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Erin Lynn

Topic: I Will Review

Anyone that wants a review done of a poem, just post what you want reviewed here and I will get to it within that week. There are some rule, unfortunately...

- No angsty poetry. I don't want to hear about your "dagger stabbing through a bloody black rose on the edge of destruction" or something like that. Sad poems are allowed, but they have to be meaningful, not just random emo phrases jumbled together.

- No poetry about poetry. I don't like them. I have never read a poem about poetry that was good. And I never will.

- Keep the length short. I don't have all day to read your poem and I will probably fall asleep doing so. If you can write a short poem that is fantastic, I will praise you above all.

- Don't yell at me. I write what I feel and if you can't take it then leave. I would love to answer any questions you have about the review in order to help you grow, but I will not tolerate abuse. Take it out on me in a poem if you must... just don't make it angsty :P

- This is just a suggestion. Reviewing back is always a fabulous idea. I would be elated to find a review of one of my poems from each person I reviewed when I logged on the site the next day. Of course, that would be a perfect world - those don't exist.

So post away, if you dare!

#1 May 25th 2007, 9:41pm

Kyo Nikaido

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2367859/1/

I think the title of this is still alittle wrong, but i dunno how else to put it...Please review =D

#2 May 27th 2007, 11:29pm . Edited May 27th 2007, 11:29pm

Erin Lynn

I have reviewed your poem. Anyone else?

#3 May 28th 2007, 9:21am

Inkling of Tears

wow you're picky. i have some short ones. read if you dare.

#4 Jun 01st 2007, 10:20pm

tesa131313

well. um. You have a lot of rules...

review my poems that won't annoy you if you please...

#5 Jun 02nd 2007, 8:20am

Midnight In Eden

Haha love the rules.

Brilliant **. Anything from the past few months I wouldn't mind a look at. I get unnecessary praise and I'd like someone to tear into me.

#6 Jun 02nd 2007, 9:08pm

Erin Lynn

Hey- All reviews will be done on Friday! Check back then. Kinda busy now.

#7 Jun 04th 2007, 5:14pm

YoungRider432

hi...I'm can someone please review my poems if they have a chance? thanks

#8 Jun 08th 2007, 12:26pm

akikodomo

Review if you can. please, no one has reviewed me in over a month.

#9 Jun 08th 2007, 5:41pm

YoungRider432

I'm having trouble figuring out HOW to review...please help

#10 Jun 08th 2007, 6:21pm

akikodomo

Review please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#11 Jun 10th 2007, 3:37pm

Ripped wings of a Butterfly

I accepted all your rules and 'will' accept your review on mine poetry.. :P -an eye for an eye-

#12 Jun 12th 2007, 6:34am

Ripped wings of a Butterfly

I accepted all your rules and 'will' accept your review on mine poetry.. :P -an eye for an eye-

#13 Jun 12th 2007, 6:41am

Justin Leigh

If you please...

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2382165/1/

#14 Jun 26th 2007, 1:31pm

Amin Emilio Aun Joven

Could you review my poem?

What do you seek?

Peoms of Might and Beauty

#15 Jul 20th 2007, 7:45am

rebellious spirit

hey will you please review my posts?? any ones you are ok with reviewing..and for whatever you say about them, thanks in advance.

#16 Jul 21st 2007, 2:28pm

Guerrilla Poet

Thanks Boss, I've got one that needs reviewing called Slam. Eleven liner. Check it out if you don't mind, and for sure I'll be reviewing yours.

#17 Aug 29th 2007, 6:11am

Erin Lynn

I really haven't reviewed in a very long time (like months), even when I promised to, so I have some free time now to go back through and get some done. Sorry for the delay- I've been extremely busy!

#18 Jan 24th, 4:22pm

Erin Lynn

I just reviewed one for Inkling of Tears

#19 Jan 24th, 4:41pm

simpleplan13

Please review one of my more recent pieces (I'm pretty sure although they're angsty they're not the angst you dislike). Thanks!

#20 Jan 31st, 7:03pm

Kikyuu

Would you take a look at 'Collection' and 'Diamond Eyes', please? I'd like the latter, especially, to get some constructive criticism.

#21 Apr 20th, 12:31am

Ventus Shadows

I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on my poems. Thank you!

#22 May 31st, 8:24pm

Almsivi

Feedback on my newest poem, The Game, would be very much appreciated. I'll review back. Thanks!

#23 Jun 02nd, 7:30pm

Johannas mirror

Oh how kind! Would you review Ascending with Abigail?

#24 Jun 08th, 5:45pm

Server Not Responding

Oh, nice! My poems could most definitely use some constructive criticism. If someone could review "A Study of Tetris in Tanka", that would be lovely. :)

#25 Jun 09th, 9:12am

kloun doll

aw, can you review this poem mine "Angel cake" ? it's a poem about angels...

thanks.

#26 Jun 25th, 10:14pm

doctor's diagnosis

If you could review any of mine it would be lovely. I suppose do have some "angsty" poems, but I think they'r pretty easy to identify and ignore. :)

#27 Jul 07th, 2:05pm

mylittlefirefly

Please review one of my poems :) thanks!

#28 Jul 15th, 7:10pm

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