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Sexy vampirechick
Topic: What interests you in a story?
Well,I'm just trying to collect some ideas for my stories in how different people have different interests.So first,what really makes a story a great story?

For one,I like stories that grabs me and makes me want to hold on to it till the end.Mostly horror and mystery,for me.What about you?

#1 Nov 10th 2006, 8:02pm
Royal Bliss
Stories involving sociopaths, characters with cool names (not japanese) normal-cool like Jeremy or something... Realistic dialogue/reactions. No mary-sues. And none of that "I was abused" type situations (some is okay).
#2 Nov 10th 2006, 8:38pm
Gilded Coins
For me, the genre doesn't matter /too/ much. The most important part is that the story is well-written. I don't care if the plot is amazing or the characters scream originality if the prose isn't good. If the prose isn't good, I might not even get through it. Pretty much any rule of writing can be broken by the right writer, but for us amateurs, it's usually best not to assume we can pull off breaking certain rules. In other words, too much or too little description: no. Starting off slowly: no. Starting off too quickly: no.

Of course, after we get through the prose, having interesting characters and plot is good. I think part of writing a good plot is not letting the readers know what is going to happen next or, at the very least, not how it ends. There will always be people who guess the ending, but it better not be not painfully obvious (as it is in most movies nowadays). Then again, knowing the ending isn't always bad. For example, you could write an end-of-the-world story. The reader should know that the world is going to blow up in five days and everyone will die. And then, you'd probably concentrate on how the characters react to this knowledge.

Now, before, I write an essay, I'll answer your question more specifically. I like mentally-unbalanced characters, especially if the story is from their POV. I like seeing the other side so to speak. What goes on in the minds of the bad guys, the psychopaths, the bullies? Since most of us are normal people *coughWriters?Normal?Hah!cough* it gets boring, for me, to read about other good normal people. People might like heroes. I like heroes. But I also want to read about the villains.

I like characters that actually think. The character doesn't have to be a genius but having yae make a whole bunch of stupid decisions just to advance the plot (as happens in so many horror movies) is plainly annoying. Or having them not realize something obvious to the reader. E.g., buying a whole bunch of clumsy lies told by another character.

Something should happen. This is especially true in chaptered stories. If there is a chapter, something should happen in it to advance the plot. I don't mean a dragon should come and kill off a few dozen characters or the moon should explode—but there should be some point to it. Describing the history of the fantasy world does not count as "some point." Not in my opinion, that is.

Speaking of points, I've probably lost the point of this post, and I'd better stop before I got incoherent and end up speaking about gastric-brooding frogs. They're extinct, did you know?

#3 Nov 10th 2006, 11:32pm . Edited Nov 10th 2006, 11:36pm
Sexy vampirechick
True the stories containing pyschopaths are interesting.I never really had problems with finding a name for a story,but sometimes weird and old-fashion names like Jacob pops up.How do you find the names for your stories?
#4 Nov 11th 2006, 4:46am
Sexy vampirechick

Oh yeah!I would like to read a story with the mind of a criminal too.I'm trying to write one though.You can check it out by my stories.But I have no clue what else to add...hehe,so the next chapter won't be out too soon,unless I suddenly have an outrageous idea that pops into my mind.

#5 Nov 11th 2006, 4:50am . Edited Apr 10th, 12:48pm
dbz 77
There are several things that make an interesting story.

A consistent plot is important. Nothing is more important than a plot that makes sense.

Characterizations matter a lot. The main characters must have a developed background.

Spelling and grammar are also very important.

Surprises can also help, as long as they actually make sense in retrospect.

#6 Nov 12th 2006, 10:03am
Royal Bliss
but sometimes weird and old-fashion names like Jacob pops up

Yeah Jacob/Jake is a popular name even though it's old fashioned. I like those names best though because it gives the story more realistic feeling because most people today aren't named "Damien" or "Raven" or something unique like that.

q]How do you find the names for your stories?[/q]

Most people use Babynames.com. I just base my names off of people or just pick a name I like.

#7 Nov 12th 2006, 7:22pm
Lord Pacific
Ahhh...

Humanity...

I dont wanna read about a character that has a perfect life...

I want to read something about avarege people in a extraodinary/problematic/or whatever situation...

And characters must have emotions...

Not just like: "He felt sick" or "He was sad"...

I know the girls know what im talking about...

Men are more about facts: I punched that fool!!!

Women are somewhat like this: I punched that fool cause i was mad, but i felt bad afterwards...

#8 Nov 16th 2006, 5:38am
ONETRACKMlND
I like any story that is deeply thought out and has a stable plot. I don't go for romance or that area though.
#9 Nov 16th 2006, 6:09pm
Lord-of-Fools
Femslash gets my attention in a summary... for the actual story, it generally has to be well-written. I will read just about any genre if it's well-written. Compelling characters, historical accuracy etc. are all important to me.
#10 Nov 16th 2006, 11:36pm
Sexy vampirechick
May I ask what is Femslash?
#11 Nov 25th 2006, 2:44pm
Gilded Coins
Slash, but with females. Slash refers to homosexual relationships, so femslash is female/female.
#12 Nov 25th 2006, 2:53pm
Lord-of-Fools
Yep, that's the one. I tend not to read m/m slash though. It's not because I'm against their relationships, it's just that I don't particularly want to read about them because I don't like imagining one, let alone two men, having sex.
#13 Nov 25th 2006, 3:30pm
Heart In Africa
*If the first chapter of a story causes me to ask questions, then I'm usually in for the entire ride. This obviously depends on what's happened so far, but one that always comes up is "Where would I take this next if I were writing it?"

If you're not asking yourself questions early on about what you're reading, then you'll soon enough realize you're not very interested in what will happen next. Even better...if a story's resolution offers yet more questions to linger after the end.

*When a writer does not assume his or her readers are stupid by spoon-feeding them subtext.

*Good grammar is an important one. You can usually tell whether someone's creatively "breaking the rules" or simply doesn't know better (which is excusable depending on their age!).

*I'm also really attracted to stories that are highly unpredictable.

*Perhaps temporarily, I'm a little fascinated with well-written action scenes (it's the one thing I'm uncomfortable with about some of my own writing).

#14 Nov 25th 2006, 5:03pm
Limited Edition
Let's not forget about the importance of characters.
#15 Nov 26th 2006, 8:16am
Sexy vampirechick
True,true. It seems like I like to revolve around my main characters more,is that a good thing or a bad?
#16 Nov 26th 2006, 6:08pm
Limited Edition
Good or bad...it's simply natural, or else they wouldn't be there XD But I can understand that some writers put the emphasis in the plot and the story to be told and others in the people behind them.
#17 Nov 27th 2006, 1:16pm
Sophia Victoria
Hmm. . . here are the ff:

*Horror

*Tragedy

*Mystery

*Humor

*Supernatural

*Suspense

They all ROCK!!!!!*0*0*0*-*

#18 Mar 03rd 2007, 11:00pm
Sophia Victoria
Hmm. . . here are the ff:

*Horror

*Tragedy

*Mystery

*Humor

*Supernatural

*Suspense

They all ROCK!!!!!*0*0*0*-*

#19 Mar 03rd 2007, 11:01pm
VampiresTears
Okay i was going to do this for a story but i think you might enjoy to write it more. IT was going to be called dream scape but it about people in the really world that fall a sleep and there another world called dreamma and it like another world filled with creatures were's and vamps and other mystics and people live in this world and will take over your body when you fall to sleep and they can use the body to travel into the human world doing horrid things like oni. You know demon, ice queens. Hope you like.
#20 Apr 26th 2007, 4:14pm
Fractured Illusion
Something should happen. This is especially true in chaptered stories.

This seems to be a normal problem, as it mostly feel like filler space in chaptered stories. I know I myself used to have a lot of it (hopefully not anymore though, but I am probably too optimistic regarding this). It's all about "killing your darlings" (removing excessive text that is, well, filler).

What interests me are:

dialouges that show off the quirky characters,

insights of quirky characters (as mentioned before, "normal" characters aren't truly that interesting)

things that happen (ie, it's not all filler). Combine all this with decent grammar, and we have something I could read.

#21 Jul 15th 2007, 12:45pm
concerto49
I've never exactly used fillers, then I have. No, I can't judge. People should decide when they read what I write - readers are the judge.

Anything that's good. Realistically, I've said once - okay I'll only be interested in say romance, but then I saw a very interesting fantasy idea, okay I turned to that, etc... the cycle goes on. What it's about doesn't matter. What matters is the result that captures the reader.

It must make you feel and experience the journey. You have to be able to understand the characters (i.e. they are realistic) and you will get emotional with them.

Oh by the way, I should mention - yes I have a habit of not reading much of your story if your intro is boring. Fact is, doesn't everyone give up after reading say five lines and it was boring. What happens after doesn't matter? I mean it's like saying I'll take you to watch a movie. Now I warn you the start is boring. Won't you come in after? You can't even tell that after the start it'll be interesting just as well.

#22 Aug 07th 2007, 6:14am
Absolut Hooliganism
Aside from a competence with plot, character and grammar, a grasp of themes and wordplay also help, but not so much as a definite voice and general way with words are really nice to see. You can have a lot of things in a story, but if it simply isn't interesting, then it's probably likely that it won't be read. That being said, I generally look out for satirical yarns, though any sort of meaty character drama draws my attention.
#23 Sep 19th 2007, 10:23pm
Limited Edition
Damn, wish I COULD write fillers. My stories end up very short because I don't know how to write fillers XD Some people like long, long stories. Does anybody know why?

I agree with the intro thing. I usually click the story away if it starts with a cliché or if it's boring. I don't even review then.

Wordplays can be really fun and vary the language, but then sometimes they can go too far and make the reader confused as to what they're really saying. They're good as long as they're not just word-pooping.

I like stories that could actually take place, no matter the genré. I want to know that they're fictional, but also look out the window and think that it could be happening. Unfortunately, many writers sink very deeply into their fantasy and their dreamworld. The dreamworld kinda annoys me.

#24 Sep 21st 2007, 4:04pm
Sexy vampirechick
What exactly are write fillers?
#25 Sep 21st 2007, 9:25pm
concerto49
Fillers if you ask me are stupid.

For example, if there is anime that occurs once a week and the manga comes out once in three months - the anime would go faster than the manga. In order to not have to stop the anime in order to wait for content from the manga, the producers of the anime create fillers that waste your time. Well no, they are bits that are not found in the manga storyline and for the purpose of both extending the time, but to keep you entertained. Well good fillers could have their own storyline.

But most often, fillers are stupid. They're random episode that does not have the quality of the original ones.

#26 Sep 21st 2007, 9:32pm
Limited Edition
Yup. In writing, fillers are...little happenings that don't do anything to drive the actual story forward, but they're written there anyway to make the story longer. If you write a filler in a story that you hand to your writing teacher, she'll prolly **-slap you and tell you to rewrite it.
#27 Sep 23rd 2007, 12:28pm
Takiyana
my interests are stories that focus on the crappy side of life, drugatics, alcoholics, that sort of thing. my stories occasionally round off to that sort of things, what with psychopaths, and what not. blood, gore, traumatics incidents, grueling torture, mental instibilites, all that jazz. i especially love to put that into my characters.XD
#28 Mar 02nd, 3:39pm
Dr. Vox

thought-provoking (but not philosophical or theoretical) stories that usually contain a good bit of dark humor, irony, satire...all that good stuff.

also, original things. a weird but awesome way the author writes, for example.

dystopias too. but that just goes right up there with satire, anyhow.

the characters are also a huge part for me. I can get really obsessed with a literary character if they're written very well and believable.

#29 Apr 10th, 12:45pm
starleaf

"How do you find the names for your stories?"

(i'm not good with the quoting feature, hehe)

Vampire, I've never done this myself, but the author of The Great Gatsby (F Scott Fitzgerald) used a phone book and mixed and matched names to name his characters. It turned out really well. :)

#30 Apr 17th, 9:08am
MySunshine

i prefer romance stories to others, actually, but i could make a few exceptions xD

the first thing that - might be unusual ... - is the title. the title has to kinda catch my attention, sound interesting and appealing, you know? i don't really care that much about the summaries. might be, that the author isn't good at writing them, so yeah.

i enjoy reading stories that are interesting from the start, and kind of build up the tension, or however you call it. and another weird thing of mine: i don't like weird names. and i don't even know what i think weird names are o.0

well, anyways, the most important thing for me is that the story is enjoyable and realistic ...

#31 Apr 21st, 10:40am
helixdown

Well, that's a very broad subject, stories can be great in several different, even unexpected ways. However, the things i love are this, an emotional drive to it, something that actually makes the readers heart wrench is incredible, and makes for a great story. Lots of twists and turns, for me, if i can correctly predict what the ending will be, it's a bad ending. And lastly, though it's not really necessary, i actually like stories that dare to touch on things that would otherwise be considered "taboo", now this doesn't mean have a story with a sex scene every chapter and a rape every paragraph, but maybe a story that can give you a deep, intelligent insight onto abortion, or rape, or 9/11, etc.

#32 Jul 16th, 6:38am

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