I tried realy ** it but I want to see how im doing and I need help thanks

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2807583/1/CHERRY_BLOSSOM_ADVENTURE

Well, as seen in reviews, I liked it a fairly good amount. Just elaborating on hmmm how do I say this, lols I'm so tired. In chapter 3 and 4 things kind of moved very quickly. In the other chapters it would be important to explain more about where they are from etc. But I'm sure you'll do just fine with that. Just continue writing it out and expanding the plot-I revised a lot of my stories after I published them-and you will get comfortable with writing, the first few chapters are always the hardest. Please continue

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