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OhMsYumi's story only has 3 chapters. It was not a valid piece to play in the Multi-Chap threads because the minimum number of chapters needed to play is 4 unless mod permission was given to play with less than that. After checking the past 5 pages of the Problems/Questions thread, I do not see mod permission given.

Unfortunately, this means Mintiee x's reviews do not qualify even though they meet the requirements. I would highly suggest OhMsYumi to return the favor outside of the Review Game as a common courtesy. However, we, at the Review Game, are not responsible for ensuring such reviews are paid - this is a private matter between the 2 parties. Good luck!

(As a side note, OhMsYumi's review to mikey's chapter 6 did not meet the review requirements as it has no whys.)

The player will be rolled back to mikey magee.

If anyone has a question/comment about my ruling, please visit the Problems/Questions thread. Thanks.

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mikey magee is next with 6 chapters of "Fireflies Sleep In the Grass"

At the moment Firelies is being reviewed by KagamiNoRyukuKai and they will post when done.

I have reviewed all 6 Chapters of Fireflies Sleep In The Grass, short but good :)

Not exactly sure how multichap work, but can someone please review Illusionary Flames of an Imperishable Summer? Chapter 2-4 prefered (or however many I qualify for/that you like XP)

Heeeey, you reviewed 6 chapters so you get up to 6 reviews - I'll do all 5 of your Illusionary Flames of an Imperishable Summer, if that's OK. :)

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Although I've only seen this message (and after you've reviewed four) like tonight, I'd be extremely grateful if you review all of them. Well, I'm already extremely grateful that you had already done most, so thank you ^^

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Reviewed Chapters 1-5 of Illusionary Flames of an Imperishable Summer.

Please review Chapters 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 of Soul Catcher.

Will review Soul Catcher

Edit: Finished reviewing Soul Catcher

Can someone review Chapters 3, 5-9 of 'The Morphine' ?

Edit again: Also, to the person reviewing, If your going to point out minor typos, you can do that, but I'd prefer that you do more then that, because usually typos can be fixed easyly. I'd rather have you point out things that are harder to fix, like bad dialoge, confusion, or pace issues.

So no one has taken up Multi-Chap?

Shotgun!

And you only reviewed 5 chapters, so you can only request 5, therefore I will review Chapters 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9.

EDIT: Reviewed the above chapters.

Please review any 5 chapters of Soul Catcher apart from the first two!

I'll review 5 chapters of Soul Catcher. :) [I intend to review ch 3-7] Edit: I reviewed ch 3, 4, 5, 6 and 7 of Soul Catcher!

Please review 4 chapters of Machinate :)

(and like Kristin Teabag I'd prefer if the focus was on something other than spelling)

Reviewing Ch 1-4 of Machinate. Glad you don't want spelling help, that's not my specialty!

Edit: 4 Chapters of Machinae reviewed. Pretty interesting, tightly written tale.

I'd appreciate a review of Ch 1-4 of Firefly.

Monday's child is fair of face, Tuesday's child is full of grace...

Reviewing Firefly. Will edit this post once I'm done. Probably in about half an hour, depending on the chpater lenghts.

EDIT: reviewed 4 chapters of Firefly. Could someone please review 4 chapters of A Few White Lies?

I'll review 4 chapters of A Few White Lies.

EDIT: Ok, done. Reviews for chapters 2, 3, 5 and 6 of Do I Laugh Or Cry, Please :)Miss chapter one and four because they're short diary entries, and they dont really need to be read.

-M.

Reviewing Do I Laugh Or Cry (the word 'New Zealand' in the first paragraph caught my eye =p)

EDIT:

Reviewed 6 chapters of Do I Laugh or Cry. Please Review 4 chapters of Rough Diamond.

I will review Rough Diamond.

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Whoops, I just realized that I've already reviewed chapter one of "Rough Diamond". I've PM'ed Xephia proposing an arrangement where I review the remaining 3 chapters of "Rough Diamond" as well as one chapter from her other story, "A Few White Lies". If she has any problem with this arrangement, I will of course pull out of the game for this round.

Edit: I've received a PM from Xephia and she is okay with this arrangement :]

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Currently reviewing 3 chapters of Rough Diamond and 1 chapter of A Few White Lies

I hope I'm not interrupting the flow, but since the last topic looks like it's in the process of reviewing, I hope I'm not breaking some sort of rule interrupting the flow.

Well, I read four chapters of Rough Diamnond. I'd like the first three chapters of The Gathering Clouds reviewed.

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I sincerely apologize for neglecting to give even one review in time; the internet connection on my computer died pretty much the day after I posted saying I'd review, and I haven't gotten it back yet. My connection to the internet has been severely cut to my sixth period class and my mom's laptop (on which I am currently) when she lets me, which isn't often. Again, I apologize.

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J-Brown is up next with chapters 1-3 of "The Gathering Clouds."

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no worries, Lucy. Thanks for letting us know!

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Reviewing 3 chapters of The Gathering Clouds

EDIT; reviewed 3 chapters of The Gathering Clouds. Please review any 3 chapters of Rough Diamond, or if you have reviewed it already, any 3 chapters of A Few White Lies.

Will review 'Rough Diamond'

Can someone review 'The Morphine' Chapters

7, 8, 9, 11, 13, and 14

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It seems like Kristen Teabag only reviewed 3 chaps of "Rough Diamond" and is only allowed to request 3 chaps to be reviewed per the following rule:

You review the above person with how much he/she has requested or more and then request the same amount for yourself, or less (not more! If you want to request more, you review the person above more).

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Kristen Teabag is still up with "The Morphine"

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But weren't her/his chapters longer? Mine are only about around .5k words each...1.5k at the most.

Reviewing "Morphine".

Would someone please review chapters 1, 2, 3 of "In Our Element"? Thankee.

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The Five...Erm, I'd review you but I don't think I can, did you get Mod permission to have only 3 chapters? I think you have to have a minimum of 4 chap. to participate in multi-chap? Unless I'm wrong? Meh, I'm confused! WAIT--I think I got it, okay, the person before The Five only had 3 chapters reviewed (against rules or not??) and so therefore...The Five can only request 3 chapters. SO, now that I have that straightened out...phew, okay...

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The Five is not a player because he/she only has 3 available chapters in his/her story. You must have a minimum of 4 chapters in order to be a player.

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Kristin Teabag is up next with 3 chapters of The Morphine

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Okay so Teabag's are valid because they got Mod permission for 3 chapters?

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Teabag with Morphine up next

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I think I get why you're confused -- but Kristin Teabag's story has 38 chapters. She REQUESTED five, but since she only reviewed three of the previous player's story, she could only request three chapters. You can request anywhere from 2 to 6 chapters, but you cannot request someone review a story that has less than 4 chapters. Kristin didn't need Mod permission to play, because she has over four chapters for that story. Does that make it a bit clearer?

Also please state who is next after every post.

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Kristin Teabag is up with 3 chapters of The Morphine

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Okay sorry yeah that clears everything up. Thanks...

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Reviewed The Morphine 3 chapters.

Review for Chapters 1-3 of Vampire and The Romantics would be much appreciated!

Reviewed Chapters 1-3 of Vampire and the Romantics.

Please review the prologue, chapter 1, and chapter 3 of PhoenixDragon!! Thanx lotz

Reviewed prologue and C1 of Phoenix Dragon [Will review C3 very soon(Sorry, Im short on time)]

Please review Chapters 1-4 of Forbidden: A modern day rewrite of 'The Little Mermaid'

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@mtp2014 - As you only reviewed 3 chapters of Alyona's story, you can only request 3 chapters yourself. If you want to request more, you'll have to review more.

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mtp2014 is up next with chapters 1-3 of Forbidden: A modern day rewrite of 'The Little Mermaid.

Read and reviewed Chapters 1-4 of Forbidden: A modern day rewrite of 'The Little Mermaid

A review of any 4 chapters of Vampire and The Romantics would be much appreciated!

Reviewed Chapters 4-7 [I just remembered there was a prologue] from Vampire and the Romantics.

Edit: Review 4 chappies PhoenixDragon please!!! x

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@Alyona - as Lundgren reviewed 4 chapters, and requested 4 chapters be reviewed, you must review 4 chapters. If you don't wish to request 4 yourself you don't have to, but Lundgren reviewed the required amount, and so should recieve them in return.

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Delineations . Alyona is up next with 4 chapters of PhoenixDragon, however she also owes E.S. Lundgren a 4th review for any chapter of Vampire and The Romantics.

Reviewed four chapters of PhoenixDragon.

A review for any three chapters of Vampire and The Romantics would be great!

Will review 3 chapters of Vampire and The Romantics!

Edit: Done reviewing. Will someone review chapter 14, 16, 17 of The Morphine

I'd already reviewed ch 17 of the morphine, so I reviewed chapters 6 through 16 instead, hope that's ok. : )

If it is, i'd love someone to review any two chapters of A Puppet in the Hand

Thank you!

Will review A Puppet in the Hand

Edit: Reviewed four chapters of A Puppet in the Hand.

May someone please review four chapters of Twisted Smiles, preferably 2, 3, 4, and 5?

Reviewing Twisted Smiles

Edit: Reviewed six chapters of Twisted Smiles

Six chapters of Mal'ethil, please :)

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