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![]() This is place to come if you want reviews for a story that has at least 4 chapters, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review. Only stories go here. Not poems. You can use whichever RG you like: Stories or Multi-chap. Just because your story is multi-chap does not mean you cannot use the Story RGs. These RGs are all voluntary. For Review Game rules and some fun facts, go to "Read this first!". Read the rules for the Review Games as well as the rules about Multi-chap. --- FAQ: ยป Two or more people have reviewed the same person! What happens now? Answer --- Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game: Multi-chap: Person 1: Please review "This." Person 2: I reviewed two chapters of "This." ch 5-6. please review two chapters of "That." Person 3: I reviewed five chapters of "That." (chapters 1-5), please review five chapters of "Yay." Person 4: I reviewed five chapters of "Yay.", ch 3-7. "Story" only has four chapters, so please review all of them. Person 5: I am reviewing 4 ch of "Story". Edit: Done, ch 10-14.! Please review 4 chapters of "Singular" As you can see, you need to enter a story with at least 4 chapters. The request of reviews has to be at least 2 or max 6. You review the above person with how much he/she has requested or more and then request the same amount for yourself, or less (not more! If you want to request more, you review the person above more). You can't state what you want reviewed until you have completed all reviews. But you can make a holding post, stating you are reviewing. This lasts for max 2 days. When you are done with the reviews, edit into your post what you yourself want reviewed. First person to post in this topic gets a freebie of a minimum of 2 reviews. As they have not reviewed, they cannot request. So the second to participate decide how much they wish to review within the established range. But! If you have1 chapter with 4000 words or more: your max request can only be 4 chapters. And if you have more than 1 chapter with 4000 words or more: Max request - 3 chapters Advice: Don't try this if you are new to the review games. It will be too confusing. Start with regular review games Easy Fix. --- For Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not be seen as a participate. REVIEW REQUIREMENTS: You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not. If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise. Restating the same thing does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece because I thought it was very enjoyable" does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece. It was enjoyable because the characters were relateable" does count as a why. Phrases like "no mistakes" or "good job" do not count as a like. If you cannot find a dislike then write another distinct like do not say "there are no mistakes." That will not count. Saying "good job" or other similar phrases will not count as a like on a piece either. It is not specific. Here are templates to ensure your review clearly fulfills the qualifications, you can use any of them if you choose, but they are not required: 1) I liked... because... I disliked... because.... 2) I liked... because... I liked... because... 3)I disliked... because... I disliked... because... If you are still unsure on how the review requirement for Easy Fix is viewed, look at this post for guidance. Note: Commenting on summary and/or title will not count. --- LET THE GAMES BEGIN! 3/02/2008 . Edited 3/28/2011 #1 |
![]() I'll take the freebie... Dream Angel 3/02/2008 . Edited by Fractured Illusion, 3/03/2008 #2 |
![]() I read 2 chapters of Dream Angel. It's great :] Please review The Last Agnitiora. 3/03/2008 #3 |
![]() 3 chapters of The Last Agnitora 3/04/2008 . Edited 3/04/2008 #4The Last Summer, please |
![]() Done three chapters of "The Last Summer" 3/08/2008 #5Three chapters of "Letting Go" please. Thank you. Kaiyako K. |
![]() reviewed three chapters of "letting go." i hope i was helpful... i'm really sorry that my review was kind of... well... vague... >_< 3/09/2008 #6three chapters of princess if you can, or three chapters of my others if you can't. thanks! -Lefty |
![]() three chapters of princess. 3/09/2008 . Edited 3/10/2008 #7three chapters of the Puppet Queen please. |
![]() I reviewed three chapters of Puppet Queen. 3/10/2008 #8Three chapters of "Another Little Mermaid", please. |
![]() Reviewed three chapters of "Another Little Mermaid" 3/11/2008 #9
Three chapters of "Letting Go" please. Thank you. Kaiyako K. |
![]() Done 3 chaps of "Letting Go." 3/12/2008 #10"Heart of the Driechtnacht" - 2 chapters please. Thanks! |
![]() Did 3 of "Heart of the Driechnacht." 3/12/2008 #11"Another Little Mermaid", please. Two chapters. |
![]() Done Two Chapters Of "Another Little Mermaid" 3/13/2008 . Edited 3/13/2008 #12
"Letting Go" <--- Two Chapters please. Preferably the third and fourth. Thanks. Kaiyako |
![]() "Goddess Of The Gates" wasn't posted... so I read 3 chapters of Letting go... Is that okay? 3/13/2008 . Edited 3/13/2008 #13If it is, then Dream Angel, preferably the later chapters... Thanks... |
![]() Reviewed 'Dream Angel' chapter one, two and a combined review for three and four. Probably review five in my own time later. 3/13/2008 . Edited 3/13/2008 #14The first two or three chapters of 'Dark Bloodline' please. (chapter two is really long sorry, im going to split it somtime in the future) |
![]() Resurrection! 3/19/2008 #15Reviewed the first two chapters of Dark Bloodline. It's a decent start. n.n Chapters 1 and 2 of ARCE please. Skip the prologue (it's too short to review XD). |
![]() did "ARCE" 3/19/2008 #16can anyone do chapters five and six of "Three Guys in One Coffee Cup"? Thanks. |
![]() sorry, I did chapters 1 & 2. I hope that still counts... 3/20/2008 #172 chapters of Daughter of the Sea please, |
![]() did chapters 1-4 of daughter of the sea. 3/21/2008 #18four chappies of three guys in one cofee cup pleasee. |
![]() Did Chapters 4-7 Of "Three Guys And One Coffee Cup" 3/21/2008 #19Four Chapters Of ---> "Letting Go" please. Thank you, -Kaiyako K. |
![]() Did chapters 1-4 of "Letting Go" (previously did ch. 5 and 6 for the other RGs) 3/24/2008 . Edited 3/24/2008 #20Preferrably all four chapters of "Stolen Flight". If it's not physically possible (as in you've reviewed some chapters already), then do as many as you can (I think the minimum for this RG is 2 reviews though) |
![]() Did all 4 chaps of stolen flight. 3/25/2008 . Edited 3/25/2008 #21I want the same for Dream Angel, four reviews, please... |
![]() Done 4 chaps of Onar's "Dream Angel". 3/26/2008 . Edited 3/26/2008 #222 of the "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks! |
![]() Did ch. 5 and 6. Interesting character development! 3/26/2008 #232 chapters of "Stolen Flight" please. |
![]() Done first two chapters of Stolen Flight - hope my commets hepled you Dexterity :) 3/28/2008 . Edited by Fractured Illusion, 3/28/2008 #242 chapters of 'Destiny and I: A New Man' please. (edited by Frac, because you can't request more than you reviewed) |
![]() Reviewed prologue + 2 chapters of 'Destiny and I.' 3/30/2008 . Edited 3/30/2008 #25Someone do the same for A Thousand Bayonets, if they'd like. :) |
![]() Done 2 chaps of "A Thousand Bayonets" 3/31/2008 #262 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks! |
![]() Reviewed first three chapters of "Heart of the Driechtnacht". Please review three of http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2329899/1/Baptism_of_Fire 3/31/2008 . Edited 4/01/2008 #27Thanks! |
![]() Done 3 chapters of "Baptism of Fire" - dumb computer kept losing my reviews (Argh!) 4/01/2008 . Edited 4/01/2008 #283 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please. Thanks! |
![]() Done Chapter 3 of Heart of the Driechtnacht. Good work on that, a few things, but very well-written.:D 4/01/2008 . Edited 4/01/2008 #29Please review Transcendental. Thanks. |
![]() (sorry, I clicked reply instead of edit) 4/01/2008 . Edited 4/01/2008 #30 |
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