PLEASE review my story Jeremy's Dream!

I seriously need a review for The Magician's Game - I worked ** it and I want to know whether I should continue.

I'd like some reviews for my story (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2475908/1/The_Magicians_Game) because I want some feedback (positive or constructive criticism entirely welcome).

Hello all, please review my story "When I Think That I Have Failed To Die." It's the only one on my page... just click on my username. Thank you!

My story, Nanashi, is in need of reviews. Note: It's not done, it's long, and it's got a major dose of fantasy/supernatural. It actually begins with two angels. http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2579215/1/Nanashi

I've got a fair bit of a story going on right now... a historical romance, set at a military hospital during World War 1. It's somewhat long, but not overwhelming. I would appreciate it, genuinely, if anyone would come and take a glance. I'd happily reciprocate.

Forgot the link...

http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/story/story_preview.php?storyid=2425329&chapter=1

Again, I'd read someone else's story and review if they'd do the same.

Wow. Do you guys not get the concept? You're supposed to read the one above you and THEN you get to post for your review. Correct me if I'm wrong, but y'all are so review hungry you forget about the others.

Uh, hello. Don't worry, I already reviewed for 'Forget Me Not' on the K-K topic-area-place-thingie. Well, I'm in desperate need of reviews for my latest story "Where Horizon and Gutter Meet." If I get some feedback, I'll definitely write another chapter, because Chapter one is not *the most* exciting, just essential to the storyline. I'll be waiting. :)

I got a chance to read your story "Where Horizon and Gutter Meet." It was pretty interesting. Anyways my latest story is "Roman Identity." It is about a 14 year old Roman boy that lives on the made up island of Aegean in which his father is the king of. Like any teenager he faces the pressure of fitting in and most importantly gaining the approval of his father since his mother died 10 yrs earlier. I would appreciate any reviews for this story or even my previous story '"Before the Legend." I would greatly appreciate it. Here is the link to my frist story mentioned: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2812337/1/Roman_Identity.

hey so i REALLY need some current reviews, pls any help you have will help!!!

its called courting survival, and its on my profile. THANKS :)

Hi. I am working on a short chapter story about Cleopatra's older sister, Berenice, who was queen of Egypt before her. I am trying to become a professional author and could really use some advice on how to get there. If anyone has a chance, please read and review my story and tell me what you think or what I can work on. Thanks :)

The link is http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3043321/1/Berenice_The_Lost_Queen. Or you can just click on my name and go to my profile page.

So, I've reviewed the story above me. If anybody can please check out mine?

Title: Penumbra Genre: Adventure, Drama

Summary: Hoping to escape a life she does not want, Graciela runs away to live with her brother in Paris. Her new life is put on hold however when she aids Alexander, a man who can only remember his name, and is determined to help him regain his memory. But neither of them expected to be forced into a dark world along the way, a world that wants Alexander dead at all costs.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3091010/1/Penumbra

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