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improvisationallychallenged

Reviewed chapter ten of Vampire and the Romantics

Would like a review for The Story as Yet Without a Name

#151 Nov 03rd, 5:28pm
simpleplan13

--OFF TOPIC--

First, please remember to state the chapter of the piece you review!

Also, backing up a bit, Kristin Teabag your review of In Our Element. You had a lot of likes and dislikes, but no whys. Please give The Five another review.

--END OFF TOPIC--

improvisationallychallenged is up next with The Story as Yet Without a Name

#152 Nov 03rd, 6:38pm
Kristin Teabag

Reviewed The story as Yet Without a Name

Please review The Morphine

#153 Nov 03rd, 7:05pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter 20 of The Morphine.

A review for Chapter Twelve of Vampire and The Romantics would be awesome! Thanks!

#154 Nov 04th, 7:40am
sophiesix

reviewed Fire.

Please review forget_me_not_angel's Devious Judgement

#155 Nov 04th, 2:52pm
Vic Taylor

--OFF TOPIC--

@sophiesix - You didn't review the next person in the list, therefore your post is invalid. To be able to participate, you have to review the last person who reviewed, reviewing what they request. The rules are in the 1st post.

EDIT: Oops, sorry. Was writing this as you posted again, so I didn't see that you were fixing it.

--END OFF TOPIC--

E.S. Lundgren is up next with chapter 12 of Vampire and The Romantics.

#156 Nov 04th, 2:56pm . Edited Nov 04th, 2:57pm
sophiesix

Alrighty, second time lucky! :) I've reviewed chapter 12 of Vampire and The Romantics.

Please review forget_me_not_angel's Devious Judgement

#157 Nov 04th, 3:37pm
Juvenilia

Reviewed the first chapter of Devious Judgment.

Could someone review "THIRTEEN"?

#158 Nov 04th, 10:59pm
PotoPerson

I reviewed Thirteen, really cool story by the way.

Could somebody review "Dolly"?

#159 Nov 05th, 7:06am
Cinnia Aine

I reviewed "Dolly". (Since it is a one-shot, I guess I only have to mention that it was chapter one.) Nicely done.

Could someone review "Strange Musings"? (I just need feedback on it to know how others think of it.)

#160 Nov 05th, 1:05pm . Edited Nov 05th, 1:09pm
Kristin Teabag

Reviewed Strange Musings

Can someone review The Morphine

#161 Nov 05th, 1:17pm
sophiesix

I've reviewed ch 1 of the Morphine,

Please review A Puppet in the Hand. :)

#162 Nov 05th, 2:49pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter One of A Puppet in the Hand

Please review Vampire and The Romantics, thanks!

#163 Nov 05th, 3:23pm
Kristin Teabag

Reviewed Vampire and The Romantics

Please review chapter 16 or 17 of The Morphine

#164 Nov 06th, 2:02pm
mtp2014

Reviewing Chapter 17 of The Morphine

Please Review Chapter 13 of Illusions from a Tragic Turn

#165 Nov 06th, 6:01pm
RazorStar

Reviewed Chapter 16 of The Morphine

Could I get a review for chapter 5 of Protector, please.

#166 Nov 06th, 6:06pm
Kristin Teabag

Reviewed Protector and QA

Both stories

Will someone read The Morphine any chapter

Edit: Actually, I take that back. I'd like chapter 17.

#167 Nov 06th, 9:03pm . Edited Nov 06th, 10:12pm
sophiesix

The morphine ch 17 done,

Please review Lunaixchel's 'black and red' http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2732577/1/

Thanks!

#168 Nov 06th, 11:35pm
Delineations . Alyona

Read and Reviewed Black and Red.

Review Chapter Two Of PhoenixDragon please!!! I edited it.. so its' different...

#169 Nov 07th, 4:50am
improvisationallychallenged

R + R'd Chapter TwoOf PhoenixDragon.

Could someone please review Day One i (technically chapter one) of The Story as yet Without a Name

^_^

#170 Nov 08th, 11:03am
Kit-Kat Punk-lover

Reviewed Day One i of The Story as yet Without a Name

May someone please review Wipe Away?

#171 Nov 08th, 7:56pm
Eponine254

Reviewed Wipe Away.

Please review Something to Say!

#172 Nov 08th, 11:10pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Something to Say.

Please review any chapter of Vampire and The Romantics!

#173 Nov 09th, 10:58am
Eponine254

Reviewed the Prelude (chapter 1) of Vampire and the Romantics.

Please review Something to Say!

#174 Nov 09th, 11:23am
improvisationallychallenged

Reviewed Something to Say (v. enjoyable, quick read)

Please review chapter 3 (Day One ii) of First Crack (yes, my nano-story finally has a name! :P)

#175 Nov 11th, 1:43pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed First Crack

Please review I Never Said I Was Brave!

#176 Nov 11th, 2:47pm
improvisationallychallenged

Reviewed I Never Said I Was Brave

Please review chapter 3 (Day One ii) of First Crack

#177 Nov 11th, 3:53pm . Edited Nov 11th, 3:57pm
sophiesix

Reviewed First Crack ch 3. day one ii

Please review any chapter of A Puppet in the Hand :)

#178 Nov 11th, 8:15pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter Four of A Puppet in The Hand.

Please review I Never Said I Was Brave!

#179 Nov 11th, 9:21pm
Eponine254

Reviewed I Never Said I Was Brave.

Please review Something to Say.

#180 Nov 11th, 11:50pm
RisanF

Reviewed Something to Say. Pretty good.

Please Review Different and Cool: Love's a Polygon

EDIT: Please edit into your original post instead of making a new one...

Its basically a single chapter short story that has been broken into two parts for FictionPress.Com. If you will, try to read the whole thing before reviewing (Part 2).

#181 Nov 12th, 4:34am . Edited by simpleplan13, Nov 14th, 6:25pm
simpleplan13

--OFF TOPIC--

Please don't forget to state which chapter of the story you review if the story is multi-chap. Thanks.

--END OFF TOPIC--

RisanF is up next with Different and Cool: Love's a Polygon

#182 Nov 12th, 7:17pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Different and Cool: Loves a Polygon; Part 2.

Please review Chapter One or Chapter Two of I Never Said I Was Brave!

#183 Nov 13th, 11:52am
Kit-Kat Punk-lover

Reviewed I Never Said I Was Brave.

May some please review Wipe Away?

#184 Nov 17th, 3:26pm
MercurySkullbunny

Reviewed Wipe Away.

Please review Beyond The Prophecy.

#185 Nov 17th, 8:39pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Beyond The Prophecy.

Please review any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave, thank you!

#186 Nov 17th, 10:14pm
Luuk

Reviewed chapter 1 of I Never Said I Was Brave

Review Worst Best Case Scenario ?

#187 Nov 21st, 11:00am
A. Clark

Reviewed Worst Best Case Scenario

Review When We Wither ? (Rather lengthy 2nd chapter, so kudos to whoever bothers to read it!)

#188 Nov 21st, 4:02pm
A. Jocko

Reviewed When We Wither, quite enjoyed it.

Anyone who could review Tribal would be awesome!

#189 Nov 22nd, 11:51am
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter One of Tribal.

A review for any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave would be much appreciated!

#190 Nov 22nd, 6:29pm
Mizzuz Spock

Reviewed Chapter One of I Never Said I Was Brave.

Could anyone review Dusk? Thanks! :]

#191 Nov 22nd, 7:00pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Chapter One of Dusk.

Please review any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave.

#192 Nov 22nd, 7:30pm
Jillian Smoke

Reviewed Chapter one of I never said i was brave

Could someone please review anything of mine? Thank you!

#193 Nov 22nd, 7:32pm . Edited Nov 22nd, 7:38pm
Luuk

Reviewed Destiny by Jillian Smoke. Very dark story if you like those kinds of things. Very well written.

Review Worst Best Case Scenario?

#194 Nov 23rd, 1:14pm
E.S. Lundgren

Reviewed Worst Best Case Scenario.

Please review any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave.

#195 Nov 23rd, 1:50pm
Lachrymosa

Reviewed "Worst Best Case Scenario?"

I would appreciate a review of "The Gentle Awakening" but it's quite dark and erotic, so if that's too much for you feel free to review "The Book of Magic" instead.

Thanks!

#196 Nov 23rd, 1:54pm
E.S. Lundgren

--OFF TOPIC--

Rule 10 Situation: Because myself and Lachrymosa reviewed Luuk at the same time, Luuk owes me a review for any chapter of I Never Said I Was Brave.

--END OFF TOPIC--

Lachrymosa is up next with a review for either "The Gentle Awakening" or "The Book of Magic"

#197 Nov 23rd, 2:34pm
NocturnalNerd

Looking reviews for my story, the Telltales of Fryn Morton: the Gift of the Free People. All reviews are appreciated and returned. :)

#198 Nov 24th, 6:05am
E.S. Lundgren

--OFF TOPIC--

@NocturnalNerd, you need to review the person before you before you request reviews. Please go to "Read This First" on the Forum and read the rules for the review game easy-fix.

--END OFF TOPIC--

Lachrymosa is up next with a review for either The Gentle Awakening or The Book of Magic

#199 Nov 24th, 10:19am
Mizzuz Spock

Reviewed The Gentle Awakening. Lovely piece of work. :]

Would someone mind reviewing Dusk or Pinholes, please? Thank you.

#200 Nov 24th, 7:03pm . Edited Nov 24th, 10:59pm


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