Thans!" On table lay the newly frished novel he took off the type writer. Its title was "A Good Marine"

Claire carefully put a hand on it and turned it around to face her. "Is this the book you started to write all those years ago?"

"Yup But was always up here.." he tapped his head. "Until now."

"I was wondering when you were going to finish it," Clarie replied, "Now of course I have to read it, I thought for sure that you'd forgotton!"

He passed it to her. The deadcation read: To my love and friend Ckarie

She smiled, "Oh Donnie! Thank you!"

"Now read," he said.

"Now look who's being impatient," Claire laughed, "Let me at least finish breakfast before I tuck myself back into bed with your book."

"Ok my darling."

She finished eating quickly and began to clear the dishes.

As always, he took over with them.

Smiling Claire left him to it and grabbed the novel. "I'll be upstairs dear if you need any help with anything," she said pausing in the doorway of the kitchen.

“I’ll manage,” he told her. “Just have fun.” Secretly he worried about chapter 5 when a pretty nurse rescued main charticter Dan Hanson. Although Clare was changed to “Sally” it was undoubtly her. The girl was described as a small giril with fire tinged hair, soft eyes and softer skin. And Donnie’s love for Claire dripped off the pages in its fictional form.

&You can discribe a sence if you want.

When she got back into the bedroom Claire stretched out on the bed and started with the first page, reading on and on as the story increased. Before she knew it she didn't want to ever stop reading.

Donnie waited nerously.

When she came back down she threw herself into his arms. "Oh Donnie it was wonderful!"

"You liked it?! What about part where.."

"I loved the way you included your feelings into it," Claire said, "I know that Sally was me by the way."

He gave a schoolboy blush. "You're not mad? Its pretty personal..the sence where they overturned the motorbike was like the boat and the time they.."

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"I know but I still loved it!" she said, "It was like a story of our life together."

"I was worried you hated it."

"Why would I hate it, it's wonderful!"

"Becuse I thought it might be too personal."

"It's not too personal if you are writing about your feelings."

he gave her a kiss.

She kissed him back.

He took her hand again. "Want to goof around upstairs?"

"If you'd like."

He gave a boyish blush. "If ya want to."

"It's alright with me."

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