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C.J. Heni
Ready or not here I come/Yeah thats right you better run/I aint gon' chase you down with no loaded gun/I'm just saying if you want me you better pack a punch/If you got somethin' 2 say then go grab tha mic/We can do this here, right now, yeah thats right/We can go from round 2 round all day 'n night/We'll get it poppin' right here on the lyrical battle ground/I aint even aimin' toward tha battle crown/Its Tha Juggaknot I'm a novice 2 this game but yeah I'ma stand my ground/Best believe, I aint gon' let no body push me around, Take me for granted or get tha best of me/Y'all only seein' one side, aint no body seen tha rest of me/Straight from tha 8.6.0 Danielson, Connecticut/Ya damn straight I'ma keep representin' it/Til tha death of it/On this track I got 30 seconds left, so I'ma make tha best of it/Tha real reason why I'm here is 2 overthrow these rappers, 'n take they career/I know it sounds funny/I aint even in it for tha money/I only got 16 seconds left so I gotta finish in a hurry/Its Tha Juggaknot, a.k.a Toxik-C/'N believe you me you gon' remember me/I aint playin games homey this aint hide 'n seek/So ready or not here we go on tha count of three/Ready? 1....2.....3

*this was a song I wrote a while back just wanted to get it copyrighted*

12/25/2007 #1
freakyAngel
Interesting lyrics. I like 'em, though it's not usually what I'd go for.

Do you actually have a melody for that? Or at least a rhythm? It looks like it can be a really good song, given the right singer and appropriate rhythm. Don't let this go to waste! ^.-

-fA

3/10/2008 #2
Verbal Essence
Ain't really feelin it but whatevs.

I'm too lazy to type much right now.

3/19/2008 #3
Huddled-In-The-Corner

It's okay. It has potential if it has a certain melody because there is a lot of rhyming phrases and then there are like two phrases that don't rhyme. Otherwise, it was pretty good.

7/14/2008 #4
fantasybookworm2012
Nice. What's the song about? Without a meaning it's just a bunch of rhymes stringed together.
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