cole

reviewed paranoia

can someone look at Old Friends

#615 Sep 10th, 11:02pm
Faithless Juliet

Reviewed Old Friends.

Please review Czarism and Lovers. Thanks.

#616 Sep 12th, 9:54am
Blahdendra

i have reviewed Czarism and Lovers.

You do ripping souls.

#617 Sep 24th, 9:24pm
Angsty Bohemian

Reviewed Ripping Souls.

Please review Pain Is For Those That Don't Belong.

#618 Sep 27th, 4:50pm
skyward squidly squee

Reviewed Pain Is For Those That Don't Belong

Please review one of these: From Your Majesty's Servant; poison axe; black rose; Breaking Out

#619 Sep 27th, 5:25pm
Angsty Bohemian

Reviewed From Your Majesty's Servant.

Please review Protection.

#620 Sep 27th, 6:27pm
skyward squidly squee

I reviewed Protection.

I'd like a review for any of these: I Think This Is The Middle; Breaking Out; From Your Majesty's Servant; intense;

#621 Oct 03rd, 4:13pm
Caramir

Reviewed Breaking Out.

I am Apathy, I am Adoration, please!

#622 Oct 05th, 5:28am
simpleplan13

--OFF TOPIC--

squidzor., your review of protection did not fulfill the requirements. You only had one sentence on flow. Please PM Angsty Bohemian with another sentence about the flow.

--END OFF TOPIC--

Caramir is up next with I am Apathy, I am Adoration, please!

#623 Oct 05th, 4:05pm
DeeFective

I reviewed I Am Apathy, I Am Adoration.

Can someone please review don't give me your commiseration or You Are My Sunshine.

Thanks.

#624 Oct 11th, 3:24pm
skyward squidly squee

I reviewed You Are My Sunshine

I'd like a review for anything up/posted since 9-1-09. Thanks!

#625 Oct 11th, 3:50pm . Edited Oct 11th, 3:51pm
DeeFective

I reviewed lost me for good.

Can someone please review It's Raining Outside.

Thanks.

#626 Oct 12th, 11:56am
Ger Bushy

--OFF TOPIC--

I've got a question to ask... If you've already reviewed a certain poem of a certain author, and the author asks for a review for the same poem you've reviewed, can you state that you've already reviewed it? Or do you have to wait for another person to review and ask for a review on a poem you've no reviewed?

--END--

#627 Oct 23rd, 11:59pm . Edited Oct 24th, 12:00am
DeeFective

---OFF TOPIC---

If you mean, can you say that you already reviewed it and review another piece of theirs instead, no you can't. You have to wait until someone else reviews it.

By the way, this belongs in the Questions thread and you should've stated who came next.

---END OFF TOPIC---

I'm still up with It's Raining Outside.

#628 Oct 24th, 1:32pm
Grains and Oats

Reviewed "It's Raining Outside".

Please review High.

#629 Oct 25th, 8:00pm
RavenclawMoose

Reviewed "High."

Please review either of the first two poems on my profile.

#630 Oct 26th, 5:54pm
vitriolicvertigo

I have reviewed Flying.

Would someone review A Girl, Fifteen?

Thanks (:

#631 Oct 26th, 6:28pm
Grains and Oats

Reviewed "A Girl, Fifteen."

I would appreciate another review on High.

#632 Oct 28th, 8:05pm
Midnight In Eden

Reviewed High.

I'd appreciate a review on Affairs with Hallucinatory Ecstasy.

#633 Nov 03rd, 2:47am
Cottia

Reviewed Affairs with Hallucinatory Ecstasy.

Please review either the second chapter of "Poppies and White Roses" or "If."

#634 Nov 03rd, 2:38pm
Thoth Tarot

Reviewed 'IF'

Please review flying fish

#635 Nov 05th, 6:25pm
DeeFective

I reviewed Flying fish.

Can someone please review Percocet.

Thanks.

#636 Nov 05th, 7:19pm
MarkMonosyllabic

I just reviewed Percocet! So if anybody would like to review any of my 3 poems ("Winter Poem for a Summer Girl", "Like So Many Raindrops", or "The Highway, My River of Unforgiving Concrete"), that would be delightful!

EDIT: Please review the Pavement or something else if you wish. (Please edit into your old posts rather than making a new post. Thanks.)

#637 Nov 07th, 11:34am . Edited by simpleplan13, Nov 12th, 7:26pm
DeeFective

I reviewed Pavement.

Can someone please review Percocet.

Thanks.

#638 Nov 09th, 4:08pm
Midnight In Eden

Reviewed Percocet.

Could someone look at "Affairs with Hallucinatory Ecstasy". I would really appreciate some constructive criticism as well, the more indepth the better.

Thanks.

#639 Nov 14th, 11:32pm
MarkMonosyllabic

Just reviewed "Affairs with Hallucinatory Ecstacy"; if anyone wants to review my new poem Providence or my slightly less new Pavement, that would be wonderful.

...=( Anybody?

#640 Nov 15th, 11:09pm . Edited Nov 24th, 6:52am
CyneNoir

I reviewed Providence. Please review Dream Catcher. Thank you.

#641 Nov 25th, 8:24am
vitriolicvertigo

I reviewed Dream Catcher.

Could someone review A Girl, Fifteen?

#642 Nov 25th, 8:59am
CyneNoir

I reviewed A Girl, Fifteen. Please review either chapter of Dream Catcher.

#643 Nov 27th, 6:28pm
MarkMonosyllabic

I just checked out and reviewed Dream Catcher; if anybody would like to review one of my two newest, I would love it: Providence and Blackhole Madness are the two I put up fairly recently.

#644 Nov 28th, 1:39am


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