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It's kept you up at night, and you just can't get it out of your head. Thrillers that keep you on the edge, and advice for the best plot twists for your story. Come post your story here, give advice, ask for advice. It's your choice.
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Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know

Hey everyone

I'm new to this site and I've just posted my first short story. I'd class it as a thriller, so I figured here would be the best place to ask for reviews / advice on what you think / would change etc. I would be happy to return the favour.

I'm sorry I saw that you're not allowed to post links to your stories in this forum didn't realize but dunno how to delete this post.

9/17/2011 . Edited 9/17/2011 #1
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