reviewed chapter eleven and twelve of kid- and i think i did a link not a while back (my links arent working atm) -chapter 1 of eighteen (not the prologue) -and also reviewed wisp, by pencilsketchS

if anyones interested in reviewing for me, id be happy with one for Powered By Infinity-

and i promise to make my reviews totally honest and detailed!

Read and reviewed:

A Rose for Time and Space ch 2 by A. Barone

Rise From The Ashes ch 12 by Broken Cross

Nightmare with the Neighbour ch 4-5 by A Kiss in the Dreamhouse

Vampire and The Romantics ch 10 by lookingwest

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Feedback on Wish Star or any of my work would be appreciated. Thanks :)

Rightio, more reviews:

Fantasy by Snakefang

Our Lady of Darkness by Serendipitist Swan

I Never Said I Was Brave by lookingwest

Wish Star by Vernelley (3 chapters)

Ormoulu by Experiment101

Renastere by Eva Rieycoit

Wisp by PencilSketchS

Seven Little Men by zombie chickens (2 chapters)

Thief by Broken Bird

A Thousand Years Ago by Vroooommmmmm

That's all I'll do today... Anyway, as always, I would love reviews for The Unwanted. I return all reviews as soon as I can.

Hello there, folks. I bring reviews on this fine day...

Derek by TymCon

Eden by TymCon (2 chapters)

The Dreamer by Angel's Requiem

Seven Little Men by zombie chickens

Journeyman Shaman by Aspiemor (2 chapters)

Ra by GRudge

That's all I'm doing today... I'll be going back to school next week. Ugh, just what I need. T___T

Anyway, reviews for The Unwanted would be greatly appreciated and returned immediately!

Summary: She killed his parents and crushed everything that had ever mattered to him. Somehow, he didn't expect her to fall in love with him either. Meanwhile, his sister tries to search for him. Instead she's pulled into a journey of curses, betrayal and tragedy.

Oh, boy... Here it goes: My list of reviews I've given in the past 2 days... :P (Most are repaid reviews... :P)

Chpt 2 of "A Rose for Time and Space." by A. Barone

Chpt 10-11 of "Poems from the Psyche." by A. Barone

"Sleeping Sound." by zombie chickens.

Chpt 1 of "Mystery of the Hollow Planet." by zombie chickens

"Eyelashes." by sarahhh.

"Wait and Hope," by imaginarydeathmuffin.

"You Deserve Better," by Blade100

"At Peace," by Blade100

"See Into My Eyes." by Blade100

Chpts 1-2 of "The City," by She's A Mean One.

Chpts 1-8 of "Rise From the Ashes" by B. Cross. :)

Chpt 1 of "Eriad: The Siren Lure" by skyflower17 (beta-ing this story, so I thought that I should read the prologue first... xD)

Chpt 1 of "Random Poetry," by skyflower17

Chpt 2 of "Ra." by GRudge.

Chpt 30 of "Secrets that Kill," by Anonymous Soul.

Chpts 1-4 of "Haunted House," by Criminal Behavior.

Chpts 1-2 of "Forget Me," by andHeavenfell.

and, finally,

Chpt 1 of "Shadows," by Lianoid. :)

Phew! :)))

I still have to repay:

Vroooommmmm: 1

Eva Rieycoit: 6

andHeavenfell: 3

wearywriter: 9

and

Vernelley: 2

(I'll get to these later on this weekend! Don't worry; I haven't forgotten about you! :) )

As always, reviews on "Persephone's Flight," or "Two Similar Worlds" are always appreciated and returned (eventually. :P)

Oh, I also joined the June WCC, so here's a link to my story I wrote for it. :) "Perceptions." I've never really written anything from a prompt before, so tell me what you thought I did. :P

Review if you like it, and if you really thought it was good, vote for me! (voting begins on the 8th and ends the 14th.) :D

Thanks again, everyone. :)))

~Avid. :)

Hello Gossip! I have reviewed...

The Hashims Part 1: The Summoning by Vrooooommmmm (Five Chapters) I know I owe you three more!

Living The Dead Life by 1in6million

Shade by Broken Bird

Marked Special by Smylealong

The Lone Wolf Chronicles: Serity by Phantom Rottweiler

Derek by TymCon

The Mindless Ones by Kackex

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As usual, reviews for Rise From The Ashes would be amazing and paid back! Whoever posts the 400th review (16 away!) will be repaid with 4 reviews! :D.

Thanks!

Today, I managed to review:

Shadows by Lianoid

Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story by MeAsIAm (3 chapters)

Seven Little Men by zombie chickens

Thief by Broken Bird

The Painter by Q75

Could My Life Get Any Worse? by Piptik

I Never Said I Was Brave by lookingwest

That's all for today... I'm hungry. Anyway, reviews for The Unwanted are, as always, appreciated and returned immediately!

Reviewed another chapter of Rise From the Ashes by Broken Cross.

Chapter ten of Sense of Urgency is up! This one's a real suspenseful chapter. If you like superheroes, this is a story for you! Plus, you don't have to give me one huge review. You can review individual chapters, if you like.

Reviewed:

Persephone's Flight ch 1 by AvidWriter-92

The Unwanted ch 6 by andHeavenfell

Sense of Urgency ch 10 by Moonraker One

Vampire and The Romantics ch 11 by lookingwest

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Feedback on Wish Star in particular would be appreciated, but I don't mind reviews on anything else. Thanks :)

Hey, Gossip! :P

Here's what I reviewed yesterday...

Chpts 3-4 of "Villain," by wearywriter (This is such an amazing story... If you haven't read this yet, read it!)

Chpt 5 of "Four Lovers," by nickyO. (She has such catchy poetry. You should check it out. :D)

"Empty Core" and "Her and Him" by MeAsIAm. (Both are fantastic pieces, but I like Empty Core the best. :) )

:)

I plan on repaying ALL of my reviews today...

7 for wearywriter

3 for andHeavenFell

6 for Eva Rieycoit

1 for Vroooommmmm and sophiesix

3 for vernelley, and ranDUMM.

Phew! :P If I missed anybody, please let me know. :D

Requesting reviews for "Haikus and Other Short Stanza Poetry," or any of my one-shot poems... they need some love! :P

Thanks,

~Avid. :)

Only had time to review Vampire and The Romantics by lookingwest I will review more later. I did some re-writing on the coupling of werewolves would love some feed back. Thanks.

Sundays are so boring... And I go back to school tomorrow. Oh the joy.

Today, I managed to review:

Wish Star by Vernelley

Ormoulu by Experiment101

Shadows by Lianoid

The Coupling of Werewolves by Cagirl95

Sense of Urgency by Moonraker One

Persephone's Flight by AvidWriter-92

That's all for today... Bye bye!

Please review The Unwanted? All reviews will be returned immediately :)

Summary: She killed his parents and crushed everything that had ever mattered to him. Somehow, he didn't expect her to fall in love with him either. Meanwhile, his sister tries to search for him. Instead she's pulled into a journey of curses, betrayal and tragedy.

I reviewed "Kid" by Alias Blue - and I really enjoy reading this story and can dearly recommend it. :)

I'd also like my story "Fallen Angels" to be reviewed (since I worked really ** it, and I don't know if it's telling the readers what I wanted it to tell..)

Read and reviewed the first three chapter of "Risen from The Ashes"

I reviewed The Unwanted. It was good. It has a great balance of melancholy, happiness, sorrow, anger, and other emotions, and the characters are deep.

More Sense of Urgency reviews plz.

Reviewed:

Perceptions by AvidWriter-92

The Voice in my Head: Beta chapter 3 by 1.21 Jigawatts

Reviews for The Wildest of Tales would be appreciated, preferably later chapters. :)

Hello Gossip! I have reviewed...

The Thief by Broken Bird

Haikus and Other Short Stanza Poetry by AvidWriter-92 (Two Chapters)

The Painter by Q75

Could My Life Get Any Worse? by Piptik

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I need sleep desperately. I was at like...five grad parties yesterday and crashed at one. xDDD. Haha, so I'll probably go take a nap now and be back later for more reviewing! :D.

In the meantime, reviews for Rise From The Ashes will be paid back as soon as I can. Also, I'm only TEN reviews away from 400! Whoever posts the 400th will recieve 4 reviews back for one of their stories! Thanks everyone!

~B. Cross

I reviewed:

Rise From The Ashes by B. Cross (Chapters One and Two)

The Unwanted by andHeavenfell (Prologue and Chapter One)

I would very much appreciate some reviews on Bones And Shadows, or Shattered. I return reviews, you know.

I reviewed Finding Mikail by Pencil Sketch. Cool pys story there.

I would love some reviews on Shimbalama - Real fantasy. Particularly the later chapters.

Regards

Liam

I forgot something.. I reviewed chap 13, 14 and 15, incase u care.....

Reviewed Bones and Shadows.

Again, my story to review is Sense of Urgency

Hey, Gossip... All right... :P

Here's today's haul. :P

chpt 31 of "Secrets that Kill," by Anonymous Soul. (It's sooo awesome!!!)

chpts 1-7 of "Letters," by ranDUMM. (some were return reviews, but then, I just decided to keep reading it. :P)

"In the End, There was Nothing but Darkness," by sophiesix. (her entry for June's WCC-it's epic. :P)

"Be Grateful," "Wolf's Logic," and "The Weeping Willow," by Sercus Kaynine.

"40 Word Epic," and "Lost," also by sophiesix.

Chpts 1-4 of "Wish Star," by Vernelley.

Chpts 3-4 of "Forget Me," by andHeavenFell.

Chpt 1 of "The Fall," by Eva Riecoit..

Chpt 1 of "The Hashims Part 1: The Summoning." by Vroooommmmmm.

Yay! I reviewed a lot today! :DDD I'll work on returning more reviews tomorrow... :P

Requesting some reviews for "Persephone's Flight," or "Greek Gods and Goddesses Poetry Project." :D (or any of my poems, if you don't like mythology. *gasp* :P)

That's all I've got for today... Be back tomorrow with some more lovely reviews! :D

~Avid. :)))

Reviewed:

A Passing Storm by StrixAluco

Darkangel by colette.mclaughlin

Sense of Urgency by Moonraker One

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Please review Ione or Renastere. All reviews will be returned!

reviewed Romeo and Juliet by Mesiam...

Sanity by AvidWriter-92

can anyone please review

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2814854/1/BHARGAVA_THE_LIFE_OF_A_WARRIOR

OR

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2760472/1/The_Hashims_Part_1_The_Summoning

OR

BOTH :P

reviews will be returned....i promise...and and also appreciated....thank you....will review some more stories in the night....:)

I reviewed:

Ra by GRudge

I Never Said I Was Brave by lookingwest

Bones and Shadows by Inauspiscious Stars

Sense of Urgency by Moonraker One

Hopeless by Piptik

Eden by TymCon

Shade by Broken Bird

Stained Glass: Bloody Ashes by jeinee

The Tale of an Antagonist by Enprix D.

Chasing Perfection by esurio08

PhoenixDragon by Deli .x. Aly

I'm going now... I have homework, hehe... Anyway, as always, I'll ask for reviews on The Unwanted. All reviews will be returned immediately! Thanks =)

This is what I've reviewed for today... I might do some later tonight, if I get bored. :P

chpts 5-7 of "Forget Me," by andHeavenFell. :)

chpts 9-11 of "Rise From The Ashes," by B. Cross.

"Chasing Perfection," by esurio08.

"There is a Witch Among You," by waitingforwhatever

"Pain," by Dreamers-Requiem

and

chpt 5 of "Fairy Tale," by Dreamers-Requiem.

Requesting reviews for ANY of my one shots. Most are poetry, and they need some love...

"Sanity,"

"War's Fingerprint."

"Seven Sins Haikus."

"You're Not Like Me, i'm not like you." (This poem has the same characters as "Ten Minutes and You'll Be Broken," if you wanted to check that out too... :P)

"Realizations."

"Hypnos and Morpheus, A Requested Poem. :D"

"Perceptions," (written for June's WCC. :D)

"A Robin's Song," or "Dependent on You and Your Memories."

Thanks!!! ;))))))))

~Avid. :D

I reviewed:

Sense of Urgency by Moonraker One

That was all I had time for today. I would appreaciate some reviews on Bones And Shadows. I return reviews =D

I've reviewed

Rise from the Ashes (2-4) by B. Cross

Lost, Whispers and Racing For by Prolixius5

Our Remembrance by AvidWriter-92

The Fall by Eva Rieycoit

My Guardian Angel by LuckyNumbers

And while I would love reviews on anything that I've written, I would really like reivews on A Rose For Time and Space which is my most current story.

~Happy Reading & Writing All!

Reviewed:

Darkness Before Dawn ch 8 by Flamaij

Calling All Heroes! ch 4 by Blade100

Perceptions by AvidWriter-92

A Robin's Song by AvidWriter-92

Dependent On You and Your Memories by AvidWriter-92

Persephone's Flight ch 2 by AvidWriter-92

A Rose for Time and Space ch 3-4 by A. Barone

The Unwanted ch 7-9 by andHeavenfell

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Feedback on Wish Star or Set Me Free would be appreciated. (Set Me Free is kind of just -there-, but you can still review if you want)

I feel so... Ugh. I'm not feeling very happy today. I'm rather depressed actually.

I reviewed:

PhoenixDragon by Deli .x. Aly

Wish Star by Vernelley (4 chapters)

The Coupling of Werewolves by Cagirl95

The Tale of an Antagonist by Enprix D.

Shade by Broken Bird

Haircut by sarahhh.

Ormoulu by Experiment101

The Library by NB-writer (2 chapters)

That's all I'll do for today. I have a lot of homework that need to be done actually... Better get to them, then.

Please review The Unwanted? I return all reviews as soon as I can. =)

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