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Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed 6 chapters of "In the End".

Can someone review 6 chapters of "A gift"? Preferably not the first few more of in the tens if possible.

#51 May 13th, 4:22pm . Edited May 13th, 5:40pm
artificial destiny

i jst reviewed a chapter of 'a gift' for another post

so i'll review another 6 :)

6 of 'in the end' please?

#52 May 13th, 8:06pm
Narc

Reviewed six chapters of 'In the End'.

I've got a couple chapters over 4000, so three chapters of Roanoke, please (unless you feel like doing more, of course).

#53 May 19th, 7:54am
Harmonic Discord

Reviewed Roanoke... nicely done! :)

I, too, have chapters over 4000, so... 3 of Sylvian Outlaws, please? (Preferably some of the later ones, but I understand if you can't. And of course, if you want to review more, I certainly won't say no...)

#54 May 20th, 10:51am . Edited May 20th, 3:34pm
Narc

Reviewed three chapters of Sylvian Outlaws. Sorry I couldn't do later ones, first. I haven't read the beginning yet, and I enjoyed the story, so I didn't want to ruin it by skipping it. I plan to continue reading anyway, though, so I'll definitely get to the later ones.

Three chapters of Roanoke, please.

#55 May 20th, 8:10pm
Harmonic Discord

Reviewed chapters 4-6 of Roanoke... excellent!

Three chapters of Sylvian Outlaws, please! (Preferably later ones, though I understand if you can't).

#56 May 20th, 8:23pm . Edited May 20th, 9:26pm
Mercyette

Reviewed chapters 2-4 of Sylvian Outlaws. Going great!

Could someone please do three chapters of Leaning Towards Love? Thanks!

#57 May 23rd, 1:16pm
Harmonic Discord

Reviewed chapters 1 and 7-8 of LTL... nice.

3 of The Sylvian Outlaws, please? Preferably later chapters, but I understand if you can't.

#58 May 23rd, 1:48pm . Edited May 23rd, 2:58pm
rassoodock

did 3 of the sylvian outlaws.

3-4 of orange, por favor.

#59 May 25th, 12:52pm
soojinyeh

Did Orange. Eccentric and captivating.

3 chapters of Goddess, please.

#60 May 27th, 8:54pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

soojinyeh, your reviews for Orange were lacking. Particularly a "why". A lot of statements and reactions do not fill out the easy fix requirements. One like + why, and a dislike + why must be given in the reviews also.

Because of this you cannot be counted as a participant.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

rassoodock with Orange (3-4 ch)

#61 May 28th, 12:28am
Harmonic Discord

Reviewed chapters 1-3 of Orange.

Three chapters of The Sylvian Outlaws, s'il vous plait!

#62 May 28th, 9:34pm . Edited May 28th, 9:54pm
Equilibrium

Done 3 chapters of 'The Sylvian Outlaws'.

3 chapters of 'Experiment Thirteen', please. (Preferably the latest three, but anything's fine.)

#63 May 28th, 11:10pm
Teffie

I reviewed three chapters of "Experiment Thirteen." (I'll review the later chapters sometime in the future.)

"Chains of Fate," anyone? I only have two chapters up.

#64 Jun 01st, 4:49pm
artificial destiny

reviewing chains of fate

'in the end' pls?

#65 Jun 01st, 5:08pm
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewing "In the end". (Darn! I reviewed all of her chaps...so is it possible that my post be deleted?)

Cathy Thompson, please!

#66 Jun 01st, 5:16pm . Edited Jun 01st, 5:21pm
Narc

-- OFF TOPIC --

So, artificial destiny is still the one up for review?

Guys, this is why the rule is that you review -before- you post. It should be 'reviewed', not 'reviewing'. That's how confusions like this happened.

--END OFF TOPIC --

I believe artificial destiny is up with 'In the End'

#67 Jun 01st, 5:45pm
SpaZzOuTguRl

two chapters of Cathy Thompson.

Would someone PLEASE review Sword Through Her Heart?

I've been trying to get people to look at it all day and stumbled on this forum.

#68 Jun 01st, 6:06pm
artificial destiny

wait im confused

someone should have reviewed me.

help?

#69 Jun 01st, 6:33pm
artificial destiny

actually vampire chick didnt review my last few chapters

if its alright, she should review whatever she hasnt yet read.

#70 Jun 01st, 6:35pm
Narc

-- OFF TOPIC --

Okay. Not a mod, but I think it's still artificial destiny's turn. It wasn't vampire chick's turn, but Spazz's review doesn't seem to meet the requirement anyway. So no problem there.

-- END OFF TOPIC --

Artifical destiny still up for review (I'm pretty sure)

#71 Jun 01st, 6:45pm
SpaZzOuTguRl

what are the requirements?

#72 Jun 01st, 8:05pm
Narc

-- OFF TOPIC --

It's all detailed in the first post of this topic and in the topic titled 'read this first'

-- END OFF TOPIC --

#73 Jun 01st, 8:14pm
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Oh for goodness sake..

1. No off topic post without stating who is next!

2. ALWAYS read the rules and the first post!

3. "Reviewing" posts are okay if you know you will actually be able to review it.

4. No stories that has less than 4 chapters are allowed to enter!

What is the morale of this rant post?

READ THE RULES OR YOU'RE OUT! It's the only respectable thing to do!

Thank you and goodbye.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Artificial destiny seems to be up, if I understand this mess well enough, with her story "In the end" (2 chapters)

Edit: Wow, SO SORRY Art for misspelling your name into something ENTIRELY different. I think its the second time I've spelled intelligence rather than destiny.. T_T *goes into Corner of Shame*

#74 Jun 02nd, 3:28am . Edited Jun 03rd, 3:52am
Harmonic Discord

Reviewed 2 chapters of In the End - nicely done! (Artificial Intelligence?! Lol!)

2 chapters of The Sylvian Outlaws, please? (Preferably later ones, but I understand if you can't).

#75 Jun 02nd, 7:10pm
J-Brown

Reviewed two chapters of the Sylvian Outlaws. I hope I'm doing this right....

Two chapters of Mac Vorennin, is what I want, if someone could manage... I don't want to be a burden.

#76 Jun 04th, 9:50pm
Harmonic Discord

--OFF TOPIC--

Thank you, J-Brown; I really appreciate your reviews. However, I'm afraid they don't meet the review requirements:

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

This goes for each review. Don't worry; it's only your first time here - you'll catch on fast ^_^

--END OFF TOPIC--

The Sylvian Outlaws, 2 chapters, is still up.

#77 Jun 04th, 10:45pm
Jesusfreak43091

Reviewed The Sylvian Outlaws

could someone review all 5 chaps of Full Moon please?

#78 Jun 07th, 9:20am . Edited Jun 07th, 10:23am
Sexy vampirechick

Reviewed 5 chaps of "Full moon".

Can someone do 5 chaps of "Cathy Thompson"?

#79 Jun 07th, 12:50pm . Edited Jun 07th, 2:00pm
Equilibrium

Reviewing "Full Moon".

4 chapters of "Experiment Thirteen", please?

#80 Jun 08th, 3:17am
Jesusfreak43091

OFF TOPIC

Equilibrium...i never got your reviews

END OFF TOPIC

Sexy vampirechick is still up with 5 chaps of "Cathy Thompson"

#81 Jun 09th, 11:50am
Fractured Illusion

--- OFF TOPIC ---

Equilibrium reviewed Cathy Thompson, as supposed to, so there should naturally not be any reviews for your Full Moon, Jesusfreak.

Equilibrium is up.

--- END OF OFF TOPIC ---

Equilibrium is up with 4 chapters of "Experiment Thirteen"

#82 Jun 09th, 4:55pm . Edited Jun 09th, 6:03pm
Jesusfreak43091

OFF TOPIC

oh ok. in his/her post it says he/she was reviewing Full Moon so yea...but it's all good =]

END OFF TOPIC

Equilibrium is up with 4 chapters of "Experiment Thirteen"

#83 Jun 09th, 5:40pm
Fractured Illusion

--- NOTICE! ----

Important!

All Review Game threads have a new mandatory rule. You must all state what story/poem you reviewed in the post you make. This is manifested in Rule 4.

4) In your post, you are required to state what story/poem you want reviewed. Saying "I reviewed" is not adequate. The title of the story/poem needs to be stated.

You have to follow this, it is not optional. This is make it easier to see when people reviewed the wrong pieces, etc. Write "I reviewed "Hey you", now please review "Me"", and not "Reviewed. Review "Me"".

For questions or possible problems, go to Problems/Question thread.

If there is anything you wish to change, go to Suggestion topic.

General comments are to be located in Off Topic!

--- END OF NOTICE ---

Equilibrium is up with 4 chapters of Experiment Thirteen

#84 Jun 19th, 10:10am
Lorki

I reviewed 4 chapters of 'Experiment Thirteen'

Review my story The Dog King Please?

#85 Jun 25th, 2:27pm
inkspatters

Reviewed four chapters of 'The Dog King'

Could someone please review 'Cinderella's Real Name Was...'

#86 Jul 03rd, 9:29pm
Equilibrium

---OFF TOPIC---

I'm sorry, Lorki. I didn't receive your reviews. Now what?

--- END OFF TOPIC---

Four chapters of 'Cinderella's Real Name Was...' still up.

#87 Jul 07th, 9:59am
Teffie

Reviewed three chapters of Cinderella's Real Name Was.

Three chapters of Chains of Fate, please. (Chapters two, three, and four preferred.) Thanks.

Off-topic:

There were several chapters over 4000 words, so it's okay that I only reviewed three, right?

/Off-topic.

#88 Jul 07th, 1:21pm . Edited Jul 07th, 1:30pm
Imaginary Rose

Reviewed four chapters of Cinderella's Real Name Was.

Please review any four chapters of Remember, Remember.

#89 Jul 07th, 1:57pm
Teffie

OFF-TOPIC:

Rule 10 applies. Inkspatters owes me three reviews.

/ OFF-TOPIC.

Imaginary Rose Productions is still up with four chapters of Remember, Remember.

#90 Jul 07th, 9:20pm
Stargirl Lilac

Reviewed four chapters of Remember, Remember.

Please review four chapters of Disconsolate.

#91 Jul 07th, 10:24pm
RisanF

Reviewed 4 chapters of "Disconsolate". A little bit hazy on the structure, but solid writing style nonetheless and character flow.

Please review 3 chapters of the original "Different and Cool". A request: I'd really like one of those 3 reviews to be of the last (5th) chapter, since it's best that the story be taken in as a whole and read the whole way through. The other 2 reviews can be for whatever chapters you want; I leave that to your judgment.

#92 Jul 08th, 8:37am
Lorki

Off Topic

-----

So sorry Equilibrium!!!

You should have them now, I don't know what happened... that was awhile ago

I'll totally check to make sure they are all there!!! Sorry again.

----

End off topic

RisanF is up with 3 chapters of the original "Different and Cool"

(always state who is next when you make an off topic post!)

#93 Jul 08th, 2:46pm . Edited by Fractured Illusion, Jul 08th, 2:50pm
ohthevoices

Reviewed "Different and Cool." Nice job!

Any 4 chapters of "Opaque," please.

#94 Jul 14th, 8:51pm
Teffie

Done. Reviewed chapters 3-6 of Opaque. Four chapters of Chains of Fate, please!

#95 Jul 16th, 10:48am
Lost Shepherd

I reviewed 5 chapters of "Chains of Fate".

I would like someone to review 5 chapters of "Lost and Found" Thank you very much in advance.

#96 Jul 27th, 9:45am
Loveless To Self

Reviewed 5 chapters for "Lost and Found"

please review 4 chapters of "Wanderer"

#97 Jul 27th, 10:29pm
Teffie

off-topic/

Sorry, Lost Shepard and Loveless To Self, but both of you left one review on the story you were reviewing. You're supposed to review each chapter you read, not read them and then post one review. So your reviews did not meet the requirements.

/off-topic.

I think this means that I am still up with four chapters of Chains of Fate.

#98 Jul 28th, 10:48am
Lost Shepherd

Off topic/

My sincerest apologies for the misunderstanding. I have now reviewed the first four chapters seperately, and I believe that my original review constitutes as a review for the 5th chapter. Again, I'm sorry for the mix-up.

/Off topic.

I believe (and hope) that this fullfills all requirements for 5 chapters of "Chains of Fate".

#99 Jul 28th, 12:45pm
Loveless To Self

My apologies as well. I have now adequately reviewed "Lost and Found" to the fifth power. That is, five chapters.

Please review four chapters of "Wanderer" thanks in advance.

#100 Jul 28th, 8:16pm


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