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Sark

Did Loki and Odin.

MuRanger for preference, but any one of my stories will do.

#651 May 16th, 2:33am
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed.

Can someone review "Beware of what you wish for"?

#652 May 16th, 3:38am
OceanLeviathan

Reviewed Beware what you wish for. A good, emotive read.

Could someone do AI:13 please. Preferably chapter 2

#653 May 16th, 4:32am
artificial destiny

doing ai 13

'in the end' please :)

(i mostly want to know how i can make the beginning more interestin? thanks)

#654 May 16th, 5:44am
Equilibrium

Done "In The End". Why, oh why does it have to leave us hanging there? I'm going to wait for the next update.

"Experiment Thirteen", please.

#655 May 16th, 7:55am
Amethyst Asheryn

Done "Experiment Thirteen." I recommend it - it's really good!

"The Ghost Pianist," please.

Thanks!

Ashe

#656 May 16th, 8:15pm
MC Tane

Did The Ghost Pianist.

Transcendental please.

#657 May 16th, 8:44pm
Tawny Owl

Done Transcendental. Intriguing.

I don't mind which one of mine the next person does, there are only two to chose from!

#658 May 17th, 5:27am
Asherah Seirei

Done Tawny's The Scarecrow.

I'd prefer Adrianna Fractured (on account of it's fresh and new, dontcha know), but as it's rather a play it might not fit into the rules here. So! In that case, Novicus Episode III would be almost as wonderful.

#659 May 17th, 7:58am
dreamer999

I would like a review for one of my recent english stories "Running away"

#660 May 17th, 12:04pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

@dreamer999 - read the rules. You have to review to get a review.

If you have in fact reviewed according to the rules, and according to the review requirements, and it's just not showing up, make a post stating so. Otherwise, you are not counted as a player.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Asherah Seirei is next up. Preferred: Adrianna Fractured. Otherwise Novicus Episode III will do fine.

#661 May 17th, 12:09pm
dreamer999

oh sorry

#662 May 17th, 12:29pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

's no problem. Everyone makes mistakes at first. Do mark your post as off topic, and state who is next, next time you write an off topic post, though. :)

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Asherah Seirei is next up. Preferred: Adrianna Fractured. Otherwise Novicus Episode III will do fine.

#663 May 17th, 12:31pm
N.J Robinson

Did Adrianna Fractured.

Any one of my stories is up for review. It's your choice.

#664 May 17th, 1:26pm
Esther Jade

Done 4:29 am - very heartful piece.

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#665 May 17th, 1:38pm
dreamer999

i reviewed 4:29 pm

well...review any of my fics that is NOT "The libraries"

#666 May 17th, 1:38pm
dreamer999

dammit! you reviewed before me! Ah well, might as well review hearth of the driechnact

#667 May 17th, 1:39pm . Edited May 17th, 1:40pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Double-review situation a la Rule 10.

NJ will give a review back to Esther, and dreamer999 is next player.

Edit: haha, dreamer999 got post 666 :p

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

dreamer999 is up with any piece aside from "The libraries"

#668 May 17th, 1:42pm . Edited May 17th, 1:43pm
Esther Jade

Done "Running Away".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#669 May 17th, 1:58pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "My best friend and my worst enemies"

Can someone do "When it all falls apart"?

#670 May 17th, 2:02pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Double-review situation AGAIN. Rule 10.

dreamer999 owes a review back to Esther Jade. Sexy vampirechick is next player.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Sexy vampirechick with When it all falls apart

#671 May 17th, 2:06pm
Esther Jade

Done "When it all falls apart".

"Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks! ;)

#672 May 17th, 2:16pm
Alexandra Jacobson

Reviewed "Heart of the Driechtnacht" and had a hard time spelling Driechtnacht in my review. ;)

Do "Lemons and Tomatoes," please? Ignore the bad summary. xD

#673 May 17th, 3:30pm
Amethyst Asheryn

Did "Lemons and Tomatoes." Interesting!

Could someone do "The Ghost Pianist," please?

Thanks

Ashe

#674 May 17th, 4:14pm
doctor's diagnosis

I did "The Ghost Pianist".

Could someone do "The Game"?

I know it's two chapters, but the first one really introduces the second and it's only about 100 words so please read both.

Thanks. :)

#675 May 17th, 4:48pm
Asherah Seirei

Done The Ghost Pianist! How sad, Christian, how sad.

Adrianna Fractured, please!

=^^=

#676 May 17th, 4:48pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Double review situation (again O.o). Rule 10.

Amethyst Asheryn shall review back doctor's diagnosis while Asherah Seirei is next player!

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Asherah Seirei with Adrianna Fractured is up

#677 May 17th, 4:50pm
Equilibrium

Done "Adrianna Fractured". Highly recommended.

"Experiment Thirteen", please.

#678 May 18th, 1:41am
Emma Gammon

reviewed "Experiment Thirteen" - very nice one Equilibrium

"Cinammon and Chocolate" please :)

thanks

#679 May 18th, 7:15am
Emma Gammon

reviewed "Experiment Thirteen" - very nice one Equilibrium

"Cinammon and Chocolate" please :)

thanks

#680 May 18th, 7:16am
Alexandra Jacobson

Reviewed "Cinnamon and Chocolate." Very well done. (:

Hit "Lemons and Tomatoes," por favor?

#681 May 18th, 7:52am
N.J Robinson

Did Lemons and Tomatoes. It was really cool.

Any of my stories are up for review; your choice.

#682 May 18th, 11:01am
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "4:29 PM".

Can someone review "When it all falls apart" or "Beware of what you wish for"?

#683 May 18th, 12:15pm
Mercyette

Reviewed "Beware of What you Wish For". WOuld someone please review Leaning Towards Love or A Message from Delilah? Thanks!

#684 May 18th, 1:02pm
Mahone-chic-89

Done! Please Do "Wolf Quest"!!!!

#685 May 18th, 6:42pm
Asherah Seirei

Wolf Quest, done!

Adrianna Fractured or Novicus Episode III, please. 'Twould be mucho awesome.

#686 May 18th, 7:25pm
Eyelyo

I reviewed Adriana Fractured.

I'd really appreciate it if someone could review "Game" or "Meet The Maker". They're my only two stories, and they've only been up for a short while, but I would really like some feedback.

#687 May 18th, 8:49pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "Game".

Can someone checkout "A letter of Absence"?

#688 May 18th, 9:26pm
A. Jocko

"A Letter of Absence." reviewed.

Could someone please review "A Story of Lions and Doors" please?

#689 May 18th, 10:32pm
Mercyette

Reviewed "Lions and Doors". Very creative! Someone please review "Leaning Towards Love" or "A Message from Delilah"

#690 May 18th, 11:01pm
Dot Cubed

Reviewed "A Message from Delilah"

Anything except "Break those Broken Hearts," s'il vous plait (oh, french.)

#691 May 19th, 12:00pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed "James Nathan,I have something to say".

Can someone read "A letter of absence"?

#692 May 19th, 12:10pm
LoKi 7000

Did A Letter of Absence. (I hope correctly)

Blood Shall be Shed chapter 3 please.

#693 May 19th, 12:27pm
Fallin.angele

Did Blood Shall Be Shed -really liked it

Can someone please do Sean Diablo?

#694 May 19th, 4:42pm
Harmonic Discord

Did Sean Diablo, Ch1.

Sylvian Outlaws, please? (Preferably one of the later chapters, but I understand if you can't)

#695 May 20th, 1:34pm
Asherah Seirei

Done, SO chapter two. Slowly making my way into the story...

Novicus Episode III, please! Aye, wonderful, thank you!

#696 May 20th, 3:45pm
Fallin.angele

Did Novius Episode III.

Can someone do Sean Diablo please?

#697 May 20th, 9:46pm
Recontre Destinee

Have reviewed Sean Diablo, chapter 1.

Please review either Nightmare or Phoenix Rising. Or anything that strikes your interest. :)

#698 May 21st, 6:35am
foreversmiling818

I reviewed Phoenix Rising. Great job!

Please review Stars in the Sky. Thank you

#699 May 21st, 7:24am
Harmonic Discord

Oops...

I reviewed Nightmare (Aah... I'm so slow!) I guess this means that Recontre-Destinee will review Stars in the Sky, according to rule... 10, is it?

So, Sylvian Outlaws please! Preferably a later chapter, but I understand if you can't.

#700 May 21st, 7:27am . Edited May 21st, 8:20am


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