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Marie Silver

Reviewed The Morphine.

Could someone look at The Eight.

#1601 Nov 03rd, 4:04am
renascentia

Reviewed The Eight.

Can someone offer up a review for Verses? Preferably chapter 2 or 3 (though you might be lost without ch 1, it's true). Be as harsh/nitpicky as possible, and as scathing as you please. As long as it's constructive and substantial, I'm happy.

#1602 Nov 03rd, 2:33pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter Three of Verses

Review for any chapter of Vampire and The Romantics would be much appreciated!

#1603 Nov 05th, 6:09pm
Kristin Teabag

Reviewed Chapter 1 of Vampire and The Romantics

Please review The Morphine chapter 16

#1604 Nov 07th, 3:55pm . Edited Nov 07th, 3:58pm
Caramir

Reviewed The Morphine, Chapter 16.

Please review, Chris Remmington

Thank you!

#1605 Nov 08th, 1:22am
Kit-Kat Punk-lover

Reviewed Chris Remmington.

May someone please review Suffocate please?

#1606 Nov 08th, 7:43pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Suffocate.

Please review any chapter of Vampire and The Romantics!

#1607 Nov 09th, 11:08am
sophiesix

Reviewed ch 2 of Vampire and the romantics

please review No Comment

#1608 Nov 10th, 10:41pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed No Comment.

Please review I Never Said I Was Brave.

#1609 Nov 11th, 12:52pm
Caramir

Reviewed I Never Said I was Brave.

Please review Chris Remmington

#1610 Nov 12th, 9:58am
Johnathan Lawless

I Reviewed Chris Remmington

Please review The Trouble With Sarah Fenwry. (There is a prologue and the first chapter right now)

#1611 Nov 12th, 7:14pm
sophiesix

I reviewed The Trouble with Sarah Fenwry

Please review Chapter One (ie 2. Chapter One: Hunting) of First Drawn

(especially with regards to improvements, thank you kindly in advance ;) )

#1612 Nov 12th, 8:38pm
Chasing Skylines

-- Off Topic --

Rule 10 Situation. I also reviewed The Trouble With Sarah Fenwry. So, Johnathan Lawless owes sophiesix a review.

-- End Off Topic --

I'm up next with karma-dollie's Agents of Alcarion: Academy, preferably the second chapter.

#1613 Nov 12th, 8:45pm
Caramir

Reviewed Agents of Alacrion: Academy.

Chris Remmington, please!

#1614 Nov 13th, 4:36am
Johnathan Lawless

As per rule 10 I reviewed First Drawn: Chapter One

#1615 Nov 13th, 9:37am
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chris Remmington.

Please review Chapter One or Chapter Two of I Never Said I Was Brave.

#1616 Nov 13th, 12:18pm
Johnathan Lawless

Reviewed I Never Said I Was Brave. Chapter One

Please Review Vengeance: The Trouble With Sarah Fenwry. One or Two

#1617 Nov 13th, 3:44pm . Edited Nov 13th, 6:01pm
Kit-Kat Punk-lover

Reviewed The Trouble With Sarah Fenwry.

Mayb someone please review A Simple Note please?

#1618 Nov 13th, 4:53pm
sophiesix

Reviewed A Simple Note

Please review First Drawn Chapter One: Hunting (I've edited it a bit, thanks J. Lawless!)

#1619 Nov 13th, 7:21pm
Caramir

Reviewed First Drawn, Chapter 1.

Haunted or Chris Remmington, please. Preferably the latter.

#1620 Nov 16th, 12:48am
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Haunted, Chapter One.

Please review I Never Said I Was Brave, any chapter--Thank you!

#1621 Nov 16th, 7:01pm
Johnathan Lawless

I reviewed chapter three of I never said I was Brave and I must say that the author is a very talented one.

Please review E.S. Lundgren's I never said I was Brave, and find out how awesome this story is.

#1622 Nov 16th, 8:14pm
Laila Amira

^ Done! (applause) Wow.

This is my first time posting here; hope I'm doing this correctly. Please check out my story "Every Fifteen Minutes." I'm putting a lot of work into it and would love some feedback.

#1623 Nov 17th, 11:45am
Chasya Elishma

Laila,

This was my first time as well but I tried to be thorough and honest.

For whomever follows: Please review my story "Upon An Oath", I would love feedback as well

#1624 Nov 19th, 4:35pm
DeeFective

---OFF TOPIC---

Laila, your review didn't meet requirements. Since someone else is already in line, I believe you owe E.S another review. Done properly this time.

---END OFF TOPIC---

Chasya is up next with Upon An Oath.

#1625 Nov 19th, 7:30pm
simpleplan13

--OFF TOPIC--

DeeFective is correct Laila Amira your review of E.S. Lundgren did not fulfill the requirements. However, she is incorrect about what you must do. Please PM E.S. Lundgren another sentence regarding the descriptions and another one about the dialouge since you had one already for each of those. You also must include 2 sentences about one additional category listed on the first page of this topic since you only covered three areas in your review.

--END OFF TOPIC--

DeeFective is up next with upon an oath

#1626 Nov 20th, 6:15am
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Upon an Oath.

Please review any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave, thank you!

#1627 Nov 22nd, 6:51pm
Kay K. Dancealot

Reviewed chapter 1 of I Never Said I Was Brave

Please review The Sign of the Rose, any chapter. Thank you!

#1628 Yesterday, 11:52am
Cole Culain

Reviewed story of the rose, excellent, by the way.

Please review Blazing Heart. any chapter will do, but perhaps it's best to start at the begining?

#1629 Yesterday, 7:53am


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