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Midnight In Eden
Topic: ConCrit
If anyone would like any, I can hand out some pretty in depth constructive criticism.

Mostly for poetry but also short stories. I will not do any anime or sci-fi. If you would like something reviewed with a lot of concrit just let me know, in a private message or here.

Hopefully I can be of some help.

#1 Dec 23rd 2006, 9:05pm
Imalefty
ooh, yes, please! i would love some CC (i get some, but not a lot), so please take a look at any of my stories-- it doesn't matter which. thanks a lot!

-Lefty

#2 Dec 24th 2006, 10:33pm
feejoor
Me too. It's my first time posting things. Constructive criticisms would be really helpful. Please take a look at my stories. They're quite short.
#3 Dec 26th 2006, 1:58pm
ONETRACKMlND
No sci fi? blasted away 3 of my stories...

Can you review the 21st century?

#4 Dec 26th 2006, 7:10pm
Midnight In Eden
One chapter stories yes. No longer however because I currently do not have enough time to do the longer stories. I'm a bit too thorough to do that and I'm currently helping a professor with her novel and moderating a poetry forum.

I've had a look at Imalefty's stuff and it's quite interesting. I'll try to keep up with demand and I'm currently not receiving alerts from fictionpress so if you want to reply to a review please email me.

#5 Dec 26th 2006, 9:38pm
Imalefty
yeah, whats going on with the alerts? i haven't been getting anything either.

thanks for looking at my stuff, Midnight In Eden. it did help, especially because i'm not much of a poetry writer. the reason why it was a bit long was that it was an english assignment and i had to make it a certain length... ^_^;;

-Lefty

#6 Dec 29th 2006, 7:57pm
Midnight In Eden
feejoor: I had a look at both of your short stories. You've got a number of technical problems, but nothing that practise won't help.

ONETRACKMIND: I really don't have time to look at your stories. If I do get a moment, I'll try.

#7 Dec 29th 2006, 10:23pm
truthordeal
Yes, who wouldn't love that. I just hate getting zero reviews, or getting the generic thumbs up.
#8 Feb 10th 2007, 1:08am
Guiltless
I would love if you would review some of my poems. I don't care which, any of them will do.
#9 Feb 22nd, 10:56am

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