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Fractured Illusion
Topic: Off Topic - The Grandchild!
And here is the third generation of Off Topic!

What a wonder! Chat, talk, spam, and invent new words! Whatever! Just vote in my polls when I feature them :P

#1 Mar 13th, 4:27pm . Edited Mar 26th, 3:34pm
Kyllorac
First to post?
#2 Mar 13th, 4:28pm
Arianna Sterling
Yay! I'm happy that I participated in reaching the grandchild!
#3 Mar 13th, 4:28pm
KnittingKneedle
new word...urm Scrimflopple
#4 Mar 13th, 4:28pm
Kyllorac
Yes! *does happy dance*

First post in thread beats virginity anyday. :P

#5 Mar 13th, 4:28pm
KnittingKneedle
tecnically post number 2
#6 Mar 13th, 4:29pm
Arianna Sterling
Scrimflopple. I like it.
#7 Mar 13th, 4:29pm
Fractured Illusion
I was first post!

Nyahahah! I am eternally first post!! :D

Ting tong what does new word mean?

#8 Mar 13th, 4:29pm
Fractured Illusion
Scrimflopple can almost compete with my prescencen
#9 Mar 13th, 4:30pm
Kyllorac
I meant first post after creator post, of course. :P No one beats t3h Frac at her own game. n.n
#10 Mar 13th, 4:31pm
KnittingKneedle
I don't know...give me definitions and I'll pick the best one
#11 Mar 13th, 4:31pm
Fractured Illusion
Scrimfobble can mean something with a pigeon...
#12 Mar 13th, 4:32pm
Arianna Sterling
Oh... Era will be back. It is garbage night. So, about 5 minutes.
#13 Mar 13th, 4:33pm
Fractured Illusion
The garbage has taken Era!!

I hope it is left in prescencens at least! (yes! I could use my totally made up word naturally!)

#14 Mar 13th, 4:35pm
Fractured Illusion
Kylie how is the reviewing going? :p

btw Era, i am reading yours. I was just side-tracked by off topic nyaha

#15 Mar 13th, 4:36pm
Kyllorac
So, how is prescencens pronounced?

I personally say it press-ken-sens. :P

#16 Mar 13th, 4:37pm
Fractured Illusion
I think its pronounced

press-en-sens

#17 Mar 13th, 4:38pm
Kyllorac
Still reading. n.n I shall be focusing on pointing out possible grammar thingums since I am very good with grammar.
#18 Mar 13th, 4:38pm
Arianna Sterling
I return! *does happy dance for reviews*
#19 Mar 13th, 4:40pm
Fractured Illusion
dont forget the other areas though, since it is to be a DEPTH review :P

wouldnt want to disqualify you are such massive reading :o

#20 Mar 13th, 4:40pm
Kyllorac
Fear not, Frac, for I have spent the last half hour reviewing only a quarter of the chapter. My review shall be very in-depth. *nods* But now, however, I must log off.

Until tomorrow, I bid the all farewell!

#21 Mar 13th, 4:58pm
Arianna Sterling
Honest reviews, with kindness! I like this.

I noticed a few of the things Kylie pointed out (i.e. 'back and forth' repetition). I've just been too lazy to switch out text yet.

#22 Mar 13th, 5:02pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Hey, for once I get to post on the first page!

*Does little strangled dance* my mom packed a bag of garbage that weighs as much as I do. It was so hard not to rip the bag!!!!

Era! We share garbage day! Weee!

#23 Mar 13th, 5:09pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
I'm still the only person who voted butt cheek....

Am I that weird? I'm normal...NORMAL, I TELL YOU!! *shakes violently* NORMAL!!!!!!

#24 Mar 13th, 5:12pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Seeing my lovely Gustave every time I post makes me want to marry him <3
#25 Mar 13th, 5:13pm
Arianna Sterling
I think I voted retinas... I really don't remember. But I'm glad you're here!

I was alone because people are reading my story!

#26 Mar 13th, 5:13pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
I think we can take over the top tonight!
#27 Mar 13th, 5:13pm
Arianna Sterling
Seeing my lovely Gustave every time I post makes me want to marry him <3

Yea... Who exactly is that?

#28 Mar 13th, 5:14pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Oh, cool, I thought I was alone too, and I was about to spam you all!

Lol, I'm still reading la yetie's story, it's taking forever because I have to read it, then translate it, then write what I think. I'm actually trying to give her a real review, because it's become such a habit for me. *Sighs* even if I did bad mouth her, I really have read much worse on here. I should give her a little credit for moderate originality, I suppose.

Though the plot is a lot like that of many romance novels I've read...crap! Did I just say I read romance novels?! Lies! Lies, I say!

#29 Mar 13th, 5:16pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
*gets excited to talk about Gustave*

Gustave Courbet is the painter who painted the self portrait that is my avatar! I saw his wing in the Met when I went on Tuesday, and I fell in love with this painting. It's a little less yellow in real life, but I think that it's a nice touch on the internet. He did an awful lot of vaginas, which is a little creepy, but...what can I say? He was a great painter, no matter how questionable his subject matter.

#30 Mar 13th, 5:19pm
Arianna Sterling
I like to not be alone.

And bad mouthing isn't horrible... Well, it is, but it was your starting that which caused people to read my work, so now you're getting me reviews.... In a roundabout way.

Romance is okay, sometimes. Nora Roberts, for instance, has humor on her side. Not just lovey-dovey, makes-me-wanna-lose-my-lunch stuff.

#31 Mar 13th, 5:20pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
You know, when you look at all our avatars, we look like such a diverse group.

And yet, we're all absolutely insane. Ah well. Great minds think alike.

#32 Mar 13th, 5:21pm
Arianna Sterling
He did an awful lot of vaginas, which is a little creepy, but...what can I say? He was a great painter, no matter how questionable his subject matter.

That would give me the creeps. I'm all for artistic freedom, but still. Great self-portrait though.

#33 Mar 13th, 5:21pm
Arianna Sterling
Too right, we do. A nuts-lookin guy, pretty blonde girl, penguin holding a bazooka, whatever frac switched to, ting's little dog...
#34 Mar 13th, 5:22pm
Fractured Illusion
I reviewed nooooow! :D

*frac is goood*

#35 Mar 13th, 5:25pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Heheheh, I'm spamming and talking to you at the same time! So fun.

Always glad to get you reviews!! My big mouth seems to get a lot of things. I got Frac to advertise my forum, for one! Now people are bound to come join! Wooo!

Yeah, I don't even read real authors writing romance, though...Nora Roberts? Heard of her, but since I pretend not to read that stuff, I've never actually checked her out. I'll see if I can find any of her stuff on the internet if I can tear myself away from here. (Yeah, I know, I'm cheap, but a library lets people read books for free too, so they're just as bad). Anyway, I only read my mom's ancient Harlequin books when I've read everything else in the house multiple times. I actually started checking out fp to get away from that.

My point is...I'm not cultured.

#36 Mar 13th, 5:26pm
Fractured Illusion
And adore my new avatar! It is not as obnoxioua as my first scrubs icon, but not as colorless as the previous :D
#37 Mar 13th, 5:26pm
Arianna Sterling
Oh, scrubs. I love that show, so I shoulda known.

Urgh... It says I have a new review (prolly yours, frac) but it won't show it to me. Nooo!!!

#38 Mar 13th, 5:28pm
Fractured Illusion
Bohoo. Frac is alone.

So Frac is leaving.

Goodbye!

#39 Mar 13th, 5:28pm
Arianna Sterling
What!? I'm here!
#40 Mar 13th, 5:30pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
How are you alone? We've been spamming nonstop! It's still hasn't shown up?

Eh, not spamming. Talking. Riiiight.

"Well, you know what the problem is... You've got it set to M for mini, when it should be set to W for WUMBO."

Okay, now that last sentence might have been spam. God, I love that Spongebob epi.

#41 Mar 13th, 5:31pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Dooot de doo.
#42 Mar 13th, 5:32pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Siiiiinging in the rain...yes, SIIIINging in the rain!
#43 Mar 13th, 5:33pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
See, this is what happens when I'm left alone.
#44 Mar 13th, 5:33pm
Arianna Sterling
Why, exactly, are we singing in the rain? Is it cause it's fun?
#45 Mar 13th, 5:34pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
I DON'T WANNA WAIT....FOR OUR LIVE, TO BE OVAAAAAAA

blahdidah, doo doo dooooo, dooo doo dooooo, doo doooooo......

#46 Mar 13th, 5:34pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Why, exactly, are we singing in the rain? Is it cause it's fun? Yay! Not alone! But there's no reason. I'm just having fun with a keyboard while I try to capture the mood of trying to write a story where my love interest mysteriously changes genders.
#47 Mar 13th, 5:35pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
Whoops, I put a typo in that song.

Oh well.

#48 Mar 13th, 5:36pm
Arianna Sterling
...Changes genders? Do I want to know?
#49 Mar 13th, 5:37pm
theflyingcrabsareeatingmyhair
It's not like I knew the words anyway.

Sad, that I've memorized entire episodes of a show about a sponge that lives in a pineapple with a snail, but I can't remember a song that almost everyone knows.

I guess....it's just my...um....I dunno.

#50 Mar 13th, 5:37pm


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