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  Kackex I'm done editing The Blood that Binds Us - Four chapters. (The first four chapters) So please review A Familiar Nostalgic Breeze - Four Chapters. 6/18/2009 . Edited 6/20/2009 #181 |
 Lime-Cat -- OFF TOPIC -- @Kackex: Your review to Audrey Manning's "The Blood that Binds Us" chapter 1 is missing one category. Please give an anonymous review with one more category (minimum of 2 sentences) to her story for chapter 1 "signed" with your penname. In the future, I would highly recommend using the review template located on the first post of this thread to ensure your review meets requirements. Thanks! The first two paragraphs (intro) was short, inviting, and sweet. It quickly gave elaboration and knowledge of the plot, but not too much to ruin it. [Opening – 2 sentences] The thought and emotion of the character is wonderful, giving a set of realism. The actions of sorrow and anger that Analaissa feels for her exile is understandable. This really sets to the appro to her thoughts. [Character – 3 sentences] The ending with them already entering a storms seems to kick off the story and hooks me for sure! It’s really good and keeps me wanting more. [Ending/Enjoyment – 2 sentences] I found no grammar or spelling errors, you deserve a walrus! [Does not count.] Keep writing, would you kindly. - Kackex Verdict: Missing one category. -- END OFF TOPIC -- Kackex is next with 4 chapters of "A Familiar Nostalgic Breeze". 6/20/2009 #182 |
| Pig In A Dollhouse Please review See Me After Class, and I will return all reviews! 6/22/2009 #183 |
| simpleplan13 --OFF TOPIC-- PLEASE READ THE RULES You cannot request to have a story reviewed unless you review the person who is up next to be reviewed. --END OFF TOPIC-- Kackex is next with 4 chapters of "A Familiar Nostalgic Breeze". 6/22/2009 #184 |
| MikiSweety I'm have finished chapter 1-4 of A Familiar Nostalgic Breeze. Please review 4 chapters of Fire. 6/23/2009 . Edited 6/23/2009 #185 |
| Crimson Dizzy Reviewed four chapters of Fire. Chapters 2, 4, 6 and 8 of Rainbow Shackles please! 6/27/2009 #186 |
| moon-skittles Reviewed Rainbow Shackles. Because it's an awesome story. :D Someone please review any three chapters past Chapter 2 of Circles of Fate. 7/02/2009 . Edited 7/03/2009 #187 |
| Lea Ai Reviewing Circles of Fate EDIT: Reviewed "Circles of Fate" chapters 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9. Can someone please review 6 chapters of "Sovereign"--I would prefer the last six chapters, but anything is fine. Thank you!!! 7/03/2009 . Edited 7/04/2009 #188 |
| Crimson Dizzy Reviewing Sovereign. Edit:Reviewed six chapters of Soverign. First six chapters of Rainbow Shackles please. 7/05/2009 . Edited 7/06/2009 #189 |
| Palm Tree Reviewing Rainbow Shackles. Edit:: Reviewed the first six chapters of Rainbow Shackles. Due to the fact that my first three chapters are all over 4,000 words, I request that only the first two of Eden, the bare minimum, be read and reviewed. 7/06/2009 . Edited 7/06/2009 #190 |
| this wild abyss Will review two chapters of Eden. Edit: Oh my gosh, I am so sorry. My story only has two chapters, so is invalid for this forum. I totally forgot. Please ignore this post. 7/07/2009 . Edited 7/07/2009 #191 |
| Lime-Cat -- OFF TOPIC -- Since Alphien's story does not qualify to be played in Multi-Chap, the player is rolled back to Palm Tree. -- END OFF TOPIC -- Palm Tree is next with 2 chapters of "Eden". 7/07/2009 #192 |
| mikey magee Reviweing Eden EDIT: Reviwed 6 of Eden 6 of "Memories Frozen In Ice" please. 7/11/2009 . Edited 7/11/2009 #193 |
| Crimson Dizzy Reviewing Memories Frozen In Ice. Edit: Reviewed all six chapters of Memories Frozen In Ice and loved it! Chapters 2,4,6,7,8 and 9 of Rainbow Shackles please! 7/12/2009 . Edited 7/12/2009 #194 |
| Kit-Kat Punk-lover Reveiwing Rainbow Shackles :D 7/14/2009 #195 |
| Kit-Kat Punk-lover EDIT: Reveiwed chapters 2, 4, 6, 7, 8, and 9 of the Rainbow Shackles and enjoyed it immensly XD. Would someone please reveiw all four chapters of Twisted Smiles?! Thanks XD 7/15/2009 #196 |
| Lea Ai Reviewing "Twisted Smiles". Edit: Reviewed all four chapters of "Twisted Smiles". Please review four chapters of "Sovereign" (preferably chapters 12-16, but of course anything is good :-D). Thank you!!! 7/15/2009 . Edited 7/16/2009 #197 |
| Pandora's Flight Reviewing "Soverign" =D 7/18/2009 #198 |
| Pandora's Flight Gah, I'm a forum noob and don't know how to edit my post... But I have reviewed four chapters of "Soverign" and thoroughly enjoyed it :) Very interesting, it draws one's attention very well and flows nicely! I would like all four chapters of "Vieovita" reviewed pwease ^_^ Edit: I figured it out! Unfortunately, it's too late, lol. 7/18/2009 . Edited 7/18/2009 #199 |
| Crimson Dizzy Reviewing Vieovita. Edit: Reviewed four chapters of Vieovita. Last four chapters of Rainbow Shackles please! 7/19/2009 . Edited 7/19/2009 #200 |
| Ersa Crayold -- Off Topic -- Last four chapters of Rainbow Shackles please! Confetti Kitty the last two chapters that you requested (chapters 8 and 9) are over 4000 words in length. Therefore, as according to the rules your max request of chapters can only be 3. -- End Off Topic -- Confetti Kitty is next with 3 chapters of "Rainbow Shackles" 7/20/2009 . Edited by Lime-Cat, 7/20/2009 #201 |
| Crimson Dizzy -Off Topic- Okay, sorry. -End off topic- Last three chapters of Rainbow Shackles then. 7/20/2009 #202 |
| deefective EDIT: Reviewed the last three chapters of Rainbow Shackles. Can someone please review two chapters of Ivy & Isabelle. 7/20/2009 . Edited 7/20/2009 #203 |
| Kit-Kat Punk-lover Going to reveiw Ivy & Isabelle :D Edit: Reviewed two chapters of Ivy and Isabelle. Someone please review two chapters of Twisted Smiles :) 7/20/2009 . Edited 7/20/2009 #204 |
| Faithless Juliet I review two chapters of Twisted Smiles, could someone review two chapters of Allegory please. Thank you. 7/21/2009 #205 |
| Pandora's Flight Reviewing "Allegory" :) 7/21/2009 #206 |
| Lime-Cat -- OFF TOPIC -- Kit-Kat Punk-Lover: Your to chapter 3 of DeeFective's "Ivy & Isabelle" did not meet depth requirements. Remember: any comments along the lines of "no mistakes" for grammar does not count. Therefore, you only have 3 categories. Of those 3 categories, the one for Ending was very marginal - essentially, you said the same thing using different words. Be careful in the future. Thanks. -- END OFF TOPIC -- Faithless Juliet is next with 2 chapters of "Allegory" EDIT: The Eternal Masquerade is reviewing "Allegory". Please make a new post when you have finished reviewing as you cannot edit my post. Thanks. 7/21/2009 . Edited 7/21/2009 #207 |
| Pandora's Flight Reviewed two chapters of Allegory... Two of Vieovita please :) Preferably the last two, but whatever works! ♥ 7/21/2009 #208 |
| Lea Ai Reviewing "Vieovita". EDIT: Reviewed all four chapters of "Vieovita". Please review four chapters of "Sovereign"...I prefer something after chapter 6, but anything is fine :-D. Thanks! 7/21/2009 . Edited 7/23/2009 #209 |
| Kit-Kat Punk-lover Reviewing Sovereign :D Edit: Reviewed four chapters of Sovereign and liked it alot :D Could someone please review four chapters of Twisted Smiles please? Thanks! 7/27/2009 . Edited 7/27/2009 #210 |
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