This is place to come if you want reviews for a story that has at least 4 chapters, and the review type is "easy fix", aka a simple review.

Only stories go here. Not poems.

You can use whichever RG you like: Stories or Multi-chap. Just because your story is multi-chap does not mean you cannot use the Story RGs. These RGs are all voluntary.

For Review Game rules and some fun facts, go to "Read this first!". Read the rules for the Review Games as well as the rules about Multi-chap.

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FAQ: » Two or more people have reviewed the same person! What happens now? Answer

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Moving on, this is the basic structure of the Review Game: Multi-chap:

Person 1: Please review "This."

Person 2: I reviewed two chapters of "This." ch 5-6. please review two chapters of "That."

Person 3: I reviewed five chapters of "That." (chapters 1-5), please review five chapters of "Yay."

Person 4: I reviewed five chapters of "Yay.", ch 3-7. "Story" only has four chapters, so please review all of them.

Person 5: I am reviewing 4 ch of "Story". Edit: Done, ch 10-14.! Please review 4 chapters of "Singular"

As you can see, you need to enter a story with at least 4 chapters. The request of reviews has to be at least 2 or max 6.

You review the above person with how much he/she has requested or more and then request the same amount for yourself, or less (not more! If you want to request more, you review the person above more). You can't state what you want reviewed until you have completed all reviews. But you can make a holding post, stating you are reviewing. This lasts for max 2 days. When you are done with the reviews, edit into your post what you yourself want reviewed.

First person to post in this topic gets a freebie of a minimum of 2 reviews. As they have not reviewed, they cannot request. So the second to participate decide how much they wish to review within the established range.

But! If you have1 chapter with 4000 words or more: your max request can only be 4 chapters.

And if you have more than 1 chapter with 4000 words or more: Max request - 3 chapters

Advice:

Don't try this if you are new to the review games. It will be too confusing. Start with regular review games Easy Fix.

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For Easy Fix, your review needs to fulfill these requirements, otherwise you will not be seen as someone who has fulfilled their obligation and you can thus not be seen as a participate.

REVIEW REQUIREMENTS:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

Restating the same thing does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece because I thought it was very enjoyable" does not count as a why. "I really enjoyed the piece. It was enjoyable because the characters were relateable" does count as a why.

Phrases like "no mistakes" or "good job" do not count as a like. If you cannot find a dislike then write another distinct like do not say "there are no mistakes." That will not count. Saying "good job" or other similar phrases will not count as a like on a piece either. It is not specific.

Here are templates to ensure your review clearly fulfills the qualifications, you can use any of them if you choose, but they are not required:

1) I liked... because... I disliked... because....

2) I liked... because... I liked... because...

3)I disliked... because... I disliked... because...

If you are still unsure on how the review requirement for Easy Fix is viewed, look at this post for guidance.

Note: Commenting on summary and/or title will not count.

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LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

The Last Summer, please Mar 04th 2008, 3:58am . Edited Mar 04th 2008, 4:00am #4

Three chapters of "Letting Go" please.

Thank you.

Kaiyako K. Mar 08th 2008, 8:23am #5

three chapters of princess if you can, or three chapters of my others if you can't. thanks!

-Lefty Mar 09th 2008, 4:40pm #6

three chapters of the Puppet Queen please. Mar 09th 2008, 5:35pm . Edited Mar 10th 2008, 12:58pm #7

Three chapters of "Another Little Mermaid", please. Mar 10th 2008, 3:50pm #8

Three chapters of "Letting Go" please.

Thank you.

Kaiyako K. Mar 11th 2008, 3:51am #9

"Heart of the Driechtnacht" - 2 chapters please.

Thanks! Mar 12th 2008, 2:52pm #10

"Another Little Mermaid", please. Two chapters. Mar 12th 2008, 6:06pm #11

"Letting Go" <--- Two Chapters please. Preferably the third and fourth.

Thanks.

Kaiyako Mar 13th 2008, 3:57am . Edited Mar 13th 2008, 10:52pm #12

If it is, then Dream Angel, preferably the later chapters... Thanks... Mar 13th 2008, 11:25am . Edited Mar 13th 2008, 11:32am #13

The first two or three chapters of 'Dark Bloodline' please. (chapter two is really long sorry, im going to split it somtime in the future) Mar 13th 2008, 1:28pm . Edited Mar 13th 2008, 1:30pm #14

Reviewed the first two chapters of Dark Bloodline. It's a decent start. n.n

Chapters 1 and 2 of ARCE please. Skip the prologue (it's too short to review XD). Mar 19th 2008, 10:18am #15

can anyone do chapters five and six of "Three Guys in One Coffee Cup"?

Thanks. Mar 19th 2008, 4:56pm #16

2 chapters of Daughter of the Sea please, Mar 20th 2008, 6:30am #17

four chappies of three guys in one cofee cup pleasee. Mar 21st 2008, 3:28am #18

Four Chapters Of ---> "Letting Go" please.

Thank you,

-Kaiyako K. Mar 21st 2008, 8:04am #19

Preferrably all four chapters of "Stolen Flight". If it's not physically possible (as in you've reviewed some chapters already), then do as many as you can (I think the minimum for this RG is 2 reviews though) Mar 24th 2008, 3:58pm . Edited Mar 24th 2008, 5:25pm #20

I want the same for Dream Angel, four reviews, please... Mar 25th 2008, 1:13pm . Edited Mar 25th 2008, 1:46pm #21

2 of the "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks! Mar 26th 2008, 10:52am . Edited Mar 26th 2008, 11:33am #22

2 chapters of "Stolen Flight" please. Mar 26th 2008, 8:17pm #23

2 chapters of 'Destiny and I: A New Man' please.

(edited by Frac, because you can't request more than you reviewed) Mar 28th 2008, 5:07am . Edited by Fractured Illusion, Mar 28th 2008, 6:03am #24

Someone do the same for A Thousand Bayonets, if they'd like. :) Mar 30th 2008, 1:16pm . Edited Mar 30th 2008, 1:43pm #25

2 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks! Mar 31st 2008, 1:41am #26

Thanks! Mar 31st 2008, 3:10am . Edited Apr 01st 2008, 12:54am #27

3 of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks! Apr 01st 2008, 10:44am . Edited Apr 01st 2008, 11:34am #28

Please review Transcendental. Thanks. Apr 01st 2008, 3:18pm . Edited Apr 01st 2008, 3:18pm #29

And, if I may, I'd like to stake my claim on this one - I've just begun my three reviews... Apr 01st 2008, 3:21pm . Edited Apr 01st 2008, 3:24pm #31

Could someone please review all three chapters of "Fight or Flight KHG Challenge 3"? I know what I wrote regarding Tane's request, and that this thread's for stories with 4+ chapters, *but* in my defense my story's over 13k words. I know this isn't *that* much, but my story "The Séance" is only 9K and (before FictionPress decided to randomly remove all my section breaks and I re-submitted the chapters) used to be split into 6 chapters. It's now only three because longer chapters means the reader has more to review each time. :-)

So... could the rules be slightly bent? :-) If not, then someone please review three of "Baptism of Fire". :-) Apr 01st 2008, 4:17pm #33

Someone else want to take a crack at chs 1-2 of The Secret Steps? Apr 01st 2008, 8:28pm #34

Chapters 7-8 of "Letting Go" please.

Thank You,

Kaiyako K. Apr 01st 2008, 10:32pm #35

read and reviewed 3 chapters of "letting go."

mary sue, please. :) thanks!

-Lefty

Read and reviewed the first 3 chapters of 'Mary Sue' - very good start and I hope the plot and characters develop :)

Can someone read and review Chapters 1-3 of 'Kayley's Top 10 Rants' please. Thanks xD

Reviewed 4 chapters of "'Kayley's Top 10 Rants".

Can someone review 4 chapters of "A gift"? (Any 4 chapters is fine)

Reviewed 4 chapter of "A Gift"

4 chapter of "Loose Ends" Please

reviewed 4 chapters of "loose ends." (reviving the multi-chap easy fix!! :D)

please review 4 chapters of "mary sue" please... (last 4 chapters would be nice... and considering there are only 5 chapters, that shouldn't be TOO hard... ;P) thank you!!

-Lefty

Reviwed 4 chapters of "Mary Sue".

Please review 4 chapters of "A gift",preferably any chapter except 1-4,but I don't mind if you can't.

I did "Gift" Chapters 10, 16, 17 and 35 (with 34/36 in one post)

I'd like Ghost Writer - four chapters - you can start at the beginning or review any four.

read and reviewed "ghost writer." i would recommend it. :)

"mary sue," please. thanks!

-Lefty

Done 4 chapters of "Mary Sue".

4 chapters of "Heart of the Driechtnacht", please.

Thanks!

ATTENTION!

We have inforced a new rule that will determine how many chapters you can request! This is due to RG Multi having been clogged up because of too massive chapters in the past, so now we aim to put a stop to that.

New rule is Rule 17:

17) There is a restriction to the above rule. If your request includes a chapter with more than 4,000 words, you can only request up to 4 chapters max. Even if you had to review a six chaptered story. And if you have more than one requested chapter over 4,000 words, you can only request a maximum of 3 chapters.

To put it more simple:

1 chapter with 4,000 words or more: Max request - 4 chapters

More than 1 chapter with 4,000 words or more: Max request - 3 chapters

This rule has no retroactive influence. Only the new posts/players will be affected by this.

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Esther Jade is up Heart of Driechtnacht (4 chapters)

reviewing 5 of 'heart of driechtnacht'

pls review five chapters of 'in the end'

thanks :D

Reviewing 5 chapters of "In The End". So far I can't take my eyes off it.

4 chapters of "Experiment Thirteen", please.

reviewing 5 of experiment thirteen

5 of in the end pls :D

Read 5 chapters of In The End

Four chapters of Ghost Writer. My preference is later chapters, but I'm flexible.

okay so i said it would be a freebie but this is too good to pass up

reviewing all chapters of the Ghost writer

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someone please review 6 chapters of 'in the end'?

thanks :D

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