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my poetic lie sense

Topic: Offering genuine advice/critque on poetry...please return favour.

Just like the title suggests. I'd like to think of myself as a passable reviewer..i may be harsh if i don't like it or i may be really encouraging to those poems that inspire me.

I'm doing poetry as a major work next year so i'm hoping i can get some good experience before i start

:) that's all

#1 Aug 28th 2007, 4:09am

Midnight In Eden

Ah, very cool.

I'm doing poetry as a major at the moment and critiquing here is a great way to do well in workshopping classes.

I'd love you to check out "Untitled-a nonet" and "Rewind, Slow Motion" I'm still having difficulty with the two.

I'll return the favor, just let me know what you would like looked at.

#2 Sep 04th 2007, 6:47pm . Edited Sep 04th 2007, 6:48pm

my poetic lie sense

Thanks!

I'll have a look at your two poems but I can't right now - its exam week and all my assignments are due tomorrow.

But i should be able to do a proper job in about 2 weeks time? It might sound a bit late/far away but i'm happy to do it.

If you wouldn't mind, i will be putting up my extension english assessment onto fictionpress around the same time i review your poem, so would you mind taking a look at it too?

that'd be great!

well, see you in a few weeks!

#3 Sep 04th 2007, 11:14pm

tesa131313

Thanks for sharing the load.

My latest poem,

The Nomad

And an older peice,

Slummed

Isn't getting as many reviews as I'd like.

So it would be super-cool if you reviewed them.

I'll review back, since that's your policy.

TTYL

#4 Sep 13th 2007, 8:59am

my poetic lie sense

yay! exams are over.

i am on right away to review your poems!

also, i have just uploaded the first half of my task 'The Invisible Worm & the American Beauty'...could you please have a look at them too?

I'll upload the second half later because i've been having a few troubles with fictionpresss...

#5 Sep 18th 2007, 7:41pm

hateandkill-D

hey, think you could review some of my stuff? my new stuff needs reviews and i'm working on getting some up. i have over 20 new poems to type, which'll probably take forever causea all my stupid homework and junk...

#6 Oct 16th 2007, 3:17pm

Jeannie-Redd

Would anyone care to review any of my poems? I've only gotten slight reviews and would appreciate ANY feedback. Flames don't count!

Thank you,

~Jeannie-Redd

#7 Oct 23rd 2007, 8:16am

my poetic lie sense

i'm sorry everyone...i can't contiue this thread. i just started year 12 last week and i've realised how much work/time i'll have to put into this final year. i wont have time anymore to read all your poetry. i'm sorry, i just dont have the time or the energy to.

#8 Oct 24th 2007, 1:36am

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