Done "Drops of Glass".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

Reviewed "Heart of the Driechtnacht". I like the flow!

Can someone do "Sanctuary" chapter 3?

Thank you =)

Done Sanctuary three. Muy wonderful.

Novicus, please! Episode three would be most awesome, gracias. ^^

Did Novicus, chapter 1 though. I intend on reading and reviewing the rest of them when I get home.

Anything would be nice, except for Rage: Saving Home. I plan on taking that off today.

Did The Online Chronicles.

Can someone checkout "A gift"? Preferably not the first few chapters,if not any is ok. Thanks!

Done the first chapter of "Holy Wars".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

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Ack, double review a la Rule 10. But fear not, Moddess is here to save the day! Woosh!

Anyhow, you guys know the drill by now: Berserko got 2 reviews instead of one, so he will review back Sexy Vampirechick, while Esther Jade is next player.

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Esther Jade with "Heart of Drietchnatch"

Reviewed "Heart of Drietchantch"

Please review 'The Damsel in Distress' Chapter three, if at all possible.

Reviewed " 'The Damsel in Distress'". A good read.

Can someone do "Sanctuary", chapter 3?

Thank you.

Done 'Sanctuary'- very beautiful and intrigueing. :3

Can someone do chapter 2 of 'Shards of a Window'? Thanks!

Reviewed SANCTUARY

Could the next person do Blood Shall Be Shed? Mainly the use of dialog and setting would be perferred in the critique. Thank you.

Fyi: the next chapter coming soon...like, today. lol

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Lachrymosa was double-reviewed so normally Rule 10 would activate. However, I find that the review given by LoKi 7000 does not meet the Easy Fix requirements (distinct lack of "why"). Therefore once rained for is up.

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once rained for with Shards of a Window (ch 2 preferred)

reviewed chapter two of Shards of a Wihdow could the nest person do "Two Islands" please?

A hefty load for me this time around!

Did A gift to make up for Rule 10, then did once rained for. After seeing that I had been beaten to the punch and to avoid another Rule 10 today, I did Two Islands as well.

Could someone please review The Online Chronicles (chapter 2 and on, preferably) or Holy Wars(Any chapter from 2-5, please)?

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I meant to say Shards of a Window, not once rained for. _

Reviewed The online Chronicles.

Can someone checkout "A gift". Preferably not the first few chapters, if not any is ok. Thanks!

Reviewed Chapter 10 of A gift.

Someone please review The Online Chronicles, Chapter 3 or on? :D

reviewed "a gift." (sorry i reviewed chapter 1, but i felt i had to say some things, so... XD)

"mary sue," please! thanks! :)

-Lefty

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wow, i guess this just proves how slow i am at reviewing. XD

so... according to rule 10, sexyvampirechick owes a review to berserko on the online chronicles. (preferably chapter 3 or on)

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my "mary sue" is up, please. thanks. :)

-Lefty

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Berserko,I'm going to review you tomorrow.I'm doing my homework now,hope you don't mind.

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Done "The Tale of Mary Sue Caroll"

"Letting Go" Chapter Ten preferably, please.

Thanks!

-Kaiyako K.

I've done letting go

The Last Summer please (any chapter but one would be appreciated)

KnittingKneedle, I know you didn't want anyone to but I reviewed chapter 1 of The Last Summer, only because I wanted to start from the beginning. I will review other chapters though.

Could the next person please review The Online Chronicles(if you want comedy[chapter 3 and up]) or Holy Wars(if you want action[chapter 2 and up please, but chapter 1 would be fine. Chapter five would be preferable!])

Yo! I reviewed your story. Hurry up and write more, cause when I read more, I don't wanna hit a dead end. By the way, what is the guy trying to do?

Anyway, Please review either slaves or Etherena Beta. (Imalefty I reviewed your story...I owed you one)

Etherena Beta done. Did I mention I love that title?

Novicus, please! Episode three would brighten my day tenfold. =^^=

Did "Novicus" chapter 2. Sorry, it was the only one left. ^^;

"Experiment Thirteen", please?

I did Experiment Thirteen.

Would the next in line please review Buses Are For Squares, Cha?

Thanks!

-J

Reviewed Buses are for squares.

Can someone review "Vampire Prince"? http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2470014/1/Vampire_Prince

Reviewed Vampire Prince. A little cliched, but a good read.

Could the next person do Blood Shall be Shed chapter 2 please?

Did chapter 2 of blood.

Ghost Writer please - a later chapter (7 or beyond) if possible. Just jump in and give me your impression.

Hi, did chapter 7 of Ghost Writer....

The Last Summer please (any chapter but 1 if at all possible)

Did Chapter 2 of The Last Summer.

Could someone do The Online Chronicles(chapter 3 or up) or Holy Wars(Chapters after 2 would be nice, but please don't do chapter 7)?

Done "Holy Wars".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

reviewed "Heart of the Driechtnacht" please review "Resurgence"

Done Resurgence!

Novicus, please! An honest review for Episode III would make my day... =^^=

done novicus

"Stolen Flight" please. ch. 5 preferred.

Done Stolen Flight. Interesting battle scene written in the vain of Anime

Could the next person do Blood Shall Be Shed chap 2? Thank you. :)

Done Blood Shall Be Shed.

Bleeding Stupid People please. Well Duh, it's my only story. Both chapters, if you don't mind.

Did both chapters of Bleeding Stupid People. Next time, you should just request one, however, Serentochan. For requesting multiple reviews, use RG multi-chapters

"Stolen Flight" please, ch. 5 preferred.

Reviewed Stolen Flight.

Can some one do "A gift"? Preferably not the first few chapters.

doing 'a gift'

dang girl 97 chapters!

anyways can someone do 'in the end'?

thanks :D

Done second chapter of "In the End".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

Done 'Heart of the Driechtnacht' gotta say it's got me a tad interested.

Please some one do ' A woman in Blue makeup,' or whatever it's called, thanks!

Only prologue thanks

Reviewed A Lady With Blue Makeup.

Somebody... any story of mine. Any at all. (Mr Adams Apple and Pamelton, My Very Second Best Friend, Stapler Boy or The Red Wheelbarrow)

Done Stapler Boy! Your genius is showing. I think.

Novicus, por favor? Episode three would be most awesome, merci.

Did 'Bunraku Seirei: Novicus' Splendid! Sorry I could only do first chapter :(

Some one do a Lady with Blue makeup thanks!

Please only Do the Prologue. Chapter two needs a serious rewrite, as it was only hastiliy written, which is my fault and i know. So only the Prologue.

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