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Topic: Off Topic - Ooh, Shiny!

OT 75. Named so because it's diamond's anniversary. No, I don't get it either.

#1 Oct 28th, 8:06am
gigglebug

hooray!

*gone*

#2 Oct 28th, 8:14am
gigglebug

No, I don't get it either.

well, we couldn't very well say Ooh, Sparkly! now could we? XD

#3 Oct 28th, 8:15am
VelvetyCheerio

Ooh, Shiny new OT! *_*

Yay! :D

#4 Oct 28th, 11:58am
SoneAnna

*bumps into shiny new OT*

Dammit!

#5 Oct 28th, 12:34pm
Engineer of Words

Fang, change your icon.

It's getting old XD

#6 Oct 28th, 12:57pm
Engineer of Words

And hello new OT.

#7 Oct 28th, 12:57pm
VelvetyCheerio

My FB icon? O:

Hmm... I'd need a new one. T_T

#8 Oct 28th, 1:07pm
VelvetyCheerio

mah fb pic is gone... :/

oh well. sigh. I need my mom's camera card... and the main computer for like, two minutes.

#9 Oct 28th, 1:13pm
improvisationallychallenged

Liking the new OT name...

I'm preparing myself for academic death tomorrow. Fun. ¬_¬

Don't suppose there's any life in this thing, is there?

#10 Oct 28th, 1:24pm
Chasing Skylines

- hands out paychecks to Muses - I tried convincing them it was a club, and they owed me dues, but alas, conning old ladies is like snuffing out their retirement fund; karma will not let you live. Nonetheless, they have weaved me a Nano plot I [and the MC] am[/are] pleased with! - shoots fireworks -

Heylo, OT!

#11 Oct 28th, 1:25pm
Chasing Skylines

I'm preparing myself for academic death tomorrow. Fun. ¬_¬

Exams?

#12 Oct 28th, 1:26pm
SoneAnna

*writes for once*

#13 Oct 28th, 1:28pm
improvisationallychallenged

Exams?

If only.

I have to do a presentation on an article concerning postcolonial interpretations of Shakespeare...

I have to talk for five minutes, standing up in front of everyone.

Just thinking about it is making me feel sick. :S

#14 Oct 28th, 1:52pm
improvisationallychallenged

... O_O

How has it been half an hour since my first post?

Where did that half hour go?!?

I've only typed up 131 words of what I'm going to say... that can't have taken me half an hour, can it?

T_T

#15 Oct 28th, 1:54pm
SoneAnna

Last.fm...

Why do you keep redirecting me to Chinese Last.fm?

I cannot read Chinese and it is unnerving. T_T

Sincerely,

Otaku

#16 Oct 28th, 1:57pm
gigglebug

concert of DOOM tonight.

hooray.

#17 Oct 28th, 2:31pm
Denizen47

Bright side of the postal strike: Am still getting birthdays cards and presents, and will be well in to next week. :D

#18 Oct 28th, 2:47pm
VelvetyCheerio

*struggles to organize self*

Later OT. This is a lot harder than it sounds. Especially when everything in your head is spilling out the sides. T_T

#19 Oct 28th, 4:40pm
Sercus Kaynine

Hello, new OT. How are you today?

#20 Oct 28th, 6:48pm
Sercus Kaynine

Rather empty, I see.

#21 Oct 28th, 6:52pm
SoneAnna

Shame on you Brittney Karbowski.

Black Star sounds like a damn chick.

NuuuuuuuuuuuT^T

#22 Oct 28th, 7:30pm
blackriverkiller

Empty. . .?

#23 Oct 28th, 8:01pm
blackriverkiller

I've nothing to do. . .

Might just read random stories.

#24 Oct 28th, 8:08pm
SoneAnna

HI. 83

#25 Oct 28th, 8:11pm
Nicki BluIs

hihi Blakie/Treble/you! Hihi Otaku!

#26 Oct 28th, 8:48pm
Nicki BluIs

and hihi baby OT! so lil with only one page XD

#27 Oct 28th, 8:49pm
Nicki BluIs

-didnt look at the time stamps...-

oooohhh; empty OT...

#28 Oct 28th, 8:52pm
Chasing Skylines

Aha, I made writing this Chemistry project enjoyable. It was a eulogy, so it didn't have to be the typical stale-fare. Instead, it's a roasted pig, and I chugged a barrel of apples down its throat, with the apples being metaphors. I quite liked the 'dearest friend's' voice as well.

#29 Oct 28th, 9:06pm
Chasing Skylines

Ah, **. I forgot about the other Chemistry assignment...

#30 Oct 28th, 9:08pm
Chasing Skylines

Pfft, screw Chemistry, I'm heading to bed. Good night, OT.

#31 Oct 28th, 9:13pm
gigglebug

*kicks internet*

#32 Oct 28th, 10:21pm
gigglebug

bed.

peace out.

#33 Oct 28th, 10:23pm
XxNoImaginationxX

lols, love the OT name!

#34 Oct 28th, 10:38pm
XxNoImaginationxX

i get it! when you've been married 25 years its a silver anniversary, 50 year its gold, diamond is apparently bettera therefore is 75.

#35 Oct 28th, 10:40pm
XxNoImaginationxX

I'm preparing myself for academic death tomorrow. Fun. ¬_¬

+1!! except, your tomorrow is my today, my tomorrow is your tomorrows tomorrow.

#36 Oct 28th, 10:45pm
XxNoImaginationxX

deaddd... neeeed sleep. but cantt get any... bored too

#37 Oct 29th, 1:01am . Edited Oct 29th, 1:52am
gigglebug

FP IS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!

*knocks on wood*

*kisses the sweet ground*

:D

#38 Oct 29th, 7:36pm
karma-dollie

Welcome to the world, new OT! And welcome back to life, FP!

Back to writing in my little diary/journal. :) Or really it's more of a :/ kinda mood at the moment. o.O Yay rants?

*CRACK*

#39 Oct 29th, 7:39pm
Johnny Law

So I joined some other writing site and ... yeah... why the ** do "seasoned" members feel the need to ask the dumbest **. I can handle criticism and ** ... but goddamn. One Example:

sentence: I could see flashing blue lights through cracks in the blinds.

response: Fairly weak for a first sentence. This would be much more vivid if you showed us this rather than just tell us your protaganist sees it."

How the ** do you show that. any other way it's worded it's going to sound like "telling rather than showing". Like **... UHhhhhh Flashing blue lights shown through the cracks in the blinds. Dude that still sounds like telling.

Another Example:

sentences: I wasn't sure what tipped them off. Was it the arguing?That never happened before.

response: What never happened before? Arguing?

Well, chief, I have no idea. It's a goddamned mystery. What could have happened... that never happened before?.... hmmm... maybe... just maybe the clue is in the sentence before it. But I can't be sure... we're going to have to call Scooby and the gang to help figure this brain rattler out...

How do they get by reading books if that ** stumps them. Yeah, I admit. They're ** sentences... but **. No wonder noobs don't hang around for too long there. pompous **.

#40 Oct 29th, 7:56pm
gigglebug

I have a top hat.

:D

#41 Oct 29th, 8:18pm
gigglebug

...and this place is dead.

time to disappear off the internet so this STALKER can't track me anymore!

well, for a while anyway. :P

peace out!

#42 Oct 29th, 8:47pm
Engineer of Words

What up niggaz?

#43 Oct 29th, 9:27pm
Engineer of Words

**, I need a new icon.

#44 Oct 29th, 9:30pm
gigglebug

I need a new icon.

but I like the skyline! D:

#45 Oct 29th, 9:34pm
Engineer of Words

But I've had this skyline for a while.

#46 Oct 29th, 9:35pm
gigglebug

but..!

oh, fine. whatev, brothafriend.

#47 Oct 29th, 9:40pm
XxNoImaginationxX

I want my lollipop back.

#48 Oct 29th, 10:25pm
XxNoImaginationxX

omg, its still on the first page!? wow.

#49 Oct 29th, 10:25pm
XxNoImaginationxX

i too need a new icon...

#50 Oct 29th, 10:30pm


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