Hi this is Princess Foam the writer of The Princess Who Makes the Flowers Bloom and I just wanted to say to check my story out. I've worked my butt off on it! Really I have. I've been working on it for months and months of course I do though have a learning disability that makes me write slower but I've really worked ** this. It is really hard for me to stick to a story in fact I have never really finished a story in my whole life and the stories that I have done for school I have rushed on them and they needed some serious editing! I really couldn't fit the whole discription of what the whole story was about so I'll tell you right now. It's about a princess named Rose who is a very caring beautiful princess. Before she was born the Earth was barren because an evil sorcerer named Cedric took everything away from earth (meaning the plants, water, flowers, ect.), but when she was born a miracle happened everything returned to Earth. Cedric could not figure out what made everything return but he vowed that he would. Meanwhile Princess Rose grew up and was raised by her caring mother Queen Lily and by her fat drunk father King George who did not treat her mother and her well. Princess Rose learned of the miracle that happened when she was a child from an elf named Raven who she took a liking to because of his serious and quiet personality and his long black hair. Cedric finally learned what had made his planet go infertile and had his crystal ball show him Princess Rose, but things took a twist when he saw her he fell in love with her at first sight. Cedric kidnapped Princess Rose and now Queen Lily and some unlikely friends have to save her.6/30/2008 #1
|Open your eyes Chopstick
uhhh sure. i dont mind looking at your story, at least the first chapter (or more if i end up hooked). By your summary, it sounds pretty generic, but who knows, it might be good. I'll leave a review too, when i have time.
In exchange, do you mind reading and reviewing my story "A Princess Summoning?"
Here's the summary: Remember when one wanted to be a princess when they were little? How magical and pretty the idea was? This village doesn't like it. The idea of it is a curse. The princess curse. And the dragons always wants a princess. Like it or not.
Hopefully that makes you want to read my story. ^^ if not, just think fantasy and adventure. :)7/28/2010 #2
|Open your eyes Chopstick
oh...mmm...i checked your profile and your story isnt up there....
do you still mind reading and reviewing my story anyways? Thanks.7/28/2010 #3
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