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Anarane Calafalas

"NO! I wanted you to kick his butt." Amber corrected.

"And why, dear sister, would I want to do that?" Ryan asked, leaning on his sword.

"He rendered me speechless." Amber mumbled, shamefacedly.

Ryan started laughing uncontrollably. Coming over to stand beside Ranz, he shook Ranz's hand vigourously. "YOU are my NEW BEST FRIEND!!! No one... EVER, has been able to render my baby sister speechless."

#3451 May 13th, 6:27pm
Master Gaurdian

"Amber looks like its two versjus two now, perhaps team dueling." asked Sanguine happily as he took Ambers side.

#3452 May 13th, 6:30pm
Nigu's Passion

Ranz.. sort of adapted.. and shook his hand.. "Umm... thanks.. You don't seem so bad yourself..." Considering I just met this guy...

Umm.. you guys left? letting me off? *happy dance* well... I'm only going to wait for so long... it shouldn't take 10min to post.. (unless something interfered.. like a sister for instance.. I have three... :(....XD))

#3453 May 13th, 6:30pm . Edited May 13th, 6:42pm
Anarane Calafalas

Larkland and John decided to appear at that moment. "The great and mighty Amber rendered... speechless?!" John asked in mock disbelief and mock surprise. Larkland, however was silent.

#3454 May 13th, 6:41pm
Nigu's Passion

((Oh u r on :) Sorry I ever thought different))

Ranz stood trying fiercely not to blush at all the attention the guys were giving him.. Last time something like this happened a guy tried to drown me.. that won't happen again

His feet bursting into flame carried him off.. he travelled fast enough so that no one could follow him on foot.. He'd only allow Amber to follw him.. if the others followed.. He'd lose them or dispose of them.. but he would not let history repeat itself... he nearly died that day..

#3455 May 13th, 6:44pm
Master Gaurdian

((I got six sisters so i got you beat))

Watching him fly off, Sanguine flew up into the air also and took off after him, confused at why he fled. "Ranz were are you going?" He shouted.

#3456 May 13th, 6:45pm . Edited May 13th, 6:47pm
Nigu's Passion

((Wow.. I almost feel lucky if my sisters weren't so... so.... downright nasty. i live with one, one comes to visit once like.. every 2 months.. and the other is in a foster-home. I live with my step-mom (I refer to as mom as respect, my realmom is refered as either Tammy, or Real Mom) and my Dad. Miranda (9yr old, lives with me) is downright nasty. She's threatened to pull down her pants a few times.. in which I promptly retreat to my room, my sanctuary of books, and pens... bear.. pillow bed.. and dresser. ))

#3457 May 13th, 6:50pm
Anarane Calafalas

"What's the matter?" Amber asked, suddenly appearing in front of him.

#3458 May 13th, 6:50pm
Master Gaurdian

((lucky ill trade you, 2 of my sisters live with me and one is living with my uncle currently bvut she is living here more and more and you have no idea .... never ending nightmare))

#3459 May 13th, 6:54pm
Nigu's Passion

Ranz stopped abruptly.. "Nothing, move." He was afraid of them... why? they never hurt him... but they might but they haven't.. But they will but... "His mind constantly folded over itself with such... proposterous propositions.. "I-I... I'm... scared..." Why did I just say that..? these people act as though they are my friends but.. They aren't They are.. You barely know them.. So what...

((I'd happily trade my cubicle of a room for whatever you have XD I barely have room for my dresser and bed.. (Which is only a double) I have just enough foot-room to write, using my 6-drawer (2x6, 2 -- 3 rows of 2, or 2 coloumns of 3, whichever way you look at it XD) dresser..))

#3460 May 13th, 6:56pm . Edited May 13th, 6:58pm
Anarane Calafalas

Amber laid a comforting hand on his shoulder. "Will you tell me why, if I tell you why I'm scared of living?" Amber whispered.

#3461 May 13th, 7:00pm
Nigu's Passion

Ranz looked her in the eye... "Can we go somewhere... private?"

((If I suddenly disappear it's cuz dad kicked me off computer (it's past ten I g2g as soon as he notices time..))

#3462 May 13th, 7:02pm . Edited May 13th, 7:02pm
Master Gaurdian

Seeing Amber with Ranz, Sanguine flew on while listening through Ambers ears. Landing in a small clearing, Sanguine decided that he would need a new enclave so that his power on this planet was strengthened again.

#3463 May 13th, 7:03pm
Anarane Calafalas

"Sure. As long as you tell NO ONE about it. Deal?" Amber asked.

#3464 May 13th, 7:04pm
Nigu's Passion

Ranz nodded solemnly.. "Secret Safe..." he sighed and began.. "When I was in school.. many of the poeple despised me for my fire oriented fire.. it was my first day.." he looked downwards.. at the ground. "One pretended to be my friend- Fellri Woodcraft.. After a week she tricked me into meeting with a bully.. and a bunch of his friends.. they tried to drown me." he looked back up to her eyes.. "They almost succeeded... except a local farmer found my unconsious body.. and pumped the water out of me.."

#3465 May 13th, 7:07pm
Master Gaurdian

Sitting down on the ground, Sanguine concentrated and began pushing energy around him forming another wave of darkness and let it seep into the ground and spread to the tree line and form into a dome as he continued to listen to the conversation.

#3466 May 13th, 7:10pm
Nigu's Passion

Ranz told her one of his biggest secrets.. one of his core.. part of his history.. He hoped she wouldn't take it lightly...

#3467 May 13th, 7:11pm
Anarane Calafalas

Amber led him to the ancient tree by the waterfall. "I'm... so sorry." Sitting down, she began her story.

"Four months ago my uncle kidnapped me. He wanted my father's crown. He also knew that my father knew his responsibility as king, so he knew it'd be a couple of days. So he decided to have some fun. He decided to torture me.

Now my uncle's favorite "toy" as he calls it, is a whip, split into three parts.

Each part has a lead ball that crashes into your ribs, is imbedded with knife shards, and has hooks that latch on to your skin. When you pull the whip away, the hooks tear off pieces of your flesh.

Now my uncle knew I had inherited a "family gene," stubbornness.

He said that when I screamed, it would all stop.

I didn't scream.

I endured seventy-five lashes of that thing.

My uncle was impressed because the most any of his other "guinea pigs" survived was fifteen.

But, the pain just got too overbearing, so I finally broke.

I screamed.

But, he didn't stop. Even when I had screamed myself hoards and could cry no more tears, he didn't stop.

I lost count after ten lashes. At some point I became numb to the pain and he stopped. After that first torture session he cut a lock of my hair and pressed it to my bleeding wounds, and sent it to my father, to let him know he wasn't joking.

The next day was worse. After five lashes, he gave a short break, so that the next five lashes would bring FRESHER pain.

That poison that was in Tyria's wounds, was his concoction. Sanguine knows what happens if you don't remove it.

It eats away your flesh.

Well, after the second torture session, my uncle took that poison and put it on my fresh, tender wounds. The poison ate at my wounds for twenty minutes, before he finally removed it.

He smiled as he listened to my screams.

He starved me, terrorized me, and kept me dehydrated.

I was with that monster a week; before my father came and rescued me; but my uncle escaped.

After that I had nightmares, but they finally went away.

But by then, my shield was up 24/7 and I didn't trust people as easily.

And then... a week ago, he kidnapped me again. He burned me, along with the whip, and the poison. And then... the last thing I remember... is him, plunging a sword into my heart."

Amber avoided Ranz's gaze, as the tears started falling. "They shouldn't have done that. NEVER. No one should be treated that way. And you shouldn't have gone through that, just because... you were different." She added angrily.

#3468 May 13th, 7:12pm . Edited May 13th, 7:14pm
Nigu's Passion

((Damn.. dad happened to realize time as I read that... I'm so sorry but.. I'll post tomorrow morning when school library opens... sorry...))

#3469 May 13th, 7:15pm
Master Gaurdian

((you only have me as company tommorow tho so sorry))

#3470 May 13th, 7:16pm
DemonBunny205

Daiyu sat in the shade of the trees sing gentally.

"I don't know you

But I want you

All the more for that

Words fall through me

And always fool me

And I can't react

And games that never amount

To more than they're meant

Will play themselves out

Take this sinking boat and point it home

We've still got time

Raise your hopeful voice you have a choice

You've made it now

Falling slowly, eyes that know me

And I can't go back

Moods that take me and erase me

And I'm painted black

You have suffered enough

And warred with yourself

It's time that you won

Take this sinking boat and point it home

We've still got time

Raise your hopeful voice you had a choice

You've made it now

Take this sinking boat and point it home

We've still got time

Raise your hopeful voice you had a choice

You've made it now

Falling slowly sing your melody I'll sing along"

((I don't own song or lyrics))

#3471 May 14th, 1:09am . Edited May 14th, 1:41am
Nigu's Passion

((Nice poem.. sounding... thing if it's a song...nice song :)....... Too bad Ranz and Amber are sort of in Hiatus until Amber gets back..))

Ranz sighed and nodded... "Everyone is unique, someway, sometimes it's for the better.. sometimes for the worse.. I learned to accept it and move on..."

tears began falling.. "When I went home.. my parents were furious.. step-mother and father. When I woke up the next morning everything was gone... nothing but ash under my bed.." he wiped his tears but couldn't bear to look her in the eye.. "It's all my fault.. I shouldn't have.. done anything.. the guys shouldn't have tried to drown me.." he brought his gaze up to hers.. "And you shouldn't have had to endure such pain.." He had angry tears, and his voice reflected upon cracking anger.. but this time he didn't blow up.. he didn't nova... he just stared into Amber's eyes.. spellbound.. "I was so furious that when i went to my room.. I began trying each element.. forbidden until the day after your tenth birthday.. when I reached fire.. my house was torn apart, and everything went black.." he kept his gaze to her eyes.. "It was my fault.. and I wont let you, or any others that are our friends.. be harmed. I'm sick of the torture, pain, suffering.. just because were different.." he sighed and began to float downwards..

His flame dying down.. it finally flickered out as emotion took over.. and he plummeted towards the ground...

#3472 May 14th, 5:02am . Edited May 14th, 5:03am
DemonBunny205

((There in a forest right. A forest has trees. I didn't say which set of trees he wasunder. In fact he's in the trees beside the waterfall.))

#3473 May 14th, 5:50am
Nigu's Passion

Little tufts of fire puffed here and there, as he continued his plight...

#3474 May 14th, 8:36am
Master Gaurdian

As the darkness expanded more and more, and totally engulfed the area, Sanguine rose up a few feet in the air and let the energy gather. Releasing it he felt waves of darkness wash the area clean of life, like the other enclaves he had made, lifeless and draining. Landing gently on his feet, Sanguine let the darkness flow through him as he felt his power strengthen due to the closeness of being in it. "Another echo created." He muttered to himself.

#3475 May 14th, 11:04am
DemonBunny205

((I still don't own the song.))

The wind hummed a sod tune, the leaves echoed in on this tune, Daiyu smiled and put words to it,

Atemonaku hitori samayoi arukitsuzuketa

Kasuka na toiki o tada shiroku somete

Utsuri kawari yuku kisetsu no sono hakanasa ni

Wake mo naku namida ga koboreta Ima mo aishite iru...

Furitsuzuku kanashimi wa masshiro na yuki ni kawaru

Zutto sora o miageteta

Kono karada ga kieru mae ni ima negai ga todoku no nara

Mou ichido tsuyoku dakishimete

Wakari aenakute nandomo kizutsuketeita

Sonna toki demo itsumo yasashikute

Fui ni watasareta yubiwa ni kizamareteita

Futari no yakusoku wa kanawanai mama ni Ima mo oboeteiru...

Toozakaru omoide wa itsumademo mabushi sugite

Motto soba ni itakatta

Mou nido to aenai kedo itsumo soba de sasaete kureta

Anata dake wa kawaranai de ite

Saigo ni miseta namida ga kisenakute

Kono shiroi yukitachi to issho ni kiete shimattemo

Anata no kokoro no naka ni zutto saite itai kara

Yorisotte dakiatta nukumori wa wasurenaide ne

Chigau dareka o aishitemo

Saigo ni kiita anata no koe o kono mama zutto hanasanai mama

Fukaku nemuri ni ochitai

Furitsuzuku kanashimi wa masshiro na yuki ni kawaru

Zutto sora o miageteta

Kono karada ga kieru mae ni ima negai ga todoku no nara

Mou ichido tsuyoku dakishimete Mou ichido tsuyoku dakishimete.."

#3476 May 14th, 11:15am . Edited May 14th, 11:17am
Nigu's Passion

((And yet you know all that... in Japanese as well... impressive....))

Ranz crashed hard.. ((No one bothered to help X(... sheesh..)) it instantly shattered his left shoulder, and henceforth rendering that arm useless..

Ranz was still unconscious.. and rendered immobile at that moment... until he woke

Such pain... he nearly screamed when he tried to move his left arm. His right work OK but it still hurt. "So much for friends....again.." he muttered before standing, and beginning a trek back to town.

#3477 May 14th, 12:09pm
DemonBunny205

Daiyu spotted him "You sir!!" He called walking up to him.

#3478 May 14th, 12:10pm
Anarane Calafalas

"RANZ!!!" Amber shouted, appearing beside him. "Your arm needs some medical attention." Pointing to a stump she commanded, "Sit."

#3479 May 14th, 12:10pm
DemonBunny205

((YOUR ON!!!!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!))

#3480 May 14th, 12:13pm
Anarane Calafalas

((Did I miss something? Everyone's always so happy when I get on. Odd...))

#3481 May 14th, 12:14pm
DemonBunny205

((Well I've been alone all day.))

#3482 May 14th, 12:16pm
Nigu's Passion

((lol.. it's hard to catch you online however... I'm lucky I guess.... I actually glimpse you once in a while XD))

Ranz ignored and and trekked on. "I'll get it fixed in town" he muttered.. She's offering help So now you have friends? Yes. How dare you Shut up

He sighed and stopped.. before turning around and sitting on the stump.. "Sorry.. many things go on in my empty shell of a head..." My arm hurts.. alot.. I doubt she'll do anything.. You got into this mess.. fix it yourself... dummy

((DB205 you never post on any of our other forums...))

#3483 May 14th, 12:17pm . Edited May 14th, 12:17pm
Anarane Calafalas

((LOL. It seems EVERYONE'S eager to have a crush on my character. It's all so... odd.))

#3484 May 14th, 12:18pm
DemonBunny205

((Sorry))

#3485 May 14th, 12:18pm
Anarane Calafalas

Amber kneeled beside Ranz and gently holding his shoulder, she whistled softly. "This is going to hurt." She said, then closing her eyes, imagined the bones mending. When it was done she opened her eyes, "There." She whispered.

#3486 May 14th, 12:21pm
Nigu's Passion

((*sigh* Ranz already as the buds of a crush XD anyway.. I'm trying to post up another poem, called Colors.))

Ranz wanted to be anywhere but there suddenly.. a sickening feeling took place in his stomach. not again.. not by these trees.. not by... her..

He stood and walked fast, seemingly ascending invisible stairs to escape the trees.. "Don't follow me!" he grimaced.. it was coming.. "Thanks though..."

#3487 May 14th, 12:22pm . Edited May 14th, 12:22pm
Anarane Calafalas

Amber closed her eyes, "You're welcome." She replied softly. Then taking her bow, she went to practice her archery.

#3488 May 14th, 12:23pm
DemonBunny205

Daiyu wandered out in his human form, and walked over to amber, singing gentally,

"Some day out of the blue

In a crowded street or a deserted square

I'll turn and I'll see you

As if our love were new

Some day we can start again, some day soon

Here comes the night Here come the memories

Lost in your arms Down in the foreign fields

Not so long ago Seems like eternity

The sweet afternoons

Still capture me

Some day out of the blue

In a crowded street or a deserted square

I'll turn and I'll see you As if our love were new

Some day we can start again, some day soon

I still believe I still put faith in us

We had it all and watched it slip away

Where are we now

Not where we want to be

Those hot afternoons

Still follow me

Some day out of the blue

Maybe years from now

Or tomorrow night

I'll turn and I'll see you

As if we always knew

Some day we would live again, some day soon

I still believe I still put faith in us

I still believe I still put faith in us

I still believe I still put faith in us

Here comes the night

Here come the memories

Lost in your arms

Down in the foreign fields

Not so long ago

Seems like eternity

The sweet afternoons

Still capture me

Some day out of the blue

Maybe years from now

Or tomorrow night

I'll turn and I'll see you

As if we always knew

Some day we would live again, some day soon

Some day out of the blue

In a crowded street or a deserted square

I'll turn and I'll see you As if our love were new

Some day we can start again, some day soon

I still believe I still put faith in us

I still believe I still put faith in us

I still believe I still put faith in us I still believe I still put faith in us."

((Still don't own.))

#3489 May 14th, 12:27pm . Edited May 14th, 12:30pm
Nigu's Passion

((He's only going to be a moment XD))

He clutched his stomach as he doubled over, fighting to keep going higher.. I refuse to destroy this forest.. I need to.. I won't.. he stopped.. unable to go any further and it came.

Rings of fire and shafts of burning red light erupted from Ranz, as his mind gave way to his heavy load. Ranz, once finished singing holes in everything around him.. fell unconscious from the power that had just erupted from him.. tearing from him.. he wasn't quite as high as last time.. so nothing was broken. His head would be mighty sore when he woke up though..

#3490 May 14th, 12:28pm
Anarane Calafalas

((What the heck?! I'M CONFUSED!!! Who likes Amber, Nero or Daiyu?!))

#3491 May 14th, 12:30pm . Edited May 14th, 12:31pm
Nigu's Passion

((Ranz XD))

#3492 May 14th, 12:31pm
DemonBunny205

((Nero, but Daiyu is just plain singing. Do you like?))

#3493 May 14th, 12:32pm
Anarane Calafalas

((I like the singing. But Nero and Ranz, no crushing on Amber!!!))

#3494 May 14th, 12:33pm
DemonBunny205

((Nero's a playboy!!! he can't help it!!!))

#3495 May 14th, 12:34pm
Nigu's Passion

((Ranz is caring.. he's a genuine... nerd lol.. he enjoys being with Amber.. he.. likes her. Your not changing that. :)..... ummm I posted my poem.. please R&R and then plz.. BACK TO THE RP))

#3496 May 14th, 12:35pm
Anarane Calafalas

((A playboy? Amber doesn't like playboys. She is SO going to kill him!!!))

#3497 May 14th, 12:36pm
Nigu's Passion

R&R!!!! RP!!! OOC SHOULD GO IN OOC

#3498 May 14th, 12:37pm
DemonBunny205

((RP!!!!!!!!!))

#3499 May 14th, 12:38pm
Nigu's Passion

((awww she left..))

#3500 May 14th, 12:45pm


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