You can use whichever RG you like: Stories or Multi-chap. Just because your story is multi-chap does not mean you cannot use the Story RGs. These RGs are all voluntary.

For Review Game rules, go to "Read this first!".

Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game:

Person 1 says: Review "My Lucky Dream"!

Person 2 says: Ok, I reviewed it. So can the next person please review "Stereotypes" or "Window"?

Person 3 says: Done (I did "Window"), so can the next person review "Stranger"? Thanks.

For Stories Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

STORY TO REVIEW:

As the Review Game is a continuation of a previous thread, the last participant there was Imalefty, and she said either Princess, E Flat or Happiness would do. So review either of those according to the requirements, post that you reviewed and what story you want reviewed.

LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

-Lefty

Dawn of Oblivion, please. :)

Somebody do Slate.

Note that chapters 1 and 2 are actually supposed to be the combined prologue, but I split them because of length. Just in case you read one and think it seems incomplete or abrupt.

princess, please! (and if you physically CAN'T review it, then do any of my other stories... XD) thanks!

-Lefty

Please review For the Love of Music, Play on.

please review "Beyond the Horizon"

princess please! :)

-Lefty

I would prefer if ya'll did Plain Sight. I'm not the boss f you however, so just pick one which screams out at ya.

would appreciate reviews on princess, but if you can't, then... any others please... :)

-Lefty

princess, please. :)

-Lefty

And now I have total review game fiction domination! Mwahahaha!

Err, that is to say--Roanoke, please.

princess, please! thanks!

-Lefty

Last Summer please/thank-you

Loved it.

Third Wheel's Encumbrance please. =D Thanks!

Elegant Emotions Thank you.

"Once" or "Keep Breathing" please. Thanks!

An excellent start.

Please review Demons Within or The Pearl of Sorrow.

Rejlan, I'm not a moderator, but since I'm the first one to check it out, I should probably bring it up. Even the Easy Fix forum does have requirements for the review, and unfortunately, your review of 'Once' doesn't fulfill those requirements. Please read the first post in this topic thoroughly. You need to state one thing you liked and -why- you liked that thing, and also one thing you didn't like and -why- you didn't like. I believe if you couldn't find anything you didn't like, you can give four separate things that you liked and your reasons why. Right now all you've said is that you like the sentence structure and emotions.

Not a big deal. You can review again to fulfill those requirements and just repost once you've done that.

--End Off Topic--

Story to be reviewed should still be "Once" or "Keep Breathing" by Chewyy.

It should be "Once" and "Keep Breathing" by Chewyy the moffin.

@Narc

I appreciate your watchful eyes. Thank you.

@Rej

Well, you CAN write a new review, though for the Keep Breathing story. You can do that if you wish.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC! ---

Until then,

"Once" or "Keep Breathing" by Chewyy the moffin

Please review Paper Cranes or Without Reason

You may do anyhing of mine that you so please.

:P

Elegant Emotions Thank you.

Paper cranes please

Reminds me of the ones I made.

Once, please! Thanks.

Elegant Emotions Thanks.

Roanoke, please.

"Willing Tool" please.

"Willing Tool" please

Um. Either of the two WIPs ("Illusions," which is a rough-draft, dystopian fiction meets fantasy setting, or "Typical," which is a re-write of an earlier story of mine, and is satire) are fair game. I'd really prefer comments on those two, but the short stories and stuff are OK as well. :)

EDIT: *Are* fair game, not "is fair game."

'Angels of the Past'

or

'Perfect Solider'

thanks =)

princess, please. (and if not... then any other story will do.) thanks!

-Lefty

princess or anything else, please. thanks!

-Lefty

"Typical" or "Illusions" (or anything you feel like reviewing).

EDIT: OK, after re-reading the rules for clarification (didn't realise I'd been reviewed twice, oops), also did "A Small Mustard Seed" (very cute :)).

"Willing Tool" please; if not, then my other story is fine too

Please review "The Nerd That Everyones After...wait what?!" or "Encounters of The Living"

Thank you.

"Willing Tool" next if you can, otherwise my other story is fine too

I just reviewed "Beyond The Horizon" by Dexterity. An enjoyable read that I recommend.

Would someone please review "Everyone's After The Nerd :: WHAT!" Chapter Two.

Thank You.

Kaiyako Kagami

Reviewed second chapter of "Nerd That Everyones After". It's going pretty well!

Please reviewed "Leaning Towards Love" next if you can! Thanks!

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