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Topic: Fight For the Freebie
This is the place you go when you are either willing to give away free reviews, or you feel in the mood to win one. The review requirement is Easy Fix, aka a simple review.

Both stories and poems go in this topic.

Anyone can give away freebies, and anyone can compete for freebies.

For Fight For the Freebie Rules, go to "Read This First!"

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Moving on, this is the basic structure of the competition:

Freebie 1: I give one free review to anyone who can guess my country!

1: Russia?

Freebie: Bingo, 1! Spot on! What do you want reviewed?

1: My poem "Animal"

Freebie 1: CLOSED

Freebie 2: I give 3 reviews to the person who posts here first! (I only review stories)

2: Me! Please review "Skyscrapers"

Freebie 2: CLOSED

Only one competition for free review(s) can go on at a time. There is a 5 day maximum limit to them. After that time, they close and a new may begin. The review-giver must speak in bold when he opens a new competition and in bold when he closes it (but not in-between). The review-giver ask a question or for a action. Anyone who wants may then try to answer/fulfill the action, in order to win the free review.

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REVIEW REQUIREMENTS

You need to state one thing you liked and *why*, and one thing you didn't like/could be improved, and *why*. Giving more feedback is not prohibited, but giving less than this is. Flaming is also prohibited. Being constructive is not.

If you absolutely can only find good or less good things to say, then please state two things you liked and *why*, or two things you didn't like and *why*. The review will be seen as invalid otherwise.

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LET THE GAMES BEGIN!

#1 Mar 20th, 4:32am . Edited Mar 25th, 7:32pm
Fractured Illusion
I give a free review to anyone who can guess what famous cartoon character is on my panties! :D

(and wohoo, we are number one!!)

#2 Mar 20th, 4:34am . Edited Mar 20th, 4:35am
concerto49
Hello Kitty.
#3 Mar 20th, 4:37am
Fractured Illusion
Nope!

>:D

Hint: NOT an animal

#4 Mar 20th, 4:39am
concerto49
Cartoon character and not an animal, but a person is an animal strictly speaking. So a famous cartoon character that is not animal. Hm interesting - something that is famou, cartoon, goes on panties...interesting...

It's going to be really hard as I believe it's Disney or the type related that I don't watch. I was actually going to guess Melody next or anyone Sanrio.

Wait! What is not animal? Does human count as animal?

Thomas the Tank Engine

#5 Mar 20th, 4:43am
Fractured Illusion
Human does not count as animal. There are humans and there are animals :P

Nope, not a tank engine

Keep guessing!

#6 Mar 20th, 4:44am
concerto49
Can you define famous too? What does famous literally mean?

Bart Simpson....

#7 Mar 20th, 4:46am
Fractured Illusion
Not Bart Simpson.

Hint: Disney character. Prior to when they went into all these computer animated stuff... Should give ya timeline :P

#8 Mar 20th, 4:46am
concerto49
Likely I watched a touch of Disney during younger years...

Aladdin

#9 Mar 20th, 4:48am
Fractured Illusion
Not Aladin...I didn't even know he was available on women's underwear :o
#10 Mar 20th, 4:48am
concerto49
I don't know who's available in underwear sometimes. I don't really look out for cartoony underwear much - maybe ages ago.

Buzz Lightyear

#11 Mar 20th, 4:49am
Fractured Illusion
Not a chance I'd wear him over my female parts! :O

Hint: Female!

#12 Mar 20th, 4:52am
concerto49
Mulan...
#13 Mar 20th, 4:55am
Fractured Illusion
Not Mulan :P

Hint: The Disney movie was made before the 70's

#14 Mar 20th, 4:58am
concerto49
Wah! That's a killer. I wasn't even born then. Wait...something old...

Snow white!

#15 Mar 20th, 4:59am
Fractured Illusion
Not Snow White. But you are around the right type of movies :P

Hurry concon! Before someone else comes!

#16 Mar 20th, 5:00am
concerto49
Princess Aurora from Sleeping Beauty....
#17 Mar 20th, 5:02am
Fractured Illusion
Nope. Ya know, I havent even seen Sleeping Beauty, I think :(

Hint: she not a human

>:D

#18 Mar 20th, 5:03am . Edited Mar 20th, 5:03am
concerto49
Not a human? Gosh, this is hard! I've no knowledge on that side.

Pinocchio...

#19 Mar 20th, 5:04am
Fractured Illusion
Pinoccio was not female! :P

So nope. Keep trying. You are around the right time-line (roughly speaking, because I dont know the exact dates)

#20 Mar 20th, 5:08am
concerto49
Not a human and a she....give me a break...disaster

Tinker Bell....

#21 Mar 20th, 5:09am
Fractured Illusion
Correct!!!

What story?

#22 Mar 20th, 5:12am
concerto49
Finally....it was like a tough battle.

Story - Panty Shot War

Thank you. It's over. Feel so relieved now.

#23 Mar 20th, 5:13am
Fractured Illusion
CLOSED
#24 Mar 20th, 5:15am
simpleplan13
I will give a free review (preferably to someone with a poem...) to anyone who can guess what color my shirt is today. (btw it's two colors, but if you only hafta guess 1 of them)
#25 Mar 20th, 10:16am . Edited Mar 20th, 10:44am
Fractured Illusion
BOLD IT MINI! PUT IT IN BOLD! It as a rule. :p

Wiee how fun! :D

So I only have to guess for one color of the two or what? In that case: Orange! :D

(btw, I am competing for someone else, just because I wanna have a reason to compete since I have no poems either haha)

#26 Mar 20th, 10:34am . Edited Mar 20th, 10:44am
simpleplan13
Ick orange? Orange looks horrible on me
#27 Mar 20th, 10:45am
Fractured Illusion
Err... Red! :D

(and thanks for bolding it. I had the rule to be bold it so people could orientate easier among the posts)

#28 Mar 20th, 10:47am . Edited Mar 20th, 10:48am
simpleplan13
I dont even think I own a red shirt...
#29 Mar 20th, 10:48am
Fractured Illusion
I own a red polo and it is comfy...otherwise: likewise T_T Its too bad red isnt in fashion anymore

Okay... BEIGE!

#30 Mar 20th, 10:51am
simpleplan13
It is too bad red isn't in fashion anymore... I like the color red.

Beige? I don't do light colored things because then I get stains on them (that is also a HINT I guess)

#31 Mar 20th, 10:52am
Fractured Illusion
Hmm...something dark, eh?

GREY! (or gray. I dunno which it is)

Wait! Do you want me to say shades too? because if you do: Dark gray/grey!

(hey did you see my reply in the sug topic? You can wait for others to come nad reply too I wont hold it against you. its YOUR freebie :P)

#32 Mar 20th, 10:54am . Edited Mar 20th, 10:54am
simpleplan13
I didnt see it, but I wanna do the freebie now because at 2 Im gonna go finish my paper... not grey or gray though that is close and no Im not looking for specific shades that would be semi-ridiculous
#33 Mar 20th, 10:56am
Fractured Illusion
Alrighty, I just wanted to know that YOU know because YOU are freebie giver and that means: God until this comp is finished :P

Alright, I now say... Black!

Cant get darker than that, can you?

#34 Mar 20th, 10:58am
simpleplan13
No you cant and yes youre right. It's black with a bright blue design thingy on it. Who gets your review?
#35 Mar 20th, 10:59am . Edited Mar 20th, 11:00am
Fractured Illusion
Yay! ;D

I am also wearing a black shirt btw ^^

Review Jelly please! Any poem of hers :P

#36 Mar 20th, 11:02am
simpleplan13
CLOSED
#37 Mar 20th, 11:02am
Esther Jade
I will give a free review to the first person who call tell me what "fynbos" is and where in the world it is found?
#38 Mar 20th, 12:27pm
simpleplan13
a food in china?
#39 Mar 20th, 12:44pm
Esther Jade
Nope. You're cold on both what it is and where it is.
#40 Mar 20th, 12:54pm . Edited Mar 20th, 12:55pm
simpleplan13
furniture from sweeden
#41 Mar 20th, 1:03pm
Esther Jade
It's not furniture and you're thinking too far north.
#42 Mar 20th, 1:16pm
simpleplan13
a hat from Russia (would googling it be cheating?)
#43 Mar 20th, 1:24pm
Esther Jade
Not a hat and Russia is also in the north and right next to China (maybe the getting cold thing was confusing - maybe it's just here that we say someone's getting colder and warmer depending on whether they're close or far away from something they're looking for).

My instinct is that googling isn't cheating just because I'm a big believer that you shouldn't have rules you can't enforce.

#44 Mar 20th, 1:35pm
Fractured Illusion
If in your comp here googling is cheating, Id like more hints. :P

Guess: disease from africa!!!

#45 Mar 20th, 1:38pm
simpleplan13
Yay for wikipedia

It is natural shrubery in the Western Cape of South Africa

No we say getting coolder too, but that's why I went really far from it lol

#46 Mar 20th, 1:44pm
Esther Jade
Disease - you're cold on - but africa - well, you're right but that's a pretty big continent (don't know if I can say "narrow it down" but guessing at a continent level seems pretty vague)

Clue on what it is: well, hmmm, what's a good clue - hmmm, well, there are only 7 of them in the world and its one of them - the smallest one. (Will try think of a better clue)

#47 Mar 20th, 1:44pm
Esther Jade
Yay, mini.

What do you want reviewed (baring in mind I've read all of your latest stuff, I think)?

#48 Mar 20th, 1:45pm
simpleplan13
How about Tennis Ball... mainly cause its the first one I clicked lol. Preferably the second chapter since it's the revision. But feel free to skim for something else that you want to read.
#49 Mar 20th, 1:46pm
Esther Jade
CLOSED
#50 Mar 20th, 1:49pm


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