Please review mine. Title: Scent of spring. Any suggestions, criticisms or comments are allowed. Thank you.

It would be lovely if you could review anything of mine. None of them are very good yet, and I'm looking for reviews to help me get better. I'd say 'You' or 'Hopeless' would perhaps be my best work to date, but as they're a bit lengthy, any of my poems would be fantastic. Thank you!

I would really appreciate it if you felt like taking a look at some of my work?

Let me know what you think =]

Aelfin

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I have many poems.

I need more critique and nice comments.

Thanks if you review!

~ArekuKawaii

I was woundering if you can review my poems...

Smiles Fake, Hearts Break;

Night Music;

Let it Rain.

Thanks, I could use some feedback on 'em.

hello, i have posted a new poem and it would be great if i get some reviews from anyone..

thanks

hi! it would make me uber happy for some people to review some of my poems...

but you dont have to if you dont want to...i was just saying....

i would appreciate reviews...

it'd be cool if you review my poem " Enchantress" thank you.

If you could comment on Fifteen-Year-Old Tangerine or The Weed, it would be greatly appreciated.

If you could give me some heavy constructive criticism on any of my poems, I would greatly appreciate it.

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