Yay posting is back! XD
Hello, everyone! I'm continuing to look for reviews for Captain Caine [Part I - Ryan Tyler Walker is pretty well known but not everyone's favorite kid in an apocalyptic world. One day walking home from school his life is changed and the name Ryan becomes only a thing of his memory.] & Captain Caine Part II (if anyone is up to there) [With a new squad Captain Caine sets out into his country to learn about himself, his comrades, and his enemy in order to fight them.]. I know I owe some people and I'll get on that. ^^ Thank you!5/26/2011 #61
Running Up That Hill, ch 2-4 by beaux reves (for RG)
Out of Touch, ch1 byLunaoftheLight
The Song of the Bird in the Gilt Cage, ch 3-4 by Daphne Auguste
And a couple more.
Please review Beautiful Dreams, Twisted Realities and/or Chapter 4 of Whirlymerle's Potpourri. All reviews returned ASAP. Thanks!5/26/2011 #62
Alright, so I have a peculiar request, hope that's okay; not for reviews on anything I've written, but for a friend of mine.
I'll return any reviews given myself, although I'd greatly appreciate if you didn't mention the Roadhouse in your review at all, or anything to do with returning the review (it's... a long story). So, yeah, any reviews for The Rebirth or Codename: Echo would be great, and replied to, in kind, promptly. I should mention, however, that both these stories fully warrant the 'M' guidance tag: it's damn dark and twisted stuff. Not suitable for younger folk.
[Codename Echo summary: There is no greater horror than the absence of hope. For Adam Plainworth, that horror is suffocating him as a death at a party sends him down a twisted spiral into madness and self destruction, and all the while he is followed by a demon wearing his smile.]
[The Rebirth summary: A story about a simple case of appendicitis that results in the creation of something long since forgotten, left behind by evolution. Christian is this creature in search of answers, in search of a key to unlock the secrets of his own and our origins.]
Returned reviews for ShortcakeMattie & Jess Megan...guess I'll hold onto the one for Jax Creation until further updates of Of Rogues and Princes (pls forgive my laziness, just that I personally find it easier to review chapters I've never read before) XP
BTW, just revised chapters 2&3 of Genectrols: DGeneration earlier today!5/27/2011 #64
I have reviewed...
Dirge Wolf by SilentWinter (prologue)
Edward & Alice by Katerzzz (chapter three & four)
All The King's Men by ShortcakeMattie (chapter one)
Whirleymerle's Potpourri by Whirleymerle (chapter four)
The Second Life Of The Murder by thenutrunningthenuthouse (chapter one)
My Dad is dragging me to the middle of nowhere for Memorial Day Weekend, so I won't be able to review anything either late Sunday or Monday.
Anywho, I'd adore reviews on my story, RISE FROM THE ASHES, especially the latter chapters! It was also updated recently. And, of course, all reviews are returned!
Summary: Keira Wilkson has had the gift of immortality since the day she was born. Or, is it a curse? Her and her family were living normal, simple lives in the small town of Sylver, until another Immortal finds out who they really are. Her whole life is twisted upside down after he pays a visit to her house one winter night. Lost, horrified, and on the brink of insanity, Keira now walks the world in search of answers, only to find more bloody secrets, and even more Immortals.
Genre: supernatural/adventure5/27/2011 #65
I just reviewed Codename: Echo by Thoughtful Silence.5/27/2011 #66
reviews for chapter four of the it girls appreciated!
As of today, I have reviewed:
- 1 chapter (chapter 4) of Whirlymerle's Whirlymerle's Potpourri
- 1 chapter (chapter 5) of Katerzzz's Edward and Alice
I just updated The Second Life of The Murder and would appreciate some feedback on it, but if it isn't your cup of tea, I'm still returning reviews on Tailored, which is currently on chapter 19 out of 30.
TSLoTM: For Rose, it was one thing to find out that her "FILF" father was a master thief and her crazed Alabama English teacher was his partner, it's a whole other to be recruited by him on a school trip to Paris, working alongside said teacher's teenage nephew.5/27/2011 #68
I'd like some reviews for my first horror story, Eli's Coming. Horror has always been one of my fave genres and I'd like to know if I did it justice :)5/27/2011 #69
Reviewed chapter four of Rose's The It Girls.
Reviewed sufercharlie25's Eli's Coming.
I'd love some reviews on Running Up That Hill. It's my first attempt at writing in ages. Thanks! :)5/27/2011 #70
Just a Face, ch1 by mktoddsparky
Rise From The Ashes, ch 10 by Kobra Kid
The Second Life of The Murder, ch 1 by thenutrunningthenuthouse
Rooting for Romance, ch 9 by DutchAver
Breathe, ch 1 by Fairyn
Please review Beautiful Dreams, Twisted Realities and/or Chapter 4 of Whirlymerle's Potpourri. All reviews returned ASAP. Thanks!5/27/2011 #71
Fantasy - T - (Adventure/Romance)
Summary: The Insurgence saw the murder of the monarchs and the nobility loyal to them; a usurper took the throne and Aurelia was cast into darkness. But not all is lost. Two children survived the massacre. The Resistance is coming and the rightful King will be crowned.
Also, exams are coming up so I will not actively be reviewing anyone (well - I shouldn't be anyway). However, I will ensure that reviews are returned promptly, within a week of their posting at the very latest.5/28/2011 . Edited 5/28/2011 #72
Reviewed Rise From the Ashes by Kobra Kid
May not have internet access for the next 2-3 days, but will prob have tons of time throughout June, so:
*I'm hoping this'll work* If I do get my reviews for Genectrols: DGeneration to hit 70 by 24 June 2011 (fictionpress time), I promise to give 2 returns to the first person after the 70th (70th inclusive; same rule applies for rest of this post) whose review is SPECIFIC to either chapter 10 or 11.
If by some miracle it manages to climb to 90 by then, 3 returns to the first person after 90th whose review is SPECIFIC to either chapter 10 or 11
If by miracle of miracles it manages to ever hit 150 by that time (but of course that'd be impossible), I'd give 2 returns for all reviews after the 143rd [yes, I double-checked] so long as they pertain to what I'm asking of for the promise-to-return reviews below (ie: does not solely mention...)
Should be quite free during mid/end quarter of June, so should be able to return all reviews before start of July! (Otherwise I'll definitely PM you :D)
Plus I'll be returning all RH reviews (so pls indicate!) for any chapter AS LONG AS the review DOES NOT solely mention grammatical mistakes and/or lack of speech tags for chapters 4 to 7; tenses applicable to chapter 8 as well (yes for all the other chapters that's okay). Pls forgive me for the imprudence, just that I've already gotten quite a number of such feedback for these chapters and since I'm in the process of revising them (and given my "expertise", or the lack thereof, in the English Language, that may take some time), so would prefer to have them criticized in these areas after the revisions.
Thanks in advance!5/28/2011 #73
I just updated Penumbrae! So, requesting reviews for that!
And I wrote a new story called Love Kills.
Any reviews for Penumbrae or Love Kills will be returned! I have a one week holiday this week, so I'm pretty much able to return most reviews. And yes, I know I still owe people. Just send me a PM, so I can put you in my list!
Penumbrae: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure Click here!
When the sun sets, the moon rises. When the moon wanes, the sun takes its place. Light and darkness can never meet. Never. Somehow, a cursed boy and a princess prove this wrong.
Love Kills: Romance/Supernatural/Fantasy Click here!
There were a lot of things I wanted to do in life, but falling in love with a ghost haunting my bedroom was definitely not what I had in mind.5/28/2011 #74
Reviewed Love Kills~!
Please Review this?
One Land split into two after the Midlight War. From there two Kingdoms rose: The Empire of Nox and Regina Diei. Centuries have passed and a new War threatens to start, not just between the two neighboring Kingdoms but from the unknown dangers of the East. Adventure/Fantasy5/28/2011 #75
I reviewed Penbumrae!5/28/2011 #76
Glorious Triumph by Barbiemonster Chapters 11-13
Rooting for Romance by DutchAver Chapters 9, 10
Genectrols: DGeneration by miragex Chapters 1-11
Running Up That Hill by beaux reves Chapters 1-4
Rise From The Ashes by Kobra Kid Chapters 1-8
Phoenix White is Hot by fat boy running
Chapter 1 Crash by Dreamers-Requiem Chapters 1-3
Of Rogues and Princes by Jax Creation and BellaRina Girl Chapter 1-2
Meet Me at the Altar by LiberryBooked Chapter 1-2
Wider World Woman by Rosemarysgraden001 Chapter 1-3
I would like reviews for either of my stories and all reviews will be returned! All the King's Men: When an earth-shattering secret shakes the loyalty of his two most trusted comrades, the king of thieves is left with only one choice: struggle to restore his honor, or watch his legacy crumble to dust.
Upon a Shining Star: In the aftermath of his best friend trying to kill him, a king is left to piece his fragile kingdom back together with the ongoing threat of his friend's followers bent on fulfilling their leader's final wishes.
Revisions have been made to Chapters 1 and 2 in Upon a Shining Star. For those who have read them before, any feedback on the updates would be nice!5/28/2011 #77
I have returned/reviewed:
Rise From The Ashes ch 12
Urbana Carna ch 1-2
Shades of Legend ch 3
worlds through closed eyes
Edward and Alice ch 4
Tailored ch 19
Hooray! I just uploaded ch 14 of Glorious Triumph. I would be amazing if the story got reviewed from you guys, and of course, I will return the favor, as always, starting tomorrow, since it's past midnight EST.
Summary: The modern-day result of an alternate history in which the US is in shambles. Many teenagers resort to violence and destruction as they try to live their lives.Some humor and romance, as well.5/28/2011 #78
Of Rogues and Princes (chapter 1) by Jax Creation
Into the Night Revised (chapter 1) by Dreamers-Requiem
Just uploaded chapter 13 of Shades of Legend. Any reviews will be returned ASAP, although I would much prefer reviews on later chapters.
Summary: I have conversed with ice dragons in the endless ice fields. I visited the lost temple of Al'Anin and survived. I escaped from the catacombs of Klaeth-Dorn with my sanity intact. I have many names. Minstrel. Bard. Poet. I am Fiothe5/29/2011 #79
Would very much like a review of The Silver Knives please.
Will return reviews with gusto, just let me know which story and I'll get on it.5/29/2011 #80
I'd like some reviews for my new romance story, Summer Storm.
Reviews are appreciated, replied to and returned!5/29/2011 #81
So, with my second year at Uni now finished (scary), I have a lot of time on my hands while I look for a job. As this is the case, I should be doing a whole bunch of reviews in the next few days and have even more time to return reviews so, with that in mind, I'm requesting reviews on the following -
Dulce Bellum Inexpertis - Arrow is a warrior tasked with training a useless boy called Caylx; Rayne is a young girl trying to find her destiny. In another part of the country, a princess dreams are full of horror. Fantasy. (Only one chapter up at the moment; my newest novel.)
Minor Talent - Hazel East has met them all; she fits men into categories, Singer, Guitarist, Bassist and Drummer. Her life revolves around music. She breathes it, talks it and writes it. Until she meets a band called Minor Talent, that is. Romance. (I'm currently working on the edit of this, so all and any critique, however harsh, is greatly needed.)
If neither of them look like your kind of thing then please, just have a look at my other stuff - I have a bunch of one-shots on there which could do with some critique, and other novels that might take your fancy. Cheers.5/29/2011 . Edited 5/29/2011 #82
Wow a third bar? I need to keep myself updated. I have a lot of stories to pay back.5/29/2011 #83
I've been strangely proactive the last few days. Just not on what I want to be working on. Oh well, short stories are better than nothing right?
Requesting reviews for my oneshot A Place in Space.
Swan's A Place in Space and Deb's The Silver Knives.
(They've returned reviews.)
`PT.5/30/2011 . Edited 5/30/2011 #85
The Second Life of The Murder by thenutrunningthenuthouse
Fate Sangokushi by Bloodedge
Crimson White by Vernelley
Locrian's Song by Zingaresa
When Darkness Falls by the ticking clock
Falling Embers by the ticking clock
Stuck In The Shadows by TrulyDevious
I owe more reviews, of course, but that's all I could manage today! I shall review more soon!
I updated PENUMBRAE. So pretty please drop reviews for that!
Penumbrae: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure Click here!
She was the sun to his darkness, the only light that he could stand to look at. And yet he knew that she would be the death of him.5/30/2011 #86
ashes from a different sky, by Poisoned Twinkles
Love Kills (two chapters), by andHeavenfell
Rise From the Ashes, by Kobra Kid
I just got back after a busy Memorial Day weekend, so I haven't reviewed anything. I will be free tomorrow though, so expect a lot of reviews then!
As usual, I'd love reviews on my story, RISE FROM THE ASHES! Also, I am only ten reviews away from five hundred! So, whoever posts the 500th review will be repaid two extra reviews in return! Thanks so much!
Summary: Death never crossed Keira's mind, since she is an Immortal. But, all of that changes when a man, Alocer, pays a visit to her house on a dark winter night. Now, Keira is spiraling into a world full of death, tragic secrets, and despair.
Genre: supernatural/adventure5/30/2011 #88
Hey everyone! I would like to join in on this lovely group. And as I'm in the last 2 weeks of school, I'll need plenty for procrastinating, so payback reviews won't be a problem!
If you could please take the time to read (and enjoy)The Horde, chapter 1, and review, that would be amazing! It seems the first chapter gets several hits but doesn't maintain them as the story progresses, so input would be lovely. Thank you! Just a forewarning, it is rated M.
Summary: Journeying deep into space has awakened a race of aliens that believe humans a threat to the universe. This is Ava's story, of her own journey, her battles, her loves and her losses in the war for mankind, for survival. Rated M for heavy smut.
Category: SciFi/Adventure5/30/2011 #89
Just reviewed Dulce Bellum Inexpertis =)
P.S. Dreamers-Requiem you have A LOT of stories! WOW! My mind is blown, hahaha. That's amazing.5/30/2011 #90
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