This should be gone. For,

It only lasted a small

Moment in its time

So, do you like it?

Haikus are about nature, try this.

Let the flames flicker

This spirit is eternal

Dancing, joyful flames

but your poem is pretty good.

They don't have to be about nature. Not always. Usually, though.

here's one that doesn't (mine):

beating out her wings

listening to the night's song

she hears the silence

or:

shake up the sparkles

wind the know in-two circles

musical dreaming

oh, sorry! there was a typo I didn't catch. It should be knob not know

It's okay, and cool.

Yes. I do partly agree. human nature and Natural Nature,

Example: Awe

for each awe of disgust,

to each awe of reverance,

Allof which, too much bother.

Example: Haze

The glissining of winters essence,

The swaying of the cherry blossom tree,

We are temporary, This world is permenant.

Both ways are very beautiful :D

Shrieking for his life,

red blood spurting from his thigh,

i stabbed him with knives.

Now thats what i call haiku!!!:)

XD

This is my haiku

When I sneeze I say "Achoo!"

That was my haiku.

Hey, can I jump in?

She's totally not stalking~

Oh dear, I've been shot.

-shot- X_______X

XDDDDD

This forum's pretty much dead, besides the occasional visitor and poster.

-Huggles ezyl-

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Tennis is so fun.

Best under the hottest sun.

No, it's not a pun.

in response to the tennis haiku.....

tennis, a bright sphere

iluminating the night

fireflies cant see

that doesnt make any sense...sorry

I like it -- think it has some sort of irony...fireflies and illumination, you know.

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