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Rumba Rumba
Topic: Papel - I really need critique/suggestions!
I really, really need critique for my story Papel! It's the first draft and I'm looking to improve it A LOT. If anyone would be inclined to go over and take a look, I'd be really, really grateful. I'm willing to do a review for a review if you point me towards a story of yours you need critique for.

Usually I post my stories to critiquecircle but this is just a first draft, so I'd like to improve it before I post it there. Thanks ever so much! if anyone has any questions or suggestions about the story I'd be ever so happy to answer them.

Cheers!

lily x

#1 Mar 22nd, 9:32am

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