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Agent.Frappuccino

Hey. I still owe people reviews (i will get to them shortly, promise) but I just wanted to drop by and say that chapter 4 of Heart to Heart is posted up. It's a short chapter! reviews are appreciated and returned ^^

#4901 Nov 04th, 5:42am
sarah loves charts.

Reviewed Heart to Heart! X3

#4902 Nov 04th, 6:10am
Mr Ragna Badguy

Frayling, I'm planning to start a new chapter of A Ranger's Tale ASAP. So if this plan goes through within a few days, then chances are that I'll review Helix after I've got it up. Erm actually I'm intending the return of my impending review for Helix to be going towards the future A Ranger's Tale chapter. Sorry there, dude. But be very sure I will start reviewing Helix at some stage of time. :)

#4903 Nov 04th, 7:18am
timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Id like to request a review for Eden Chapter 2.

Ill review back.

#4904 Nov 04th, 10:28am
Agent.Frappuccino

I reviewed back everyone that I owed. It took me an hour and my fingers ache from typing, but a promise is a promise haha. I wont bother typing who it was because you all know who you are. I gatta give Rentboheme a review... and... who else.. Timmay do i owe you anything? I'll review you.

#4905 Nov 04th, 10:31am
Plej

Reviewed Pink Lemonaid by Lovaxx, anime/manga fans check that out, it's great.

Reviewed A Ranger's Tale by Mr. Ragna Badguy, it's good, good character in there. Lookin' forward to finding out why the lone Ranger is the "anti-hero".

#4906 Nov 04th, 11:22am . Edited Nov 04th, 11:59am
Katerzzz

Hey guys!

If anyone would care to review either of my fics I'd appreciate it, this time tomorrow I;ll be able to reply to anyone who wants reviews as I am at the moment panicking about my Maths exam which is tomorrow morning

-sigh-

Anyway, anyone who hasn't already looked at my fics, take a look and review if you like.

Wish me luck, as I atm see myself being carried out the exam hall by expressionless men in white coats and taken to some place far far away.

Thank you and goodnight.

Kate

#4907 Nov 04th, 11:27am
Lovaxx

thx for the reviews guys, which of your stories would u like reviewed? or do u want me to just pick one :D

#4908 Nov 04th, 2:00pm
sarah loves charts.

OKAY. I WILL PROCRASTINATE ON REVIEW RETURNING NO MORE. I have found my Algebra book which has been missing for a good week (X3) and as soon as I complete my homework, I will be free for the rest of the night.

Also, Lovaxx, if a reviewer doesn't specify anything one piece that they want reviewed, just go ahead and pick one out for yourself. :D

#4909 Nov 04th, 2:07pm
Agent.Frappuccino

I returned all reviews that i owed (phew!). I know everyone is busy writing up the NaNoWriMo... but if you have a spare time, I posted chapter four of Heart to Heart and I would love to recieve a few reviews. I will return reviews of course :D.

I'm exhausted... so I'll be seeing you guys tomorrow. G'night

-Agent

#4910 Nov 04th, 6:06pm
Lovaxx

Reviewed the Mage of Manipulation :) i will get to the rest tommarow :)

#4911 Nov 04th, 8:28pm
Plej

@ Lovaxx, eh, you can choose I forgot to say which one.

#4912 Nov 05th, 10:02am
Aspiemor

Okay today I have reviewed.

A Rangers Tale

Unsevered Ties Bios and Breakdown

Time of Kings

Also uploaded a new chapter of Journeyman Shaman. I feel happy.

#4913 Nov 05th, 11:02am
Agent.Frappuccino

Reviewed Bathed in Afterglow and Eden (chapter 1-2).

I owe Ragna

Just got home for a 3 and a half hour class.... tired.... sleepy... T.T.... reviews for my stories are appreciated and returned T.T

#4914 Nov 05th, 11:21pm
Tegh
If anyone gets the chance please review any chapter of Reef of Fire. Currently working on a film noir piece, but work has halted any progress I've been making in those regards. As always all reviews will be returned with swiftly calculated and manipulated diligence lol. Thanks in advance!
#4915 Nov 05th, 11:32pm
Narq

If anyone's interested, chapter 10 of Children Of Winata is up: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2722283/10/.

I will return reviews!!

You've probably heard but... Children Of Winata has been nominated for L'Action Award at La Campanella Awards. Voting will finish on Nov 9th so if you haven't voted, please do so, and those who have, THANK YOU SO MUCH! Here is the site: http://www.campanella-awards.webs.com/nominees.html. Just click on ‘vote’ which is on the left side under ‘navigate’ for me!! Thank you!

P.S. Just a reminder: I think there are still a few people who haven't returned my reiviews...

#4916 Nov 06th, 1:10am
timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

I reviewed Pink Lemonade chapter 1 and two(Youll be getting a good few free reviews when i get around too reading it, its just so good!:P)

Reviewed Reef of fire chapter one and 2(The same that i said for pink lemonade lol)

Do i owe anybody reviews btw, just pm me if i do

#4917 Nov 06th, 10:44am
Plej

wow thanks for the reviews lovaxx, I'll get back to pink lemon-aid laterz!

And I need to review The Promise of a lifetime, Heart to Heart, and Eden!

Sorry. I've been very busy, I may get to reviewing them today, but don't count on it. You can expect them by Sunday. I just like to really read the stories to help out as best I can rather to glide through it quickly and give a general review. Thanks again, the roadhouse rocks!

#4918 Nov 06th, 10:51am
Kristin Teabag

Hello :)

I'd like The Morphine reviewed

preferably not the first couple chapters

they've been looked at a lot xD

#4919 Nov 06th, 2:05pm
Tegh

Reviewed Chapters 1 and 2 of Edan, and though I may be able to make it through a bit more today it won't be until a bit latter. Almost finished the first chapter of "Film Nior" and it should be posted a little latter on today if anyone would care to take a look ;)

#4920 Nov 06th, 7:25pm . Edited Nov 06th, 7:26pm
WildmanWalker

Hello, everyone.

I'm new, and I only recently posted the prologue and first chapter of my comic-book inspired story, Rangers of Eternity. If it's not too much trouble, I'd appreciate some reviews. Thanks!

#4921 Nov 06th, 9:12pm
Agent.Frappuccino

Welcome back Tegh lol. And welcome Wild ^^

I just reviewed Children of Winata (chapter 4) love ya Narq :)

I still owe Ragna!

#4922 Nov 06th, 10:07pm
Tegh

Thanks Agent lol, I have a tendency to go in and out a bit. Hope no one minds, but I get busy on occasion at work. That aside I finished up chapter one of Film Noir. It's basically one of my normal practice pieces, but I love adding to them and you never know where they'll head so...Thanks to everyone that has given me reviews of Reef and if anyone wants to take a look at Film Noir I'd be more then appreciative lol.

#4923 Nov 06th, 10:24pm
Eponine254

Hi everyone! I have a new story up, and it's for the November WCC, so I'd really love to get it read and reviewed! I already owe a bunch of people reviews, but, never fear, I do have a list, and now that I'm on holiday, I'll be able to get around to it. Promise! :)

So, please please review Something to Say (and vote in the WCC!).

#4924 Nov 07th, 9:14am
3piph4ny

I have a story named "Veras". Please check it out. Returning it.

#4925 Nov 07th, 5:24pm
Agent.Frappuccino

Reviewed Film Noir

Reviews for Heart to Heart are appreciated and returned

#4926 Nov 07th, 7:33pm
The Jab

Hey, reviews for The Jabbe Chronicles would be totally cool.

Or if you totally don't want to do that, stop by Letters of Misinfermation. I've had about 98% good reviews on that one.

Or stop by both? Hahah.

#4927 Nov 07th, 11:44pm
Frayling0

Just to let you know, chapter 2 of Helix is up! It's a story set in modern day, blending crime, thriller, and sci-fi. So any and all reviews are appreciated - and they will all be returned! Thanks. ~ Luke

#4928 Nov 08th, 12:00pm
Plej

Reviewed:

Pink Lemonaid by lavaxx

Heart to Heart by Agent.Frappuccino

Eden by Timay

The Promise of a Lifetime by Katerzzz

A Ranger's Tale by Mr. Ragna Bad Guy

~*~*~*

Okay I'm looking for reviews preferably for Bathed in Afterglow, but if that isn't your cup of tea, feel free to review anything else. I'll return reviews.

#4929 Nov 08th, 12:47pm . Edited Nov 08th, 1:10pm
Dreamers-Requiem

Hey, would love to get some reviews on my stuff, mostly Blood Shot but feedback on anything else would be great too. Anything to help me improve as a writer. Will return reviews.

#4930 Nov 08th, 2:50pm
Agent.Frappuccino

Reviewed the following stories:

Helix (chapter 2)

Bathed in Afterglow (Chapter 2)

Reviews I owe: Ragna

Reviews for Heart to Heart are appreciated and returned

#4931 Nov 08th, 3:23pm
3piph4ny

I have reviewed:

Helix (1-2)

The Jabbe Chronicles (1-3)

Blood Shot (1-2)

and Eden (1-2)

Reviews for Veras are greatly appreciated, and returned of course.

#4932 Nov 09th, 11:50am
TheStoryMistress

I reviewed Chapter 2 of timayyy's Eden. Interesting beginning, I suggest checking it out if you're not to busy.

#4933 Nov 09th, 6:18pm
Mi.Ishi

Hey, I was wondering if I could get a review or two for my story Only if It's Cartier. It's only the prologue, but I'd like a review to inspire me to write more.

The summary is as follows:

Girls cry for their princess-picture perfect white wedding many times over, because of the man involved. I refuse to cry for any man, and will only say “I do” if Cartier’s on the label.

It's a cliche romance story, for those of you who are interested. Thank you!

#4934 Nov 09th, 10:23pm
MarkC-UK

I enjoyed that story in a fluffy sort of way Mi.Ishi - quite an idealistic viewpoint, but interesting to read.

Feel free to review any of the dross I've written here - I think I have the writing equivalent of ADHD...brouhahahahahaha!!! :)

#4935 Nov 10th, 12:27am
Zadros

Is it okay to ask for reviews when I can't return them at the moment? Final exams, so yeah. If anyone's willing I'll return the favour in about a week, just getting in to reviewing really =)

#4936 Nov 10th, 3:33am
Frayling0

Zadros, I've reviewed your story - awesome work!

As always, reviews for my new story Helix will be appreciated and returned within 48 hours :D Thanks. ~ Luke

#4937 Nov 10th, 3:55am
KelaBelle

I'm going to be focusing on one story at the moment, you get choose which one I focuse on, the rest of the stories will be but on hiatus while I'm writing that one, because writing too many stories at once is very hard. To vote go on my poll and pick which one you want me to write out first. Poll closes 19th November. Once polls finsish I'll be working through it allot. Thanks your opoions matter.

#4938 Nov 10th, 9:44am
sarah loves charts.

I miss you guys.

I'll be back soon.

I promise. T_T

#4939 Nov 10th, 6:44pm
Agent.Frappuccino

*sniff* YOU BETTER!!! *gives u a virtual hug :D*

#4940 Nov 10th, 7:15pm
Mi.Ishi

Paid back UK with his Yakuza Girl. Cool characters, smooth intro.

#4941 Nov 10th, 7:50pm
Izanagi's Muse

I reviewed Regan Saves the Drama Club and Journeyman Shaman, both being excellent reads in my opinion and I'm looking foward to seeing more from both writers.

If anyone would like to take a look at my new story The Deviants or my old one Mercenary Academy I would really appreciate it and will defintely return the favor. Bot hof the stories are still in-progress and will have new content soon :)

#4942 Nov 10th, 8:18pm
Mi.Ishi

Izanagi....I love your profile pic. Haven't played the game yet, but Calintz is a total dreamboat. XD

#4943 Nov 10th, 8:58pm
Izanagi's Muse

haha thanks neither have I, I just think he looks cool XD

#4944 Nov 10th, 9:10pm
Mi.Ishi

My sister had rented the new one, Tears of Blood (which I also haven't played)....the first one (Phantom Avalanche) has stopped production. It's impossible to get now. I heard there was an issue with it, a bug or something anyway.

#4945 Nov 10th, 9:20pm
Izanagi's Muse

I want to get the newest one too, it looks like it has some awesome attacks and the graphics look sweet

#4946 Nov 10th, 9:54pm
mikaulitz

Review for The Revenant, please? 8D I shall review back~

#4947 Nov 11th, 12:50am
MarkC-UK

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2740213/1/Masquerade

I feel quite cheeky asking for any feedback on the above title from folks - I wrote it last night while the Mrs was watching CSI: Miami (I HATE those Sunglasses of Justice!!! I want to smash them! Smash them I say! :) ).

I will happily return any reviews...but I don't know if the above work missed the mark or not. I was aiming for a film noir type of feel & think I might have gone a little too Action Comics.

Oi vey!

#4948 Nov 11th, 12:56am
Tegh

I feel a need to review that now just due to the fact that I'm currently working on a piece entitled film noir lol. Will have it for you prolly tom.

#4949 Nov 11th, 3:19am
MarkC-UK

Groovy - I have no idea where it came from when I was writing it - in the words of Ray Stantz, it just popped in there... :)

#4950 Nov 11th, 5:44am


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