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Name: Jenina

Username: Jenina

E-mail Address: sweetsalvation@gmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: -

Title of Story: In A Battle of Bad Pick Up Lines

Genre of Story: Romance -- Romance/Humor

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 2584

Additional Comments: -

Username: your harbor.

E-mail Address: xxthatssosamxx@hotmail.com.

Number of Betas Needed: Just one, probably.

Title of Story: N/A.

Genre of Story: I'm nearly positive my story will be a romance.

Language of Story: English.

Length of Story: N/A.

Additional Comments: Once I get a story up, which will hopefully be soon, I'd love a Beta to look over it, check my grammar/spelling, offer advice, etc.

Username: AminalLuv

E-mail Address: ALuv82@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed:I imagine 1 would be sufficient.

Title of Story: Life as We Know It

Genre of Story: Romance (subgenre--angst)

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: so far it's 4 chapters and ~1500 words, I have absolutely no clue how long it will be when it's done/

Additional Comments: I've written a lot of fanfic before, but this is my first original story. I edit my own stories pretty well I think, but I definitely miss a few mistakes every chapter. Here's what I'm hoping for in a Beta...Someone with very good grammar/spelling and someone who is willing to tell me what they think and guide me but who won't try and dictate the direction of my story. If you think that's you, please feel free to e-mail me. Thanks.

Username: concerto49

email address: concerto_49@yahoo.com or PM

Number of Betas Needed: 1 to 3 (story is virtually complicated and really tricky)

Title of Story: Elegant Emotions

Genre of Story: Fantasy/Sci-fi plot Romance/drama/Action-Adventure storyline (everything actually - tends to be more fantasy/romance)

Length of Story: Just started writing after 2 months prep, at least 20 chapters of ~1600 words. Thought of a lot of content, see what happens.

Additional Comments: I want to rectify the view that there are too many cliched highschool romance out there. We live in our lives taking too many things for granted. Beneath the common world is a lot of mysteries waiting to shock you. Allow me to turn highschool drama until a scientific experiment into humanity. Grammar and spelling can be fixed, but wrong ideas not so easily. I realized I turn a bit wacko developing female leads as happened in the past, so might need help with that. Anyway, if you're interested, please check out the story itself and then contact me. Thank you.

Username: Emotionless Crystal

E-mail Address: lizc92@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1-2

Title of Story: Logically Illogical

Genre of Story: YA Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Depends

Additional Comments:

My story's going through complete overhaul, which I know is unfair to my readers. So, if you're one of them, I'm really, really sorry. I already have one beta, but I'd like extra input. The only points I require of a beta is to be online to discuss it with me, help me with plot in general and character development, since I concentrate way too much on humour and be good in English.

Oh, and I type in UK English.

That's all.

Cheers,

Lizzie

Username: itse

E-mail Address:majdaffi@gmail.com

Number of Betas Needed:1

Title of Story:The Glen

Genre of Story:Mystery (subgenre Romance)

Language of Story:English

Length of Story:It is currently nine chapters and 22,000 words long. According to my outline, I plan for it to stop at 20-21 chapters.

Additional Comments: Let's see, I don't have problems with spelling. I do tend to forget commas sometimes while writing but I think I'd like a beta to mostly search for plot holes, whether a chapter is too descriptive or doesn't have enough dialogue and basically fool around with plot ideas. The Glen is meant to be a second book in a series but a stand alone book in its own right so it would be great to have someone who hasn't read the first book (Road to Array) and can point out things that don't make sense, places where it seems like i'm assuming the readers have read the first.

That's pretty much it.

Thanks

Username: A Perfect Sonnet

E-mail Address: Just PM me, please.

Number of Betas Needed: One would be great, but if multiple people were interested I probably wouldn't turn them down.

Title of Story: Blood On Our Sneakers

Genre of Story: Romance - Humor/Drama

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: It's currently 5 chapters and a prologue: 18,237 words long. I would imagine it will be between 20 and 30 chapters by the time it's finished.

Additional Comments: I want a beta who will mercilessly tear me apart. I don't need someone who will sugarcoat their opinions for me, I want honesty. Spelling/grammar editing is nice, but mostly I need someone who will focus on the content/understandibility of the story and the characters. It would also be helpful for the beta to be into offbeat stories and to not be easily offended. There is some harsh language in the story and a couple of my characters are completely shameless.

Important Information About The Story: It's written around the concept of having a mostly unrelatable/extreme main character who can often be downright unlikable. She is not perfect and she is not your tradition FP heroine. This is balanced out by (hopefully) having interesting, developed and likable secondary characters for the readers to relate with. Also, the romance is not the only/main plot in the story -it's a duel plot with something that will be revealed in Chapter 8. (I'm excited! It's going to be so much fun.)

Also: I'm trying to be more consistent with my updates, but I can get intensely busy between school and work.

Thank you and take care! -A Perfect Sonnet

Username: towhead.

E-mail Address: panda.and.angel@hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1

Title of Story: Elle a Peur de Crepuscule

Genre of Story: Fantasy/Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Prologue and first chapter SO FAR. Working on first chapter at the moment - should be lengthy when finished.

Additional Comments: I do grammar and spelling myself, so mainly I need someone who can tell me what doesn't make sense etc. Someone who doesn't sugar-coat, and tells me everything they think about my story.

Username: carmelatte

E-mail Address: in.dee-d@hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1

Title of Story: (undecided)

Genre of Story: Fantasy, romance, action

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: I'm not that sure as of now, but I'm thinking 20-30 chapters

Additional Comments: I would like someone who is willing to be honest with me, tell me exactly what they think about my story and such. I'm in no hurry to finish this story, as I'm in my final year of high school, and school work takes priority. Personal weakness include grammar and typos, however I do want someone who will critique my storyline and my story. And summary of story if you're interested is: Elishelle grew up in her little village away from the rest of the world. All she ever dreams of is to travel, yet her family forbids it. One day, she runs away, and discovers a secret about her little village.

Username: winter44

E-mail Address: bsuravec@ucsd.edu

Number of Betas Needed: 1-2

Title of Story: Phantom of My Heart

Genre of Story: Romance/Drama

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Nine chapters so far and still incomplete. There will be a sequel.

Additional Comments: I really don't pay attention to my grammar when I'm writing but I receive a lot of comments saying I have poor grammar and I do. So please help! Preferences for the Beta is that he/she has to like the story plot of Phantom of My Heart. =]

Username:prettylucky

E-mail Address:scorpioluckygirl_vivian92@yahoo.co.uk

Number of Betas Needed:1-2

Title of Story:My name is Michelle

Genre of Story:Fantasy n adventure

Language of Story:English

Length of Story:Irregular

Additional Comments:I updates only when strokes of inspiration hits me in the face which is like once in a blue moon.I need someone with good grammar as it is my weakest forte.

Username: violet blossom

E-mail Address: violet_blossom1989@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: umm.. one, I guess..

Title of Story: Across The Hall

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: I'm currently on the first chapter (~4600 words) but I plan to finish it at 24 chapters.

Additional Comments:

Let's see.. I work best under pressure. I'm from Indonesia, so English is not my first language. I have problems with grammar, but my spelling is quite well. I need a beta who's honest, could help me with my grammar and occasional spelling mistakes, and wouldn't mind giving second opinion on the continuity, plot, character's arc without dictating where should I take my story. Oh, and I have a bad habit of not updating my story due to laziness and procrastination. A beta who could help me break that nasty habit of mine is preferable.

Thank you!

Name: Mariah

Username: Shadowed and Shattered

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: One is good, but more is better

Title of Story: You Live

Genre of Story: Supernatural/Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: At the moment, it's eight chapters, about 32,600 words.

Additional Comments: I need someone who can point out flaws in the plot/characters, and who isn't going to sugar coat things. I don't have the story posted yet, because I want to have more than the first chapters done before I begin to post. If you're interested, I'll send it to you, and you can decide if you want to be my beta.

Username: Mizz-Insane

E-mail Adress: Insane-and-loving-it@hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: 2

Title of Story: Two Men and a Crazy

Genre of Store: Romance, humor

Length of Story: As of now, around 33,000, and there's two chapters and an epilogue left

Additional Comments: I'm aware of the fact that the first two or three chapters are terrible, which is why they're currently being edited, so I'd like a beta who'd bash me as much as they could, 'cause improvement only comes with lots and lots of critisism. Thank you :)!

Username: Lostinthenightrain

E-mail Address: Lostinthenightrain@hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: -

Title of Story: Until He Came Along

Genre of Story: Romantance/humor

Language of Story: Enlgish

Length of Story: -

Additional Comments: -

Username: KnittingKneedle

E-mail Address: totallyluminoushannahmurphy@msn.com

Number of Betas Needed: Urrm one?

Title of Story: The Last Summer

Genre of Story: Young Adult/ Spiritual/Elements of supernatural and romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 22597 words (six chapters posted) four more chapters written, I'm planning to do around twenty.

Additional Comments: I would really like a supportive beta...my grammar is something that I struggle with so I would adore some help with that, along with the usual look at character development etc. A kick in the back-side from a beta would be really helpful to. The story itself has elements of MM, but right now, it hasn't moved into the foreground.I really want to finish this story, more than anything and I'd love some help!

Username: Archee

E-mail Address: demonicblackcat@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1, or maybe 2 (one for plot and characters and the like, another one for grammar. but one is enough for me)

Title of Story: The Last Strike of the Hopeless Romantic

Genre of Story: Dramedy

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Pretty long. Probably 100k

Additional Comments: It's my first original story (I used to write fanfiction), and living in Indonesia has limited my access to English-language books. So maybe I'd need a harsh critiquer or a grammar nazi. Thanks very much..!

Name: Maya

Username: this requires pants

E-mail Address: aya_cat_@hotmail.com or thisrequirespants@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1, maybe 2

Title of Story: On Being Different

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 1 chapter so far

Additional Comments: Needed for content and brainstorming, not so much normal editing (although if I miss something when I edit something, please let me know!!)

Username: Katherine-the-greate

E-mail Address: daisycs13@hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: one, but if someone wants to work part time, I will take 1 and a half

Title of Story: Jamie and the War

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: unknown

Additional Comments: I believe that I have fair grammar and average spelling; hence, I believe that editing my story should not take too long and should not be painful to read. The main problem I have with my story is that occasionally I have a missing letter, such as 'he' when I meant 'the', and sometimes I have 'course' when I mean 'coarse'. Thanks for considering being my beta.

Username: YellowBanana

E-mail address: cashaholic@hotmail.co.uk

Number of Betas needed: 1/2...one is great, but two is even better

Title of Story: Stalking Satan's Spawn's Stalker

Genre of story: YA Romance/Drama

Language of story: UK English

Length of story: first chapter is 4,558 and each chapter will probably be around that length. I'm not completely sure on how many chapters there will be...20-25, most likely, so around 100K

Additional Comments: I think I'm okay with grammar and spelling...but obviously I'd want that checked...but I mostly want a Beta who will advise me on character development, language, description, speech, plot-the actual content of the story. And honesty is the best policy.

The first chapter is already up but I can delete that if it's for the best...and then post it up again when it's Beta-ed

Also, if anyone's able to Beta any of my other stories...then that's fantastic

Username: C.F.Anne

E-mail address: belle_writer@hotmail.com

Number of Betas needed: 1 is really all I need

Title of Story: Wings of Eagles

Genre of story: Romance/some spiritual

Language of story: English

Length of story: So far it's about 30k, but it will eventually be around 100k.

Additional Comments: I don't need a complete grammar person, I just need one to look for typos, but mostly I would love someone who would tell me about my character development, plot, conversations, flow, etc.

Username: fallingstar13

E-mail Address: star_falling13@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: 1 or 2

Title of Story: Grasping at Straws

Genre of Story: Romance/Humor/General

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Um, long. Right now I have five and a half chapters finished at about 3000 words per chapter. I'm guessing it's going to be around 30 chapters.

Additional Comments: I like to write cliches. A lot. So my beta needs to be someone that can appreciate a cliche but at the same time recognize when the cliche needs to end. I mostly need help looking for grammar mistakes I missed and making sure my characters don't all sound the same. I don't outline (at all), so I might need someone to give me a swift kick and make me write.

Username: Faithfully Yours

E-mail Address: audaciousprincess@yahoo.com

Number of Betas Needed: Erm... Not sure. One or two maybe?

Title of Story: To Love or Not

Genre of Story: YA Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: There are currently only two chapters posted although I have a ton of random scenes written and chapter three is nearly done. The plot is outlined though not completely finalized. I would say it'll be near 20 chapters long.

Additional Comments: I need someone who can help me improve my story, not just find all the places where I forgot commas or used the same word eight times in the same paragraph. I'm quite open to critique as long as it is not harshly delivered and ideas on how to fix it are provided.

Thanks so much!

Jenica

Username: R.M.Kent

E-mail Address: rubymaddisonkent@hotmail.co.uk

Number of Betas Needed: As much help as possible please!

Title of Story:Stories of Blackwood: Henry and Theresa / For the Love of Miss King

Genre of Story: Historical Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Henry and Theresa is finished and is 19 chapters long. For the Love of Miss King is a work in progress and is currently 10 chapters long.

Additional Comments: Most of the help i need is improvements to the story and historical inaccuracies, though general grammer stuff would be great too.

Name: Dalia

Username: friend 49

E-mail Address: shabalabadingdong[at]live[dot]com

Number of Betas Needed: one. (:

Title of Story: The Olympian Advice Column

Genre of Story: General Fiction--- Mythology

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 5,773 words (as of today, but I'm only a few chapters in)

Additional Comments: --

Name: Jenina

Username: Jenina

E-mail Address: PM me or look on the Contact page of SKoW.

Number of Betas Needed: 1-3, depending

Title of Story: [dunno yet]

Genre of Story: Romance/Young Adult

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Chaptered. Most likely will end up being 15,000+

Additional Comments: I'd just like people who will give me a different perspective on my own works and will keep pushing me to work on it. My focus tends to flit from one thing to another very, very quickly, so I need someone to help me with my concentration and iron out my story. Also, if I have other story ideas, I'd like to bounce them off my beta as well.

Name: I don't really like it very much...

Username: Acapella33

E-mail Adress: or you could just drop me a PM

Number of Betas needed: 1/2 One would be sufficient, two would be great.

Title of Story: Picture Perfect.

Genre of Story: YA Romance

Language: English

Length of Story: Not sure yet, but it will be chaptered.

Additional Comments: I need someone that can help me mostly with word flow, conversations, and character and plot development. I'm pretty new to FictionPress also, so my works need some ironing out. It's not posted yet, so it'll have to be e-mailed.

Name: Sandra Appiah

Username: Kessiwaa

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: One or Two

Title of Story:

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 10,000+

Additional Comments:It has yet to be posted,nd I am still ironing out the plot details but,'m trying to put in place what I need so the story is at its best when posted. I need someone who is extremely honest and gives good critisim (I can handle it lol).

Name: Rose

Username: Candid

E-mail Address: candidwas at yahoo dot com. (but I'd prefer PMs, please.)

Number of Betas Needed: just 1

Title of Story: Horrorscape/Horrorscape II

Genre of Story: Horror/Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Eh, not long enough, but hopefully this will help fix that

Additional Comments: One of my stories IS rated M and I'd hate to offend anyone's delicate sensibilities. I'm mostly looking for help in the areas of grammar and continuity, but I also take suggestions in regard to plot (e.g. a gun miraculously appearing out of nowhere to fight the bad guy with).

Name: Julia

Username: Effervescent-Sentiments

E-mail Address: asylumbabe[at]hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: as many as interested.

Title of Story: Love Ya, Unc

Genre of Story: Romantic comedy.

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 37749 (only want help on up-coming chapters, as well as a read through)

Additional Comments: Need humor help. Pretty good on edits, et cetera, but can't tell when I'm being funny. Multi-faceted sense of humor required. :)

Name: Kristen

Username: Velvetwriter

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: Maybe 1 or 2

Title of Story: Back To Life

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Unsure as of yet, but usually my stories are pretty long - currently writing the 8th chapter

Additional Comments: I've already started this story. I currently am stuck and I'm hoping having a reader will help get me unstuck. I keep writing the next chapter only to immediately delete it. Anyone who is willing to listen to my ideas and help tell me that what I wrote doesn't work, please apply.

Name: Christin

Username: Kyazain Kuriauota

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1. My story is rather weird and complicated, so I may eventually need more than one.

Title of Story: Cat. So original, I know. If you could help me come up with a better title, that'd be great.

Genre of Story: Thriller horror supernatural science fiction ghost story.

Language of Story: English; unfortunately I do not speak anything else.

Length of Story: So far I only have the prologue because I'm lazy, but it will be long. Eventually.

Additional Comments: I have no specific requirements for a beta, anyone with free time on their hands who would like to help is fine with me.

Name: Jennifer

Username: Remember Sunday

E-mail Address: (Gah.It's super old. It's supposed to mean fear of ugly children (Not a real fear))

Number of Betas Needed: 1-2

Title of Story: Remember Sunday

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 9180 words--8 chapters. It's not finished but I'd like someone to take a look at it so far anyways.

Additional Comments: Once again it's not finished and it's also my first story ever on Fiction Press. I love constructive critism, by the way.

Name: Kayleigh

Username: clumsybella15

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1

Title of Story: Memories

Genre of Story: Romance/Supernatural

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 6642 words - 13 chapters posted (chapter 14 written)

Additional Comments: I'm really sensitive about this story, and normally I would ask for advise on this forum, but they can be harsh and I don't think I could handle their comments. I've worked really hard, trying to make it perfect and staying up until 4am re-writing it. So, it's my baby, the one that might actually get finished. I've given up all the others, but not this one.

Here's the summary:

Megan forgets everything about it. Then she moves to a different town. And that town changes EVERYTHING. It brings secrets and maybe even her memories back. Either way, Megan's life will NEVER be the same again...

And here's another one: http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/9153/summaryvb4.jpg

Name: S-K

Username: stringless-kite

E-mail Address: . au

Number of Betas Needed: 1-2

Title of Story: Clutched On

Genre of Story: Action/Adventure/Romance (and slices of strange humour).

Length of Story: For now, it's impossible to tell. I usually stop around the 20 mark, but for this story I already know it will be longer.

Additional Comments: My old lovely beta for this story has too many things on her hands - this is why I'm seeking a new person here.

I used to write on FF.net with all my stories being written in third person. My genres on that account was mainly romance, drama and humour. With this story, it's written in first person so I still have yet to adjust to it. Also, it is my first time writing an Action/Adventure story.

So this is hopefully where you come in to help me. My grammar isn't always perfect and I tend to do a few typos. Though, I have come to the conclusion that I do want to improve. I don't mind critique. Don't be afraid to pound me with it, but remember to give me the appropriate reason to why you feel it doesn't fit in.

Other than that, I think that I'm reasonably (I hope) okay to get along with. Since I'm fairly busy with my uni course, you'd only have to beta once or twice a month. Thanks!

Name: TK

Username: TGKxxx

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1 - 2

Title of Story: N/A

Genre of Story: Romance & Supernatural

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 2k - 5k words per chapter

Additional Comments: My story's not posted yet on Fictionpress, but it's about a girl who's stuck in a love triangle with her dead ex-boyfriend (who's a ghost) and the bad boy of her school (he's alive, in case you're wondering). From my betas, I'd like it if they're really observant about my grammar and spelling (I do check my own spelling and grammar, but sometimes the eyes go amiss) - and most important of all, that they understand my characters well enough to tell me when they do something really out-of-character. If you're still interested in beta-ing my story after this, then please contact me via my email :) And any queries, feel free to send them to me. Thank you!

Name: Arianna Sterling

Username: Arianna Sterling

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: Ah... Anywhere from 1-3.

Title of Story: The Storyteller

Genre of Story: Fantasy/Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: The shortest chapters are like 4000, and the longest so far is the one I'm working on at 15000 so far. I think I'll be splitting it into two chapters, because that's insane... I'm planning around 31 chapters, not including Prologue and Epilogue.

Additional Comments: The story has been up for awhile now, and it has fans (but 90% don't review, so I can't tell if they're reading it still or not *groan*). It's the first novel I've ever loudly declared, "I will finish this one." And the people who do read will strangle me if I don't, so it's going to the end... It's my baby.

The basic premise of the thing is that this girl buys a book, is reading it, and ends up in another world- I know it sounds cliche, but she doesn't go into the book, so that kills that cliche. And she gets two guys in that world in love with her, plus her lifelong friend back home that she knows quite well is in love with her. And she's part of a prophecy, meets all sorts of people, and I love working on it.

I don't have Internet at home, so e-mail beta is bad for me, by the way. It'll just have to be read by betas upon posting.

Thanks! Arianna

Name: That I shall tell to the beta

Username: listentoher

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1

Title of Story: Orange Abyss

Genre of Story: Manga- Fantasy/Adventure

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: I don't know how many chapters I will put up, but each chapter is 3,000 to 4,000 words.

Additional Comments: I would like someone that would check out the first three chapters and also edit the chapters I will be putting up in the future. I need tips on how my plot can be improved.

Name: Armeen

Username: Soul2quz

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1-2

Title of Story: Baby Talk

Genre of Story: Romance / Humor

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 6 Chapters

Additional Comments: I need some one to help me with my horrid grammar, and occasionally my spelling (which isn't as bad). Of course my beta is probably going to need some patience to deal with my writing, because I tend to switch from first person to third. Thanks!

Name: tasha

Username: chocs

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: I have two stories, so one if it's not too much. But two if one person doesn't want to beta two stories.

Title of Story: Feeding the Wolves/OneEighty

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: WIP

Additional Comments: I've already posted one chapter of each story, so just check my profile and email me if you think you'd be interested. I have the next chapter for one of them written, so we could get started right away. I have no writing deadlines so go at your own pace. I also don't update super fast so I won't be emailing you a thousand times.

You must fill out the following form for each story you wish to have beta-ed in a reply to this topic:

Name: Candace

Username: Infisnt

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: 1 if possible

Title of Stories: Celestial of the Night & Sanity is in Question (my only two stories so far)

Genre of Story: Both Supernatural with Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 58909 and counting & 5674 and counting

Additional Comments: Celestial up until chapter 21 is already posted on fictionpress. Where as Sanity only had 1 chapter posted. I'm hoping to have the chapters already up corrected but I am mainly worried about the upcoming chapters.

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Name: Yui

Username: glompattack

E-mail Address: animnea[at]hotmail.com

Number beta's needed: one please

Title of Story: Ketchup Stains and Random Chatter

Genre: Romance - It's supposed to be humorous as well but we'll see how that goes.

Language: English

Length of Story: 3595

Additional Comments: I'd also like someone to critic the one-shot aside from help with grammar and spelling. It's rather short as you can see but I'm not sure if I wrote enough. If the story goes way too quickly, ect. Thank you.

Name: Hanner

Username: Hanner Marie

E-mail Address: hanner-marie[at]hotmail.co.uk

Number of Betas Needed: Probably just the one, but I might decide on more to get a varied opinion.

Title of Story: Once Upon an Eternity [This title is subject to change]

Genre of Story: Romance - Fantasy/Mystery

Language of Story: English although there will be the odd line in another language, for which a translation will be offered.

Length of Story: When finished, it'll be between 30 and 40 chapters, ranging between 5,000 words and 7,000 words per chapter. This may change, depending on your advice and how the story develops.

Additional Comments: Alright, we've all heard of NaNoWriMo and this year I'm participating (yay me?) so, considering the fact that it is only the beginning of November, the story I want beta-ing won't be ready until the end of November, and even then it'll only be about half finished. I can offer to send you my writings as I go along this month but it'll be severely unedited, terrible and confusing so I won't have a worthwhile copy ready till the first week of October. However, I can offer an overview of the story, a brief description of the characters and show my previous work, should you be curious as to where my writing skills lie currently. I have one chapter of a story up on FP but after much consideration, I realised the plot just didn't work. You may read that, if you wish, to gauge a rough idea of my talent (or lack-of). I have FF stories too, if you'd prefer looking at those instead.

So yeah, just let me know if you want to hear more. ^-^

Name: Danielle

Username: LovesickAuthor

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: just 1

Title of Story: Hate Me, Love You

Genre of Story: YA -- Romance/Drama

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: 16,038 words, 5 chapters so far

Additional Comments:

Name: Megan

Username: Welcome to meganland x3

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: just one. [I probably wouldnt say no if more asked, though.]

Title of Story: Adopted

Genre of Story: Romance

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Two chapters so far. Not sure how many words.

Additional Comments: So, I really need a beta. I think? I've never eally had one. I'm still pretty confused about the whole beta thing actually. Do I send the chapter to my beta before I post it or what? Not sure. I I need someone to jsut help me out with everything. Im new at all of this. Tell me what I have done wrong and tell me how to fix it. Anyone can help me. Really.

Name: Samantha.

Username: Sammiee.

E-mail Address: Samanthabrown-xo[at]hotmail.com

Number of Betas Needed: Just one.

Title of Story: Just Two Kids .. You & I.

Genre of Story: Romance/Gen.

Language of Story: English.

Length of Story: Oneshot.

Additional Comments: The story is a songfic to the song : Mary's song, Oh my my my my by Taylor Swift.

Name: KEL :)

Username: curse the stars

E-mail Address: (kind of juvenile, I know, but I've had this since I was ten)

Number of Betas Needed: One is sufficient, but two would be awesome. Or three or four or five, and so on. :)

Title of Story/ies:

-From Clueless Girls to Arrogant **

-The Guy Called Jack Sanders

-[untitled] an upcoming story

Genre of Story: All romance. Some drama and humor.

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Chaptered length.

Additional Comments: I update chapters weekly (and occasionally bi-weekly,) but when schoolwork piles up I fail to meet my set deadlines. Ah, procrastination...

I'm a grammar fiend, I abhorr those stupid, awful mistakes so most likely I won't require help in that particular field (save for the occasional typos. Heh.) But if there's one thing I absolutely suck at, it's PACE. PACE. PACE. Sometimes I accidently rush things and events so it all ends up confusing, and readers go like, 'huh'?

My other weakness: I'm absolutely helpless when it comes to dissecting my characters' personalities and analysing them. I find it hard to make them feel "real", if you get my drift. And, it's rather embarassing to point out, but I find my writing style quite immature. Hopefully someone can help me out in these aspects :)

Also, I'd prefer my beta to be much less of a procrastinator than I am :D Thanks.

Help is much appreciated!

Love,

curse the stars

Name: Laura

Username: Pixiegirl-1720

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed:1-2

Title of Story: The Lucky Girls: Kylie, Kaiden, Nicolette, and Valarie

Genre of Story:Young adult

Language of Story: English

Length of Story: Long :)

Additional Comments:I need one or two betas that will help me with all four of the Lucky Girls, I'm write four stories that surrounding The Lucky Girls. So i need some one that will stick with me through all four or at least two of the stories. I have the first seven chapters of The Lucky Girls: Kylie up so check it out and let me know thank you.

Name: Bella.

Username: Chartered Chariots.

E-mail Address:

Number of Betas Needed: Umm, one, I guess...

Title of Story: Deciphering Me.

Genre of Story: Umm, I'm kind of guessing that it'll be a romance. romance/young adult...

Language of Story: La fantastique anglaise. Nah, joking. English.

Length of Story: Sorry guys, no idea.

Additional Comments: I'm not overtly experienced. I'm generally a good speller, but what I need is help with plot development, characterisation and just general advice from you love-rrr-lyyy betas out there. Thanks guys.

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