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Topic: The Review Game: Multi-Chap - Easy Fix

This is place to come if you want reviews for a story that has at least 4 chapters, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

Only stories go here. Not poems.

You can use whichever RG you like: Stories or Multi-chap. Just because your story is multi-chap does not mean you cannot use the Story RGs. These RGs are all voluntary.

For Review Game rules, go to "Read this first!". For the special RG Multi-chap rules, look at rule 13 and forward.

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Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game: Multi-chap:

Person 1: Please review "This."

Person 2: I reviewed two chapters of "This." please review two chapters of "That."

Person 3: I reviewed five chapters of "That." please review five chapters of "Yay."

Person 4: I reviewed five chapters of "Yay." "Story" only has four chapters, so please review all of them.

As you can see, you need to enter a story with at least 4 chapters. The request of reviews has to be at least 2 or max 6.

You review the above person with how much he/she has requested, or more, and then request the same amount for yourself, or less (not more! If you want to request more, you review the person above more).

First person to post in this topic gets a freebie of a minimum of 2 reviews. As they have not reviewed, they cannot request. So the second to participate decide how much they wish to review within the established range.

But! If you have1 chapter with 4000 words or more: your max request can only be 4 chapters.

And if you have more than 1 chapter with 4000 words or more: Max request - 3 chapters

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For Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not be seen as a participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

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LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

#1 Mar 02nd, 9:12am . Edited May 03rd, 5:44am
Otseis Ragnarok
I'll take the freebie... Dream Angel
#2 Mar 02nd, 11:51am . Edited by Fractured Illusion, Mar 03rd, 2:19am
Kelsci J. Sceasel
I read 2 chapters of Dream Angel. It's great :] Please review The Last Agnitiora.
#3 Mar 03rd, 6:18pm
KnittingKneedle
3 chapters of The Last Agnitora

The Last Summer, please

#4 Mar 04th, 3:58am . Edited Mar 04th, 4:00am
Kaiyako Kagami
Done three chapters of "The Last Summer"

Three chapters of "Letting Go" please.

Thank you.

Kaiyako K.

#5 Mar 08th, 8:23am
Imalefty
reviewed three chapters of "letting go." i hope i was helpful... i'm really sorry that my review was kind of... well... vague... >_<

three chapters of princess if you can, or three chapters of my others if you can't. thanks!

-Lefty

#6 Mar 09th, 4:40pm
l. fayette
three chapters of princess.

three chapters of the Puppet Queen please.

#7 Mar 09th, 5:35pm . Edited Mar 10th, 12:58pm
Fiorenza
I reviewed three chapters of Puppet Queen.

Three chapters of "Another Little Mermaid", please.

#8 Mar 10th, 3:50pm
Kaiyako Kagami
Reviewed three chapters of "Another Little Mermaid"

Three chapters of "Letting Go" please.

Thank you.

Kaiyako K.

#9 Mar 11th, 3:51am
Esther Jade
Done 3 chaps of "Letting Go."

"Heart of the Driechtnacht" - 2 chapters please.

Thanks!

#10 Mar 12th, 2:52pm
Fiorenza
Did 3 of "Heart of the Driechnacht."

"Another Little Mermaid", please. Two chapters.

#11 Mar 12th, 6:06pm
Kaiyako Kagami
Done Two Chapters Of "Another Little Mermaid"

"Letting Go" <--- Two Chapters please. Preferably the third and fourth.

Thanks.

Kaiyako

#12 Mar 13th, 3:57am . Edited Mar 13th, 10:52pm
Otseis Ragnarok
"Goddess Of The Gates" wasn't posted... so I read 3 chapters of Letting go... Is that okay?

If it is, then Dream Angel, preferably the later chapters... Thanks...

#13 Mar 13th, 11:25am . Edited Mar 13th, 11:32am
Damius
Reviewed 'Dream Angel' chapter one, two and a combined review for three and four. Probably review five in my own time later.

The first two or three chapters of 'Dark Bloodline' please. (chapter two is really long sorry, im going to split it somtime in the future)

#14 Mar 13th, 1:28pm . Edited Mar 13th, 1:30pm
Kyllorac
Resurrection!

Reviewed the first two chapters of Dark Bloodline. It's a decent start. n.n

Chapters 1 and 2 of ARCE please. Skip the prologue (it's too short to review XD).

#15 Mar 19th, 10:18am
loves him
did "ARCE"

can anyone do chapters five and six of "Three Guys in One Coffee Cup"?

Thanks.

#16 Mar 19th, 4:56pm
l. fayette
sorry, I did chapters 1 & 2. I hope that still counts...

2 chapters of Daughter of the Sea please,

#17 Mar 20th, 6:30am
loves him
did chapters 1-4 of daughter of the sea.

four chappies of three guys in one cofee cup pleasee.

#18 Mar 21st, 3:28am
Kaiyako Kagami
Did Chapters 4-7 Of "Three Guys And One Coffee Cup"

Four Chapters Of ---> "Letting Go" please.

Thank you,

-Kaiyako K.

#19 Mar 21st, 8:04am
Dexterity
Did chapters 1-4 of "Letting Go" (previously did ch. 5 and 6 for the other RGs)

Preferrably all four chapters of "Stolen Flight". If it's not physically possible (as in you've reviewed some chapters already), then do as many as you can (I think the minimum for this RG is 2 reviews though)

#20 Mar 24th, 3:58pm . Edited Mar 24th, 5:25pm
Otseis Ragnarok
Did all 4 chaps of stolen flight.

I want the same for Dream Angel, four reviews, please...

#21 Mar 25th, 1:13pm . Edited Mar 25th, 1:46pm
Esther Jade
Done 4 chaps of Onar's "Dream Angel".

2 of the "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#22 Mar 26th, 10:52am . Edited Mar 26th, 11:33am
Dexterity
Did ch. 5 and 6. Interesting character development!

2 chapters of "Stolen Flight" please.

#23 Mar 26th, 8:17pm
Oracle of Destiny
Done first two chapters of Stolen Flight - hope my commets hepled you Dexterity :)

2 chapters of 'Destiny and I: A New Man' please.

(edited by Frac, because you can't request more than you reviewed)

#24 Mar 28th, 5:07am . Edited by Fractured Illusion, Mar 28th, 6:03am
thefilmchick
Reviewed prologue + 2 chapters of 'Destiny and I.'

Someone do the same for A Thousand Bayonets, if they'd like. :)

#25 Mar 30th, 1:16pm . Edited Mar 30th, 1:43pm
Esther Jade
Done 2 chaps of "A Thousand Bayonets"

2 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#26 Mar 31st, 1:41am
KimHua
Reviewed first three chapters of "Heart of the Driechtnacht". Please review three of http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2329899/1/Baptism_of_Fire

Thanks!

#27 Mar 31st, 3:10am . Edited Apr 01st, 12:54am
Esther Jade
Done 3 chapters of "Baptism of Fire" - dumb computer kept losing my reviews (Argh!)

3 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#28 Apr 01st, 10:44am . Edited Apr 01st, 11:34am
MC Tane
Done Chapter 3 of Heart of the Driechtnacht. Good work on that, a few things, but very well-written.:D

Please review Transcendental. Thanks.

#29 Apr 01st, 3:18pm . Edited Apr 01st, 3:18pm
KimHua
(sorry, I clicked reply instead of edit)
#30 Apr 01st, 3:21pm . Edited Apr 01st, 3:22pm
KimHua
Wrong thread, Tane, sorry... this is the multi-chapter review thread. You need to review 3 chapters, not just chapter 3. And you need at least four chapters in your story for it to be reviewed here...

And, if I may, I'd like to stake my claim on this one - I've just begun my three reviews...

#31 Apr 01st, 3:21pm . Edited Apr 01st, 3:24pm
MC Tane
I just realized that when I checked back and didn't find my post. Ignore the whole thing. Sorry.
#32 Apr 01st, 3:22pm . Edited Apr 01st, 3:23pm
KimHua
Okay, now I've done 3 chapters of "Heart of the Driechtnacht" I'd like to make a request...

Could someone please review all three chapters of "Fight or Flight KHG Challenge 3"? I know what I wrote regarding Tane's request, and that this thread's for stories with 4+ chapters, *but* in my defense my story's over 13k words. I know this isn't *that* much, but my story "The Séance" is only 9K and (before FictionPress decided to randomly remove all my section breaks and I re-submitted the chapters) used to be split into 6 chapters. It's now only three because longer chapters means the reader has more to review each time. :-)

So... could the rules be slightly bent? :-) If not, then someone please review three of "Baptism of Fire". :-)

#33 Apr 01st, 4:17pm
thefilmchick
Did 1-3 of 'Fight or Flight.'

Someone else want to take a crack at chs 1-2 of The Secret Steps?

#34 Apr 01st, 8:28pm
Kaiyako Kagami
Done "The Secret Steps"

Chapters 7-8 of "Letting Go" please.

Thank You,

Kaiyako K.

#35 Apr 01st, 10:32pm
Imalefty

read and reviewed 3 chapters of "letting go."

mary sue, please. :) thanks!

-Lefty

#36 Apr 04th, 7:06pm
Oracle of Destiny

Read and reviewed the first 3 chapters of 'Mary Sue' - very good start and I hope the plot and characters develop :)

Can someone read and review Chapters 1-3 of 'Kayley's Top 10 Rants' please. Thanks xD

#37 Apr 05th, 3:17am
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed 4 chapters of "'Kayley's Top 10 Rants".

Can someone review 4 chapters of "A gift"? (Any 4 chapters is fine)

#38 Apr 05th, 12:25pm
Yellers

Reviewed 4 chapter of "A Gift"

4 chapter of "Loose Ends" Please

#39 Apr 05th, 12:57pm
Imalefty

reviewed 4 chapters of "loose ends." (reviving the multi-chap easy fix!! :D)

please review 4 chapters of "mary sue" please... (last 4 chapters would be nice... and considering there are only 5 chapters, that shouldn't be TOO hard... ;P) thank you!!

-Lefty

#40 Apr 18th, 6:41pm . Edited Apr 18th, 6:41pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviwed 4 chapters of "Mary Sue".

Please review 4 chapters of "A gift",preferably any chapter except 1-4,but I don't mind if you can't.

#41 Apr 18th, 8:04pm
B. J. Winters

I did "Gift" Chapters 10, 16, 17 and 35 (with 34/36 in one post)

I'd like Ghost Writer - four chapters - you can start at the beginning or review any four.

#42 Apr 25th, 11:31am . Edited Apr 25th, 11:44am
Imalefty

read and reviewed "ghost writer." i would recommend it. :)

"mary sue," please. thanks!

-Lefty

#43 Apr 25th, 7:40pm
Esther Jade

Done 4 chapters of "Mary Sue".

4 chapters of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

#44 Apr 26th, 5:33am . Edited Apr 26th, 6:00am
Fractured Illusion

ATTENTION!

We have inforced a new rule that will determine how many chapters you can request! This is due to RG Multi having been clogged up because of too massive chapters in the past, so now we aim to put a stop to that.

New rule is Rule 17:

17) There is a restriction to the above rule. If your request includes a chapter with more than 4,000 words, you can only request up to 4 chapters max. Even if you had to review a six chaptered story. And if you have more than one requested chapter over 4,000 words, you can only request a maximum of 3 chapters.

To put it more simple:

1 chapter with 4,000 words or more: Max request - 4 chapters

More than 1 chapter with 4,000 words or more: Max request - 3 chapters

This rule has no retroactive influence. Only the new posts/players will be affected by this.

---END OF THE NOTICE ---

Esther Jade is up Heart of Driechtnacht (4 chapters)

#45 May 03rd, 5:49am . Edited May 04th, 9:13am
artificial destiny

reviewing 5 of 'heart of driechtnacht'

pls review five chapters of 'in the end'

thanks :D

#46 May 07th, 10:49pm
Equilibrium

Reviewing 5 chapters of "In The End". So far I can't take my eyes off it.

4 chapters of "Experiment Thirteen", please.

#47 May 07th, 11:26pm
artificial destiny

reviewing 5 of experiment thirteen

5 of in the end pls :D

#48 2 days ago, 7:45pm
B. J. Winters

Read 5 chapters of In The End

Four chapters of Ghost Writer. My preference is later chapters, but I'm flexible.

#49 Yesterday, 12:22pm . Edited Yesterday, 2:17pm
artificial destiny

okay so i said it would be a freebie but this is too good to pass up

reviewing all chapters of the Ghost writer

..

someone please review 6 chapters of 'in the end'?

thanks :D

#50 Yesterday, 7:50pm


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