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  lookingwest IT IS COMPLETE. 8D Now to finish the chapter, yaaay. 10/14/2011 #2,761 |
| lookingwest oh dear lord now it's like cute-o-rama 1000% over here and it's now 5AM. 10/14/2011 #2,762 |
 Jealous Rage Over here, I'm watching Criminal Minds and people are being burned alive. 10/14/2011 #2,763 |
| lookingwest OH. MY. GOD. Okay. So I FINALLY FINISHED THE CHAPTER T_T I have not written this much on this story in forever, tis' like old times. but no. I must wait to post this. I can't update right after I updated. MUST. HAVE. CONTROL. But I am REALLY excited and happy about the result of this. It is way better than I expected. The beginning sucks, so I think I need to work on that--but the end. Holy shit. Favorite thing I have written in a LONG TIME. sorry for rant. Just really excited. Okay. It's now past 5AM. They've started playing morning cartoons on the telly. But I'm going to read through this chapter and then finally go to bed, XD So excited! 8D 10/14/2011 #2,764 |
| S.R. Revel I miss the days, when now, I'd be heading to bed. I am the opposite, I am waking up. Damn. 10/14/2011 #2,765 |
| A. Gray Blah 4 1/2" Pages of backlog. I must admit I gave up reading that. I am doing the crochet because it is getting on winter her, and with the eating less I get hungry. In the winter I get bored, and haven't been able to sit at my comp to play 6 hrs of wow, now LoTRO. So I get bored and wat to eat so I started making jelwrey again and crocheting to keep my hands busy. Makes me not snack when i can't stand to be at my comp anymore. Plus we are going to buy a house and the blankets will come in handy! Black and burgandy all the way. Morning globe. 10/14/2011 #2,766 |
| Dr. Self Destruct i haven't used the word dick once. i'm not sure if i can. and it's not a principal thing, it's just that i really don't know if it actually fits the tone. but how would it not fit the tone, you ask? i have no idea. i'm going to have to say it some time, geesh. In my latest one I think I used it twice, but once was her calling him a dick because he was teasing her. Oh, and then i used cock twice. Not sure which is more offensive, but that's what happens when your main character is a crude pervert. :S But I guess people should be used to seeing the words dick and cock by now. xD Yeah, it's a balancing act. But the thing is, it'll be like that no matter how clean or dirty you make it haha. There are always gonna be readers who think you went too far, some who think you nailed it, and others who think you didn't go nearly indepth enough. Just gotta go 'til it feels right haha. ^ this. remember though, it's rated M. I know you probably did that more for language and violence or whatever... but meh. Sex is everywhere, put on some sunglasses and tell them to 'deal with it' if they don't like it. Who cares about kids anyways? x) All that should matter is if you enjoyed writing it and reading it. The beginning sucks, so I think I need to work on that--but the end. Holy shit. Favorite thing I have written in a LONG TIME. Seeeee. :D Not gonna lie. I'll probably skip to the chapter when you post it and read it without having read the others. I am very curious and guilty. 10/14/2011 #2,767 |
| Dr. Self Destruct Morning, AJ! Ah shit. I have a guy coming over later, I need to clean EVERYTHING. I hope he doesn't think I'm a whack job when he sees my room. Fuck... Yeah, he's definitely going to think I'm a whack job, you know, considering I collect pointy-things and have four swords on display hanging on my walls. Oh lawdy. 10/14/2011 #2,768 |
| Dr. Self Destruct I don't think I used 'dick' in the first non-pornographic sex scene I wrote either. I want to read Don's porn. 10/14/2011 #2,769 |
| Dr. Self Destruct You know, now that I'm thinking about it, after only one scene in TAK (which is really a day dream/fantasy), I don't use missionary. Ever. They're usually pushed up against something. o.o He likes to hold them from behind. Much more personal that way. xD Is this really the shit I think about when I just wake up? If I was a dude, I would totally have morning wood like all the time I bet. -_-' 10/14/2011 #2,770 |
| Dr. Self Destruct Ooooh boy. I get to post one of my fav TAK chapters today. :D Ugh, it's a long one. :S 6,300 words. I wonder if I should cut it in half... but I hate doing that because I can never find the perfect spot to do so. And then they have to wait another week to read the second half. But if I do, it'd be a mean cliffhanger, because there's obviously the promise of some hoochy-coochy just around the corner. Halp. Maybe I'll cut it in half and post both parts the same day. 10/14/2011 #2,771 |
| A. Gray Morning! I just signed up for the trick or treat. My husband lets me buy swords. to date I have a katana set, a glaive, like 6 daggers, a ninja sword... I forgeting something I know it. pointing things are awesome. 10/14/2011 #2,772 |
| A. Gray if it were my fave I would cut and post same day. 10/14/2011 #2,773 |
| A. Gray fml i just got a bug bit on the back of my hand and it itches like mad! 10/14/2011 #2,774 |
| Dr. Self Destruct My husband lets me buy swords. to date I have a katana set, a glaive, like 6 daggers, a ninja sword... I forgeting something I know it. pointing things are awesome. AJ, I think you are my soul mate. 8D Yeah, I think I found a good spot about halfway through where I can cut it. Think I'll post the first half this morning, then the second half a few hours later. Need to do one last read-through first. 10/14/2011 #2,775 |
| Dr. Self Destruct fml i just got a bug bit on the back of my hand and it itches like mad! The worst is when you get them between your fingers or toes. Dx Like paper-cuts. 10/14/2011 #2,776 |
| A. Gray Oh yes! I hate that but as I am typing its all red and tempting me to scratch it. I WON'T GIVE INTO YOU! MOOAHAHAHAHA! Yesterday I got all my work done, and now I have nothing but filling- created by the devil I know it- to do. I think I moght try to work on my continuation of Clan. I also need to look for a beta too so Don doesn't have to warry about it... Crap. 10/14/2011 #2,777 |
| A. Gray OMG YES! I just had a break through! Wow now I'm gonna have lesbian vampires... but it works out with the story line so well... crap. 10/14/2011 #2,778 |
| berley I skipped class to finish a chapter of Young Lust, and now FP is being lame and not letting me post it. Grr. 10/14/2011 #2,779 |
| Dr. Self Destruct That's weird. I just uploaded a few hours ago... maybe try again in a few minutes. 10/14/2011 #2,780 |
| berley Yeah, it could just be my internet. So I got four stories that I have do edit and then we do a workshop on Monday for my creative non fiction class, and out of the four stories I got only one of them was actually good. It was really good, but man the other three just...sucked. haha. I need to try and work on my critiquing skills so my classmates don't hate me by the end of it. 10/14/2011 #2,781 |
| Dr. Self Destruct Ugh, that would suck for me. Critiquing people over the computer is one thing, but having to do it to their face? I'd be afraid it'd start and argument, and I'm always so terrible when it comes to arguing. 10/14/2011 #2,782 |
| berley Luckily for my class, the writer who is being workshopped isn't allowed to speak, so no arguments there. They just sit and watch the rest of the group talk about their story. It's just that one story is about the writer's sister, and it's kind of personal. I just don't want her thinking I'm personally attacking her, just the story needs a lot of work. 10/14/2011 #2,783 |
| lookingwest heyyyyy, ahahaha, I just woke up. at like 2:30PM. YAAAY College. 10/14/2011 #2,784 |
| lookingwest Not gonna lie. I'll probably skip to the chapter when you post it and read it without having read the others. I am very curious and guilty. I permit this skipping of chapters, XD I really like it! As in--this also advanced the plot. Like in a major way that I wasn't expecting, which shall be fun 8D 10/14/2011 #2,785 |
| Dr. Self Destruct Right now I'm writing a really damp sappy scene. I forgot how bad I am at these. -_-' Trying to get into the argument where Kristoph tells Mina he killed Sarah, but it's proving difficult. :S 10/14/2011 #2,786 |
| Dr. Self Destruct He's too busy acting like a bitch. Talking about his feelings. Stop lying, Kristoph. We all know you don't have feelings. 10/14/2011 . Edited 10/14/2011 #2,787 |
| Dr. Self Destruct I really like it! As in--this also advanced the plot. Like in a major way that I wasn't expecting, which shall be fun 8D So excite! I hope you post it soon. :3 10/14/2011 #2,788 |
| berley Oh Kristoph. I just posted a new chapter of Young Lust, finally got it working. Writing in Brad's POV was a lot harder than I thought it was going to be. Shit has siriusly hit the fan now. 10/14/2011 #2,789 |
| Dr. Self Destruct Shit has siriusly hit the fan now. Ruh-roh. :o That reminds me, I still have a couple more chapters of Young Lust. I have this bad habit of procrastinating when I get near the end of stories, because I don't wanna finish it and have to wait for more stuff. I'm stupid. :( 10/14/2011 #2,790 |
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