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Calingaladha As much as it's good for my ego to get reviews merely saying how good of a story it is, I often find myself lacking any constructive reviews, reviews that leave me gnashing my teeth, but nodding in acceptance are the most helpful. I'm not looking for anyone to say 'OMG SUXX0RZ!!!' or to tell me I'll never be a good writer. Indeed, my biggest pet peeve is when someone leaves a review bashing my grammar(which I believe is for the most part correct), but their own review contains numerous grammatical and spelling errors. On to the point: I'd very much like a serious review on my WIP, The Prophecy. If you absolutely cannot stomach that story after the first few words, however, I would also like some criticism on my poetry. My deepest gratitude, and I will give you a good review for any you give me. (Good as in insightful, not 'OMG AWESOMEZ :D') 3/17/2008 #1
Dolvich Read and reviewed "The Prophecy." Keep writing. 6/04/2008 #2
Ethan the stargazer I'll read your story, if only you read and review my ongoing 4 parter The Dead and The Dying. 10/26/2008 #3
Aisling's Dream My friend and I just started a group for dedicated writers to share their work and get good reviews. If you're interested, take a look: http://thepenmaster.getphpbb.com/ 11/28/2008 #4

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