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Arctic GypsyTopic: Fishing for reviews. :) Alright, since I can't see to get my story to show up under the category list or be searchable, this will have to be how I get it seen. :) It is called Havoc Rider, and you'll have to look under my work on my pen name to get it, the link to it is http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2409841/1/. It's a fantasy story about a young woman who's spent her whole life preparing to be a soldier, but she's not just any woman.Oh yeah, I suck at summaries, as you can see. Read and review if you will! Constructive comments and criticism please. A few things I'd like to know: What works for you or doesn't work for you? Does it flow properly? Was there anything that you found confusing? Thank you. | #1 Sep 04th 2007, 12:14am | |
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