We all know that not all works have positive feedbacks. They also need some negatives too in order for it to be improved. I know this very much since I get negative feedbacks myself.

So let’s switch reviews! Anybody who’s a human can join! Here’s how it goes…

You are going to review the story stated on the thread before you. Your review must contain anything that you liked about the story.

On the next story's review, your review must contain everything that you disliked about it.

PATTERN:

-Review on what you liked about “Tart”

-Reviewed “Tart”, review on what you didn’t like about “Skivvy”

…. And vice-versa.

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Remember that the story you want reviewed must be a oneshot.

Since this is a new topic, we are going to pick a random story:

Review anything you liked about "Purity of Your Smile" by Xu.xDripdrop.

reviewed "Purity of Your Smile"

review whatever you didn't like about "Acts of Hubris" by midnite1004

reviewed "Acts of Hubris"

review what you liked about "Mafia Princess"

thanks! :

Review what you didn't like about... (read summary below first) It's needed to understand story better.

I'm not Bluffing

One Shot- The divorce papers were not final. Jack said he would kill her if she left, for months she was hidden. There had been no sign of him until tonight. He stood in her kitchen, his jet black hair and cruel sky blue eyes stared at her, she had a gun.

Oops... Forgot to say,

I reviewed "Mafia Princess."

Sorry about that...

reviewed "I'm not Bluffing"

review what you liked about "Angel of Death"

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