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miragecat123
Topic: The Children of Ra
Hi, I just started a new story and i was hoping you guys could give me some critiques and comments, it would be very much appreciated.

here's a summary: The planet of Serina is in chaos, its people live in fear and poverty under the rule of the ruthless The High Council. The people’s only hope lays in the hands of a secret trust of endowed monks who know the secret of their true leader's disappearance.

http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2416333

#1 Oct 02nd 2007, 1:29pm

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