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 Deimus MaxiranReviewed Diety and Chocolate Covered strawberry's. Great job :D Can someone give me their opinion on Tree of Eden. Try and read as far into it as you can because the further in you go the more help I need :p
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 Evera19Reviewed Tree of Eden, very well done. Can someone please review American Terror. Thanks so much!
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| Justin A Caynon I reviewed American Terror, it was great actually and I suggest some of the others check it out just because, don't worry its not to long but it makes you want to keep reading. Now would someone please review Fun Times With Madeleine and Dee? Thanks.
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 Ogden-of-the-Moon-ClanReviewed Fun times. Review whatever you wanna, as long as it's mine!
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| Esther Jade Done "Blood Moon Rising". "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks!
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| Sark Reviewed Blood Moon Rising. Any of my work would be fine, but I'd prefer Reunion or In This City.
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| Esther Jade ---OFF TOPIC--- Rule 10 strikes again. So, Ogden owes me a review and ... ----OFF TOPIC--- Sark is up with any of his work, preferably Reunion or In This City.
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| Justin A Caynon I reviewed Reunion just now. Will someone please review Criminal or Currents. Thanks!
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| Esther Jade Done "Currents". "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks!
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| Jesse the Storyteller PHEW! Reviewed... a little too long, maybe. Would someone please review Anni's Story? (Or if for some reason you already read it, read ch. 2 of Half-Spirit) :) Thank you very much. -Jesse
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| Dowie Done. I only have one story up, so review away.
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| KnittingKneedle Done She Cried Softly The Last Summer, if you would be so kind (chapter two or onwards if that's at all possible)
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| Justin A Caynon I read The Last Summer, wow I suggest someone else give it a look, its long but its worth it and I plan to read some more of it when I get the chance to print it out so I can get more comfortable with it. Well for mine this time (wow this is addictive) could someone please read my Heaven Forbid?
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 Otseis RagnarokRead Heaven Forbid. It was surprisingly good.... Any of my oneshots, please.
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| starleaf Reviewed Together! :D very mysterious. Can someone do my songfic, I Miss You, please? I just rewrote it and it's really more of a short story... I mean it can stand on its own, I just added the lyrics because those were what inspired me.
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| Justin A Caynon Read and reviewed I Miss You, a nice little story. I'm trying to get some more input on my story; Heaven Forbid--anything you can tell me helps!
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| peaceinafrica I reviewed Heaven Forbid. Could someone review Foolery, please. Not necessarily necessary to read the entire thing - I know it's pretty long. But if you want to, by all means, do it.
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| Jesse the Storyteller (um ^^;; I wasn't sure which 'part' you wanted me to read, so I read the first because I wasn't sure if I'd understand the 2nd. hope that's okay!) Reviewwwed! Would someone please review "Arista" for me? 8( -Jesse
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| KnittingKneedle I have done Arista The Last Summer please (anything but chapter 1- if that's possible)
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| N.J Robinson I reviewed The Last Summer (and I love it!) Please review I Am Jack's Colon, I Give Him Cancer
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| Justin A Caynon I read I Am Jack's Colon, I Give Him Cancer! Would someone please review my Heaven Forbid, Chapter one and two if you can....but at least chapter two.
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| Otseis Ragnarok Did Heaven Forbid, chapter 2... Murphy's law, please!
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| N.J Robinson Did Murphy's Law Could someone review Cheating Time in a Wasteland?
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 Imaleftyread "cheating time in a wasteland." interesting start. :) "mary sue" please. thanks! :) -Lefty
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| KnittingKneedle Mary Sue is done, The Last Summer, if you wouldn't mind
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| Imalefty read and reviewed 'last summer.' 'mary sue' if you please. thanks! :) -Lefty
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| B. J. Winters Did Mary Sue (last chapter) Ghost Writer please (preferably chapter 6, 7 or 8 which are up for rewrites.)
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| sugaplumprincess Did 'Ghost Writer' ch 7 'Water' please
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| Harmonic Discord Did 'Water'... loved it! :) Anything EXCEPT 'Thrall', 'Trials of the Cursed', and 'The Other Girl' please!
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| B. J. Winters Did your Wedding of the Century. Ghost Writer please (any chapter)
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| Imalefty read "ghost writer" chapter 5, which was actually just merged with chapter 4... "mary sue" please! thanks! -Lefty
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| B. J. Winters *smirk* cheater. I'm cool with it though since you read up to that point before Reading Mary Sue backwards { Chapter 5 } Ghost Writer please.
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| Otseis Ragnarok Did ghost writer chapter 1. Pretty good. Murphy's law, please.
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 poorkeitaroMurphy's Law critiqued. :) Please give A Gamblin' Man a look! --OFF TOPIC-- Hello! New guy to this place. Been a lazy writer for too long. Waaaay to many half-finished, stopped-working-on-it-for-some-reason works, and I'm hoping posting here will give me some motivation to see a piece through. :) AND BE BRUTAL! I love a good lashing. :-p --/OFF TOPIC--
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| Asherah Seirei AGM is FTW. For the Win and pretty awesome. ^^ Done! Novicus, please. Episode three preferred by far, hnn.
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| Equilibrium Done "Novicus". I already did chapter 3 so I did chapter 1. Hope you don't mind... "Experiment Thirteen", please.
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| Harmonic Discord Done "Experiment Thirteen" chapter 4 - excellent, as always :) --OFF TOPIC-- I think Fictionpress logged me out as I was writing the review, so it was submitted as anonymous... sorry about that! --END OFF TOPIC-- "The Sylvian Outlaws", s'il vous plait!
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| OceanLeviathan Done 'The Sylvian Outlaws' chapter 2, excellent, really ^^ 'AI:13' please.
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| Equilibrium Done "AI: 13". Really nice first chapter. "Experiment Thirteen", please.
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| Audy Done Experiment Thirteen anybody who hasn't read it yet, really should... Star Crossed, if you haven't already, please =)
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| D L Dzioba Reviewed "Star Crossed" Someone please look at Ann Elizabeth's story 'Dragon Eyes' as a favor for me, she needs the boost.
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| Equilibrium That's very considerate of you, D L Dzioba. XD Done "Dragon Eyes". Could the next person please review "Experiment Thirteen" (preferably chapter 5) please?
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| D L Dzioba ---Off Topic--- Pardon my saying, but your review of it hardly seems a depth review by the rules I read... I don't mean to be rude. ---Off Topic---
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| Fractured Illusion --- OFF TOPIC --- It's as D L Dzioba says, Equilibrium's review does not meet the depth requirements (4 areas with at least two sentences each). --- END OF OFF TOPIC --- Dragon Eyes is still up
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| B. J. Winters I on the other hand probably said to much - but review of Dragon Eyes is complete If someone could do a late chapter review of Ghost Writer (chose one in 6 through 12). I'd appreciate it.
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| KnittingKneedle I've done chapter six of ghost writer If someone could do The Last Summer, chapter two onwards- I'd be very happy :)
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| Imalefty read and reviewed "the last summer" "mary sue" would be great... thanks! :) -Lefty
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| Esther Jade Done "Mary Sue". "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks!
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| Arianna Sterling Did "Driechnacht". Chapter Seven (technically six) of "The Storyteller" if you would.
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| Kyllorac Done "The Storyteller". ARCE, please. Chapter 2 or 3 preferably.
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