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  Dr. Self Destruct I have reviewed... The Memory Holder - Vivace.Assai Burning Lungs - paperdisasters Tempted by Fire - Michodell A Criminal by the Picking - thenutrunningthenuthouse ---------- I'm still returning reviews for The Angel Kristoph that are longer than a line or two. Keep in mind most of my work (with the exception of some one-shots) is rated M for violence, gore, and sexual content. All reviews will be returned ASAP. Thanks! 3/26/2012 #691 |
| Michodell I just started a new story Angel Wings and would appreciate reviews on that or Tempted by Fire . I will return all reviews I receive ASAP. 3/26/2012 #692 |
 sethned If you could please review my story [b]I'm Not Gay But My Boyfriend Is[/b] 3/27/2012 #693 |
| our sick story Reviewed chapter three of Angel Wings and chapter thirty-eight of the Angel Kristoph, will review the others when I'm not so snowed under with coursework :3 Requesting reviews on chapter three of Shrinking Violet, the ones longer than a line or two will be returned when I get the chance. :3 3/28/2012 #694 |
| mingsquared Reviewed chapter 3 of "Shrinking Violet". Still requesting reviews for "The Unseen Prince". I'll probably update it Friday or Saturday. 3/28/2012 #695 |
| Whirlymerle I reviewed: 3/28/2012 #696Gifts of Gold, ch 1 I Never, ch 2 Meet me at the Altar, ch 3 The Memory Holder, ch 3-6 The Missing Echo, ch 1-5 ~ Please review Beautiful Dreams, Twisted Realities, I return all reviews over one line (200 characters) long. Thanks! |
| Dreamers-Requiem Hey! Right now, it'd be great to get some feedback on What's Lost, my latest story. But, like always, I return all decent length reviews on any of my stories. 3/29/2012 #697 |
| this wild abyss I've recently reviewed: The Memory Holder by Vivace.Assai shrinking violet by paperdisasters I'm still returning all reviews (longer than 1 line) for Vespertine. Summary: I was eleven when my third husband died. The empire was inflamed. They told me I was cursed; they said I was a murderer, but they didn't understand. They didn't understand that I was more than that. More than a wife—more than a woman. Magna Mater had chosen me. [Link] 3/30/2012 #698 |
| Dr. Self Destruct I have reviewed... I Never - DutchAver What's Lost - Dreamers-Requiem ---------- I'm still returning reviews for The Angel Kristoph that are longer than a line or two. Keep in mind most of my work (with the exception of some one-shots) is rated M for violence, gore, and sexual content. All reviews will be returned ASAP. Thanks! Edit: To keep from double posting I'll just edit this post. I have a short story I just added today that I'd love some feedback on called, When Heroes Fall. All reviews on it will be returned, of course. 3/31/2012 . Edited 4/01/2012 #699 |
| OneOriginalThing Hey I would love if y'all could review for my story game on, and all the other ones, I would appreciate it sooooo much. I'm in high school, and I'm just trying to improve to become half as some of you out there. 4/01/2012 #700 |
| OneOriginalThing Hey I would love if y'all could review for my story game on, and all the other ones, I would appreciate it sooooo much. I'm in high school, and I'm just trying to improve to become half as some of you out there. 4/01/2012 #701 |
| this wild abyss I've recently reviewed: Game On by OneOriginalThing shrinking violet by paperdisasters I'm still returning all reviews (longer than 1 line) for Vespertine. Summary: I was eleven when my third husband died. The empire was inflamed. They told me I was cursed; they said I was a murderer, but they didn't understand. They didn't understand that I was more than that. More than a wife—more than a woman. Magna Mater had chosen me. [Link] 4/02/2012 #702 |
| JRockFan I reviewed Vespertine 4/03/2012 #703Please review any chapter of The Red Death |
| seredemia I reviewed: A Cry for Trust (6 chapters) by Vivace.Assai The Memory Holder by Vivace.Assai Angel Wings (3 chapters) by Michodell The Unseen Prince (2 chapters) by mingsquared I Never by DutchAver Hakujou na Enjinsha Black Jack by vernelley I shall review more this week! Possibly, tomorrow~ Please can I have reviews for Penumbrae? 4/03/2012 #704 |
| mingsquared Reviewed: 4/03/2012 . Edited 4/03/2012 #705"Game On" by OneOriginalThing "Penumbrae" by andHeavenfell "The Red Death" by JRockFan Requesting reviews for the latest chapter of "The Unseen Prince". |
| lookingwest Hello hello I just uploaded the start of a new story and will be giving returns for any reviews! I customarily will return the same length/quality that I receive. Also, this first cold opening bit is quite short. -- The Witch & Wave: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3010674/1/ Rated: T Genres: Sci-fi/Supernatural Summary: Dystopian setting. Third person present. Cyperpunk with a fairy tale flavor. Later it will probably have some fun INSIWBish magic in it. 4/04/2012 . Edited 4/04/2012 #706 |
| seredemia I reviewed: A Cry for Trust (2 chapters) by Vivace.Assai The Second Life of the Murder by thenutrunningthenuthouse The Unseen Prince by mingsquared Gifts of Gold (2 chapters) by Embarassed Thief from Darkness by ElfCat2323 ~ As always, reviews for Penumbrae will be appreciated and returned :) 4/04/2012 . Edited 4/04/2012 #707 |
| Embarrassed I've reviewed a few chapters of 4/04/2012 . Edited 4/06/2012 #708Penumbrae Vespertine To Tame a Dragon one chapter of Game On one chapter of The Unseen Prince and Mists of Avalon I'd much appreciate reviews on either of my stories, preferably on the latest chapter of Gifts of Gold Thanks to everyone in this forum, all the reviews I have received have been very helpful :) Just a sidenote for people who have reviewed, I appreciate that you're trying to adhere to my request for the most recent chapter, but if you haven't read the previous chapters, feel no obligation to skip ahead. |
| Dr. Self Destruct I have a major headache so this post is probably going to come out sloppy. I've reviewed: Gifts of Gold (chapter 1) by Embarrassed, The Unseen Prince by mingsquared, Penumbrae (think I'm up to chapter 11 on that one...) by andHeavefell, The Memory Holder by Vivace.Assai. Still looking for reviews on The Angel Kristoph (updated it last night, so I'd love some feedback on the later chapters if possible), and I'd also love some reviews for my April WCC When Heroes Fall (rated T). I also welcome reviews on my other one-shots: Vore, The Only Time and Voices for the Voiceless. Thaaaaaanks. 4/06/2012 #709 |
| OnHiatus9.18.012 Well, it has been a long while! I've been very busy with school but every Roadhouse email i got made me wish for more time. I'm coming up on the end of the semester, so i decided to jump back in on a hopeful whim that I'll be able to keep up. I haven't gotten any work done on "Daughter of the Wild" (for those of you that remember that lol) but I did get inspiration for a continuation of the story of Lily and her sisters, titled "The Color of a Lily's Heart"(http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3011429/1/The_Color_of_a_Lilys_Heart). It's set 20 years after the original story, with all the girls married with children and secretly violently unhappy. When Fancy's daughter Jubilee crosses a line with her parents, she's forced to move into her aunt Lily's house. This event is the catalyst that sets off the explosion which has been building for twenty years. I've got ten chapters so far, up to the point where Jubilee has just moved into the house. Any proper constructive reviews will be returned as promptly as possible. I'm a little rusty but I will do my best. Thank you in advance! Sincerely, Lily Ann Grace 4/06/2012 #710 |
| Dreamers-Requiem Hey! So, right now, I would love some detailed reviews on my two young adult/teenage romance stories; Crash and Desperate Desires. I just want to make sure the characters and plot are working - the newest version of Desperate Desires currently only has a couple of chapters up, but another one should be coming soon. Thanks. 4/07/2012 #711 |
| OneOriginalThing I have reviewed for: The unseen prince-mingsquared Penumbrae -andHeavenFall A good student-Embarrassed Vespertine-R.E MuseKamp 4/07/2012 #712 |
| OneOriginalThing I would love some reviews for any of my stories, especially my new story game on. 4/07/2012 #713 |
| Vivace.Assai Sorry if this post is vague. It's been awhile since I posted and I haven't really kept track of what I've reviewed. Over this past week or so, I've reviewed: The Unseen Prince by mingsquared (all chapters posted)Penumbrae by andHeavenfell (now up to Ch. 26) Meet Me at the Alter by LiberryBooked (all chapters posted) Gifts of Gold by Embarrassed (Ch. 2) all chapters posted of Angel Wings, Tempted by Fire, and To Tame a Dragon by Michodell What's Lost by Dreamers-Requiem shrinking violet by paperdisasters (all chapters posted) The Angel Kristoph by Aldrea-Draco (now up to Ch. 12) Game On by OneOriginalThing As always I will return any reviews for The Memory Holder (Adventure/Romance) or A Cry for Trust (Mystery/Supernatural). 4/07/2012 #714 |
| mingsquared I reviewed: 4/07/2012 #715"Gifts of Gold" (Chapter 7) by Embarrassed "Voices for the Voiceless" by Aldrea-Draco "The Color of a Lily's Heart" (Chapter 1) by Lily Ann Grace "Game On" (Chapter 2) by OneOriginalThing Requesting reviews for the latest chapter of "The Unseen Prince". |
| OneOriginalThing hey i would love to hear what you guys have to say about my story gaurdien angels, true love and other myths, and as always ill review back for your stories. 4/07/2012 #716 |
| lookingwest I uploaded a new chapter of The Witch & Wave. I am returning all reviews on this and would love feedback on either chapters :) Note: I also give what I get. If it's a one-liner it's going to be a one-liner return. 4/08/2012 . Edited 4/08/2012 #717 |
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu Well, apparently I'm losing my touch in reviewing. Being clumped up in a 6 day full hr job will do that to you. Anyway will try to review something within the next few days if my focus is in 100% mode. At the same time will be trying do a rewrite on Fate Sangokushi. Or rather more of a clean up since I've bumped up a quite a few writing tutorials as of late. Thankful for that current modding delay at Elfwood. :) 4/08/2012 #718 |
| trilby94 Hi :) I've reviewed Desperate Desires by Dreamers-Requiem, When Heroes Fall by Aldrea-Draco and Gaurdien Angels, True Love and Other Myths, by OneOriginalThing. I'd really love some feedback on two of my stories: My Lord Knight and Dreamland. They are both new ideas and still short but I'd appreciate any constructive comments to help me on my way with them :) My Lord Knight is a fantasy story in which a knight and nymph are chosen for a quest to overthrow the tyrranic King, however it's more complicated than it seems, not least because they can't stand each other! Dreamland is a young adult story about a troubled girl who is struggling to stay afloat but everything changes when she falls in love. It just might not be for the best. 4/08/2012 . Edited 4/10/2012 #719 |
| Dreamers-Requiem So I have two things to ask. For reviews, I'd love to get some feedback on some of my one-shots. Just take your pick. Linked to that, it would be great to get some votes on the poll on my profile page, if anyone is interested. It'll really help me in deciding what to work on next. Cheers. And, as always, I am currently working through stories to review, between doing work for University. So if I do owe you a review, just give me a few days and if you think I'm taking too long, just drop me a PM. Cheers. 4/08/2012 #720 |
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