I reviewed Chapter One of Harvesters.

Please review the second chapter of The Fox and the Rabbit.

I reviewed Chapter 2 of The Fox and the Rabbit.

Someone please review any chapter of Shadows.

Reviewed Prologue of Shadows. Please review Shade ^^

I reviewed Chapter One (the Prologue) of Shadows.

Please review one chapter of The Fox and the Rabbit.

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Rule 10. Lianoid owes TheVinsear a review.

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Isca is up next with any chapter of The Fox and the Rabbit.

Reviewed The Fox and the Rabbit.

Please review Dawn of Sorrow.

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Rule 10. Lianoid owes TheVinsear a review.

Edit: Wait, TheVinsear's review didn't fulfil the requirements. So do I still owe them a review?

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Up next is Daggerhart's Dawn of Sorrow

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Lianoid: My apologies. I didn't check to see if The Vinsear's review met the requirements (I just assumed). So, no, I don't think you do.

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Daggerhart is up next with Dawn of Sorrow.

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Sorry that I didn't 'meet the requirements'. I usually keep my comments short, and I forgot that for this they had standards to meet.

I also commented on Dawn of Sorrow, but I doubt it met requirements.

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Daggerhart is next with Dawn of Sorrow.

I reviewed the first chapter of Dawn of Sorrow.

Please review any chapter of The Fox and the Rabbit.

Reviewed The Fox and the Rabbit, chapter two.

Please review The Wildest of Tales, preferably chapter eight.

I reviewed Chapter Eight of The Wildest of Tales.

Please review Chapter Three of The Fox and the Rabbit.

Reviewed third chapter of The Fox and the Rabbit.

Requesting review for Chapter Seven of Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story.

Reviewed chapter seven of Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story.

Please review chapter one of Incurable.

Reviewed Incurable chapter One

Please Review ' Prologue: A Ominous Beginning '

Reviewed Prologue: A Ominous Beginning.

Please review any chapter of Incurable.

I have reviewed Incurable by Sarah Watson.

Please review The Mindless Ones.

Many warm wishes to everyone.

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@Sarah: Hi! Glad to see you in the RGs! I checked your last two reviews to make sure they were meeting the rule requirements and their not :( Make sure you go back to the first page of this topic and read the rules before jumping in on Depth again. You need two sentences per category of which there should be four from the list. If you have any other questions ask P&Q!

@Eric Showatt: Same applies to you as above.

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Kackex is up next with The Mindless Ones

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Yeah sorry about that, I reviewed Incurable like 2 am last night and really could not be stuffed on elaborating much I'll do another one later maybe. Though, because I study editing in Uni my reviewing style is not going to

be kept in category/ dot point form. I always keep it in a three to four paragraph review as if I'm writing to a publisher. If that's not allowed, please forgive.

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I reviewed 'The Mindless Ones'

Please review 'Shift'

Warning : Shift has lots of crude swearing in it, but I rated it T since there's no violence. Will change the rating if requested.

Edit: I've only reviewed chapter One, as you have not stated which chapter you wish to be reviewed.

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lookingwest: Sorry about that. Not gonna happpen again! I should have read all the rules carefully.

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I have reviewed chapter 1 of SHIFT by Eric Showatt.

Please review The Mindless Ones.

Many warm wishes to everyone.

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@ lookingwest, thank you for noticing the review requirements were not met. However, in your post you failed to mention that if the requirements are not met (and they have already been reviewed) they need to either PM the author or give an anonymous review adding the additional aspects the review needed.

@ Sarah Watson, Your review of MeAsIAm had 2 sentences on other & writing style. You need to PM or anon review with 2 sentences in 2 more of the categories (seen on the first page of this topic).

Because Eric Showatt's review of Sarah Watson was invalid and Sarah Watson's review of Eric Showatt was invalid they cancel themselves out. Once Sarah Watson gives a valid review to MeAsIAm, she will have given one valid review and received one. Whereas Eric Showatt will have given none and gotten none.

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Kackex is up next with The Mindless Ones

Reviewed the Mindless Ones.

Please review any chapter of any posting of Blazing Heart. Though I advise Chapter One, if you haven't read it yet. Also, I feel like I wrote best between 17ish and 22ish, if you want the best samples of my work.

I remember the last time I ask for a Blazing Heart review on RG, and it caused a fair amount of confusion. So I will explain. The first few postings of Blazing heart are multiple chapters in length. Just read any part of it under a heading like "Chapter 1" or "chapter 8" or whatever. I hope this prevents the confusion.

Read chapter 21 of Blazing Heart.

Please review The Wildest of Tales, preferably later chapters.

I have reviewed Chapter 5 of The Wildest of Tales by Sercus Kaynine.

Please Review any Chapter of The Mindless Ones.

Reviewed chapter 2 of The 'Mindless Ones.'

Please review 'Prologue: A Ominous Beginning.'

Reviewed first chapter of 'Prologue: A Ominous Beginning."

Please review first chapter of "Faithless." Please note it's going to be a full series, and as this is the first chapter, not all details of the world/character are included. Just a reminder to keep in mind as you review!

Reviewed Chapter One of Faithless.

Please review any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave, thanks!

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Kackex, your review of Sercus Kaynine didn't show up. I dunno if fp spazzed or if you forgot to post it. Maybe try reposting it? Sercus Kaynine if do not receive a review from them soon let a mod know and we will ask Kackex to resubmit or PM the review.

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lookingwest is up next with any chapter of I never Said I was Brave

I reviewed the first chapter of I never said I was brave.

Could someone review The Missing Love.

Thanks

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