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marjorievonnordeck
Topic: Quest # 8: The Search for Dorian’s Child
((Currently in this quest is only Dorian... Add: Corlin, Lira, Saf’ley, Lintherasi, and Quinn

others may add characters if they wish but I'd like to keep this one small, so pleas ask me before hand and have a character in mind when you ask. Also keep in mind that any characters added will have to be introduced while Dorian is searching for his lost child... they will need to have to have a reason to be wondering the wild and furthermore a reason for tagging along with Dorian. GB... as the eventual goal is for Dorian to find Elsva's tribe feel free to throw in any characters you wish and Amazon NPCs as you see fit. ;) ))

There was a chill breeze threw the trees as Dorian made his way to the edge of the town and into the woods. He smiled despite himself; he always loved being so close to nature. The moon and stars shown full and bright. Tonight would be a good night for traveling threw these woods. As he was an elf the cold of the coming winter did not worry him, for his sake, but it did worried him for Elsva's sake, and the sake of his unborn child. He knew that those of human decent required warmth during the cold winters, especially those who were with children... and she... she was barely clothed to begin with. That in mind he began to search about for any signs of Elsva's passing.

#1 May 07th 2007, 12:49pm . Edited by Qlmmb2086, Mar 14th, 10:26pm
The Ferrett
((So that I catch you before this heavily starts, I'm going to post here first.))

Corlin shivers in the heavy brown hooded coat thing he's borrowed to come here. He wanders through the forest towards the tavern. Why come here? Because everyone still alive from that awful day was here and the powers below said that the full team should regroup. He's zoned out on this thought when he bumps into Dorian ((one break of rule no reaction. But then Dorian's reaction is upo to him so minimal breakage of rule to start interaction.))

#2 May 07th 2007, 5:48pm
marjorievonnordeck
((That's fine Ferrett.))

Dorian looked at the man who had bumpted into him oddly. "Hello?" he said more of a question than a greeting, "What are you doing wandering these woods alone at night?"

((Would ya tell me please what he looks like?))

#3 May 07th 2007, 6:07pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:07pm
The Ferrett
Corlin's brown wild hair flops down onto his face making him feel remarkably emo. ((Trying gradually)) "Loo--ooking for f-f-friends." he says chattering his brown eyes looking at an elf?
#4 May 07th 2007, 6:10pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:10pm
marjorievonnordeck
((WTF is emo... I do know my pop culture, but that one always confuses me.))

"Are you alright? You look like you're freezing," he said a touch of concurn in his voice. "Perhaps I can help you?"

((Oh, and you know it would REALLY help me if you would actually put your charaters abilities in their background/abilities post instead of just a refrence to where it is in your story... because I don't have time to go looking all over for it.))

#5 May 07th 2007, 6:20pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:23pm
The Ferrett
"I can make my own warmth but I want to blend in." Corlin says. ((Emo - whiny loves black, more whiny, slashy slashy without the chasey chasey.))
#6 May 07th 2007, 6:23pm
marjorievonnordeck
((ROTFL ferrett... but I get it now, though I do not think Dorian will make the connection, LOL.))

"Oh," Dorian says looking at him in that rather disturbing way that Dorian does where he seems to be looking into rather than at you. "Do you need help finding your friends? I am searching from someone myself."

Dorian reached into one of the pockets of his cloak and pulled out a hand full of small bones, stones, crystals and the like that all had strange markings on them. Then dropped them on the ground. He studied them for a moment and then picked them up. "I need to head this way," he said turning southward.

#7 May 07th 2007, 6:32pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:34pm
The Ferrett
"I'll follow you. I've found that eventually fate brings you to where you need to go." Corlin says.
#8 May 07th 2007, 6:35pm
marjorievonnordeck
Dorian arched an eyebrow at Corlin and gave him a good looking over then, "Does lady Fait speak to you as well? In anycase, I supose it would not hurt to have you along... but I must warn you, where I am headed men are not exactly welcome." With that DOrian began walking rather soundlessly threw the woods towards the south, the wind at his back. The cold (Corlin might note) did not seem to affect him at all.
#9 May 07th 2007, 6:37pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:39pm
The Ferrett
((Why is your fate f-a-i-t? Until I got here I've never seen it spelt like that.))

"Warning noted, and fate doesn't talk to me, she shoves me with a sharp stick."

#10 May 07th 2007, 6:40pm
marjorievonnordeck
((ROTFL, because I can NOT spell, ferrett, that's the only reason. XD))

Dorian chuckled a bit at that, "Fate waits for no man, they say."

#11 May 07th 2007, 6:44pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 6:44pm
The Ferrett
((Fate's about the only word I can.))

"But still it hurts - the prodding I mean."

#12 May 07th 2007, 6:48pm
marjorievonnordeck
Diruan chuckled a bit more, "Well she doesn't make it easy for me either... I compleatly zone out when I have vistions... I stop moving and reacting to the world around me all I can see is what she sends me when I have a vistion."

Dorian continued scowering the land for signs of Elsva's passing as he walked. Soon he found a set of faint tracks, little more than minor disturbance to the abundance of dead leaves and foilage on teh ground.

"Here we are," he said pointing to the ground, "This is what I was looking for." He knelt down and examined them for a moment, "only a few hours old... if we hurry I may be able to catch up with her before she gets to her tribe."

#13 May 07th 2007, 6:53pm
The Ferrett
"Car, jeep or miniture plane?" he asks.
#14 May 07th 2007, 6:58pm
marjorievonnordeck
"I do not know what these things you speak of are," Dorian said, then he stood and began following the tracks. They headed due south... if he remembered correctly there was a village a few days travle from here in that direction... Perhaps that was the villge from his vistion.
#15 May 07th 2007, 7:01pm
The Ferrett
Corlin's eyes go white and as Dorian walks away, he produces.... twin jetpacks. he comes back to reality and calls out to Dorian. "Hey, how would you like to catch up faster?"
#16 May 07th 2007, 7:03pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 12:22am
Girlbrainiac
((She will have built a fire. There's no reason for her not to.))

Shivering slightly in the night chill, Elsva began to gather the wood and put a camp together for herself. In a little while, she had a merry little blaze, and a bit of rabbit meat roasting from her hunting expedition the day before. She was well-practiced at surviving in the wild.

((Think I have a character for Dorian to meet once they get to the village.))

#17 May 07th 2007, 7:53pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 8:26pm
The Ferrett
((Need Dorian to turn around.))
#18 May 07th 2007, 7:55pm
marjorievonnordeck
"Hey, how would you like to catch up faster?"

Dorian didn't look back, he was too buisy following Elsva's trail. "How do you sugest we do that," he said softly, "her trail is light, barely there... I can not move faster than I can follow it." Then he raised his head, a new scent was on the breez, a fire, and someone cooking... and it was in the right direction... 'perhaps.' "I think she's made camp," he said softly, "we should take advantage of her stopping." He said not stopping as he continued his rather slow pace following Elsva's trail.

((I never told Corlin Dorian's name, he should not know it, please edit your post.))

#19 May 07th 2007, 10:19pm . Edited May 07th 2007, 10:22pm
The Ferrett
Corlin sighs straps one jetpack to his back then hightails it after the stranger, engine silent. He hovers behind him before saying. "I know of a better way of following her trail. Do you want to try?"
#20 May 08th 2007, 12:27am
marjorievonnordeck
Dorian pauses feeling an odd breez from behind him and turns sharply. "What's-" he cut himself off in mid scenctence when he saw Corlin hovering before him.

"What sort of mage are you?" he asked not soundeing startled, though he looked obviously surprised.

#21 May 08th 2007, 3:37pm
The Ferrett
"One that makes stuff. Do you want to go faster to her? Cause only a her can stir this much reaction." Corlin says.
#22 May 08th 2007, 5:34pm
marjorievonnordeck
"Aahh..." Dorian hesitated, he was not at all afaride of magic, but he wasn't to keen on flying. "I am not really comfertable with the thought of flying," he said a bit softly. "And yes she... El-Elseva," Dorian shuddered involentarilly as the name passed his lips, "she is pregnant with our child, my son... and her tribe does not keep male children. I, I have to get to her."
#23 May 08th 2007, 7:05pm
The Ferrett
Corlin then drops to the ground, the jetpack dissolving. "If not flight, then speed." he says his eyes going white again while grey liquid flows from his hands to make a motorbike. He makes a pair of helmets and hands one to sage-man. "Hop on."
#24 May 08th 2007, 7:08pm
marjorievonnordeck
((ROTFL... you're not going to convince Dorian to use any of your crazy contraptions.))

Dorians went wide for a moment when the thing on Corlin's back dissapeared and then the other machine apeared. He handed him somee odd thing to put on his head. "I, I do not see how I can track her on that strange contraption," he said, "in any case... she's camped for the night, and not far off we'd be there by now if we hadn't stopped." With that Dorian knelt to examine the tracks again and then started moving off again.

#25 May 08th 2007, 7:35pm
The Ferrett
((Can corlin just grab him. cause he's not going to meekly follow. I want permission before I do so though.))
#26 May 08th 2007, 7:39pm
marjorievonnordeck
((He can, but remember Dorian was just raped and now he's seaking out his rapest in order to save his child... He will not take lightly to any kind of uninvited physical contatc. Enven though Dorian will not respond with an attack or cause anyone harm he may react rather violently... be warned.))
#27 May 08th 2007, 7:45pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 7:46pm
The Ferrett
"My ways faster." Corlin sighs. He revs the bike then speeds forward, grabbing Dorian and swinging him onto the back of the bike. "Hold on. He says, slipping on his helmet and crashing through the growth.
#28 May 08th 2007, 7:49pm
marjorievonnordeck
"UNHAND ME!" Dorina shouts thrashing violently to get out of the man's grip as soon as he feels the mans arm around him. Once he is released he jumps off of the contraption cusring very colorfully in Elvish as he does a rolling tumble on the ground in order not to get hurt.

Then he curses again as Corlin has ruined the trail. Exasperaited and unnderved he shudders. 'She was headed south,' he tells himslef, pushing his feelings aside for a moment, he knows she is to the south - he can still smell her camp fire. That in mind he makes a single leap up into the nearest tree and begins to tred lightly along the branches of the trees, with as much speed as his elven grace will alow. Knowing he cannot our run that man's... magic device, but knowing two that now he MUST reach Elsva by nightfal if he is going to find her, because he no longer has a trail to follow.

#29 May 08th 2007, 8:03pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 8:05pm
The Ferrett
Corlin stops when he realises Dorian has fllen off but quickly dismisses it, as he knows the elf will follow him if nothing else. In his palm he has a heat reading device ((Yeah there's a name for it but I'm not googling it just for now.)) and he takes off again following it towards the campfire. When it's visible to the eye, he slows down. ((Now I need GB))
#30 May 08th 2007, 8:09pm
Girlbrainiac
Elsva sat by the fire, tearing ravenously into her supper.

((She's wearing very little, lol, if you read her doorway post.))

#31 May 08th 2007, 8:12pm
The Ferrett
Corlin sees the amazon and decides to look as outlandish as possible, changing the cloak into a black leather jacket and grey jeans. He walks towards he, pushing the bike, the helmet on the handlebars. "Hello," he calls, "I'm an aquaiintance of your child's father, I'd like to talk to you."
#32 May 08th 2007, 8:16pm
Girlbrainiac
((ROFL. The fact that she's pregnant is news to her, as it only happened a few hours ago, lol.))

Quick as a cat, Elsva was standing, spear levelled at the odd male's chest. "Who are you? What do you want?" she asked, coldly threatening. "I have no idea what you're talking about. I have no daughters."

#33 May 08th 2007, 8:23pm
The Ferrett
"Stab away, that still doesn't change the fact that there is a strange elf looking for you sure that you are pregnant and not wanting to leave you by yourself. ((You can actually stab him you know, he has better healing abilities than Satan and we all know what I've do to him.))
#34 May 08th 2007, 8:25pm
Girlbrainiac
Elsva narrowed her eyes at him. "Leave, male. I have no desire to bandy words with drunken fools. I am strong. What need has an Amazon for a male other than to breed with? LEAVE."
#35 May 08th 2007, 8:35pm
The Ferrett
He stares at her then with a click of his fingers appears as he usually is, the contacts he's now familiar with in Hell gone and replaced with glasses, a plain white shirt and blue jeans replacing the cool outfit. "I am neither drunken, nor fool. And you may not need him, but he needs you - take it from someone who knows, people hurt when you run from them. He is willing to risk going against your tribe to be with his family - which is you and the child, which obviously you don't know about yet. So listen, calm down and STAY so he can talk to you."
#36 May 08th 2007, 8:42pm
Girlbrainiac
Elsva's eyes narrowed. "Family? My sisters are my family. I am of the tribe, and the child is of me, and belongs to me alone, and I belong to the tribe, so it belongs to the tribe. This male... This male is nothing, neither mine nor the tribe's, nor is the child his."

She held the spear tighter, ready to impale the man if he kept talking as he was.

#37 May 08th 2007, 8:55pm
The Ferrett
"His ideals say that you and the child do have some significance to him. Let him at least stay near the child, so that his heart is not constantly breaking, no person deserves to have their heart be in pain. Put it this way, you are trying to do to him something similar to banishing you from your tribe. An exile of the soul." ((Take that.))
#38 May 08th 2007, 8:59pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 8:59pm
marjorievonnordeck
"You may not be drunk, but you are a fool to approch her like that," Dorian said before dropping out of a tree about ten feet away.

Doran turned to face Elsva then, he shuttered visably when he looked at her. "The child," he said calm tone belaying his shaken apearance, "will be a male. I can assure you. I know you have no reguard for me, but I beg of you not to leave this child OUR child to exposure and death when he is bourn."

#39 May 08th 2007, 9:03pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 9:09pm
The Ferrett
"So you caught up." Corlin says, turning. "Remember what I said." he syas to the amazon.
#40 May 08th 2007, 9:08pm
Girlbrainiac
Elsva glared at him, now turning her spear on Dorian. "You have no claim. It is MY child. Mine and the tribe's. If it is male... Then his fate will be decided when the time comes. It shouldn't be your concern."
#41 May 08th 2007, 9:18pm
The Ferrett
"You know I was almost getting through to her. Thanks for getting possessive." Corlin sighs, before, making his eyes go white and producing large titanium cages around them. He then walks forward, towards Elsva's cage. "Hand me the spear. You two want to act like children, you're going to be treated like children."
#42 May 08th 2007, 9:25pm
marjorievonnordeck
Dorian shied away from the spear, clearly disconcerted by Elsva's actions. "It WILL be male," Dorian asured her, "when he is bourn at least will you let me care for him."
#43 May 08th 2007, 9:31pm
marjorievonnordeck
"Re- release me! Release her!" Dorian said angrily, "You... You have NO RIGHT TO BE HERE AT ALL! I DO NOT WANT ANYTHING TO DO WITH HER I ONLY CARE FOR THE CHILD!"
#44 May 08th 2007, 9:33pm
The Ferrett
"Oh, shut up." Corlin says, getting aggrivated with Dorian's whining.
#45 May 08th 2007, 9:33pm
Girlbrainiac
Elsva growled in anger and, rather than hand over the spear, jabbed it through the bars, seeking to impale him. "Let me free!" she hissed. "I am of the sisterhood! Diana's daughters! You cannot hold me here, male!"
#46 May 08th 2007, 9:34pm
The Ferrett
The spear slams into Corlin's stomach, and as he steps backwards the spear comes with him. "There are more than one way to skin a fish. And no, I'm not releasing anyone until you two are calm and have TALked things out. Now talk." Corlin says, walking away from the both of them, the spear still in his stomach
#47 May 08th 2007, 9:36pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 9:38pm
marjorievonnordeck
Dorian looked at Corlin coldly, "Don't you get it!? She raped me! All I want is for that child not to be exposed! RELEASE US NOW! YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO HOLD EITHER OF US!"

((ferrett... you will not be getting thre to either of them and I will give devine DM intervention if you don't let them free soon.))

#48 May 08th 2007, 9:38pm
The Ferrett
((I haven't gone against any rules - I checked. And just because you don't like Corlin doesn't mean you have to get all moderator on me. By the way, Father Alex will be up within the week.))
#49 May 08th 2007, 9:40pm
marjorievonnordeck
((I'm not geting moderator on you... I am being the DM and you are messing with my plot. Go read the quest rules... I get to do that because I am the DM... I am running the game. I can can controll the weathor and the gods, and anything else I want to except your charaters.))
#50 May 08th 2007, 9:42pm . Edited May 08th 2007, 9:43pm


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