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Ah, Justin Webb, you have reviewed the wrong person! Simpleplan13 was the last person on the PREVIOUS page. We are on page 2 now. But since you gave her an RG review she will review you back (if the review met the requirements)

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Next player is A. James Robin with The Definitive Collection of A. James Robin

I reviewed A. Jame's Robin's request.

Whatever catches your eye out of:

Waiting

The Rain Kiss

Stolen

What Carver Says

Reviewed The Rain Kiss. Can I get one for Vice and Verse? :D

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@starleaf: Sorry, but I don't think your review to .crumpled.STIXERZ.paper. met the requirements for a Depth review. If you PM a proper review to them and make a post saying such, you can be the next player. Otherwise, .crumpled.STIXERZ.paper. is still the next player.

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.crumpled.STIXERZ.paper.'s Waiting, The Rain Kiss, Stolen or What Carver Says is up for grabs.

sorry about that! I'm a bit of an airhead. So I read the requirements and PMed crumpled. if anyone wants me to post my PM here for proof, I will.

Reviewed The Rain Kiss,

Can someone review Vice and Verse now?

I reviewed Vice and Verse. A review on any of my poems would be fine.

I did "I am the Moon".

Any of my poems would be fine but I'd particularly like a review on the second "Pictures from Niger" collection.

Thanks!

I reviewed 'Maybes' (HOLD ME...)

Will someone please review 'What Can I Say?' http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2494511/1/What_Can_I_Say , 'Because She Said' http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2466157/1/Because_She_Said or 'I Dunno' http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2466632/1/I_dunno ?

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Esther Jade's second poem from "Pictures from Niger" collection is up.

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I reviewed Pictures From Niger. It was beautiful.

Whatever catches your eye--just not the Horse Race thing, it's not a poem.

I read 'Peace'.

Will someone please R&R 'Untitled'? LINK: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2443344/1/Untitled

Oh, FYI, when I wrote this poem, it was in a blog reply to a cyber friend of mine and the lowercase letters and webspeak are there on PURPOSE. Just wanted to make that clear.

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I want to make clear that the review iloveanimecartoons gave did not meet the Depth requirements. Minimum is eight sentences, two sentences per area at least.

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.crumpled.STIXERZ.paper. is up with any poem of his/hers.

Did Handwriting. Such a great poem :)

Someone check out Solace, please?

Reviewed "Solace."

Please review something recent. Like, within the last week or so.

Reviewed "You Have Reached".

Please look at Love Poems or Lipstick Lovers (both are not as cutesy as they sound).

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GENERAL NOTICE TO ALL POEM DEPTH PLAYERS!

So there has been a disheartening trend lately. Depth is the place to go to get a well-rounded critique of your poem. But as of late, people have forgot to focus (almost entirely!) on the negative aspects that exists within the pieces they review for this thread. All in all: you're too kind to each other...which in itself is not kind at all.

It is important the review contains BOTH good and bad elements. You help the person more if you offer areas to improve around. Authors are hindered if they don't know what their main flaws are.

So please, be aware that your review is meant to help on as many levels as possible. Give comments regarding both the positive and the negative.

Thank you for reading.

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Midnight in Eden is up with Love Poems or Lipstick Lovers

Reviewed Lipstick Lovers. I hope it's helpful.

I'd like a review for Untitled.

I reviewed Untitled. I hope I didn't sound too mean... XD

Could someone take a look at Cursed Blood, please? Thanks!

Reviewed Cursed Blood! :)

Could someone review Labor Pangs, or God for me?

(Edited to remove "The Unheard Song" from the list, though if you're already reviewing it that's okay. I thought it was more poetic that it only has 1 review haha)

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I'm willing to give an indepth review but for it to appear it'd have to be a poem I haven't reviewed yet. I'm willing to do Unheard Song or any other poem of your choice. The two you've requested I've left reviews for them already (independent of the review game) unless you'd rather me mail the review to you. Let me know.

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Always put who is next when you make an off topic post

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Jesse is up with Labor Pangs or God (link for them is in two posts up)

I reviewed the poem God, its very good. Solid poem with a good base and its not pretentious or overdone--just right.

Could someone review Irony And Insanity for me.

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Sorry Justin A Caynon, but your review to Jesse the Storyteller does not fill the requirements. I really wish to stress that this is DEPTH. The reviews are not meant to be short and basic. Please dig deeper in your reviews. People go here to get substantial concrit.

Everyone, please pay attention the review requirements!

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Jesse the Storyteller is still up with her poem Labor Pangs, or God

Reviewed (God) in a PM. I'll be more then willing to post it here if need be.

Toy or Devil May Cry, thanks.

I reviewed 'Toy'. I'd like a review for 'twitterpated' or 'Love is a four letter word', please.

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