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stuck in bed

I'm looking for stories to read and I know how good it feels to get some reviews and constructive criticism. So if you have anything of yours that you'd like me to look at, then go ahead and tell me! :)

5/03/2012 #1
SophieInPink

Hey! If you're still looking for stories to read, I would love if you read any of my stories (see the links in my profile). The one that's most important to me and that I work the most on (and thus would most appreciate feedback on) is Scandalous, but if that doesn't interest you, feel free to read any of my others.

Thanks loads!

Soph xx

5/25/2012 #2
stuck in bed

Thanks!

I have read Scandalous and I have posted a review! (It's a great story, by the way)

If by any chance you could feel interested in reading my story - it's the only one I have written so far - then that would be great. Don't feel obliged to however!

:)

5/26/2012 #3
jaybeeuk

I love reviewing too:)

How about I review yours now, and you can review mine? (It's called Legionnaires.)

Cheers!

6/02/2012 #4
stuck in bed

I've reviewed your story!

Thanks :)

6/03/2012 . Edited 6/03/2012 #5
Sufrir

Hey when you read my story you wont resist the temptation to review ;D

6/13/2012 #6
stuck in bed

Haha, really? Should I take up that challenge then? :)

6/13/2012 #7
Stormi Reagan

I'm really glad someone made this topic! Looking forward to reading :)

And because I think everyone wants their story to be out there, here's mine _

Title: Shall We Sleep

Summary: It is the stormy summer of 1916, and a 16-year-old girl falls for a dark, frightened, and internally tortured boy in the taunting jaws of the woods. At night she sneaks away from home to gain his trust-this wrecked boy who scours away from her very touch

Thank you!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3024603/1/Shall_We_Sleep

6/13/2012 . Edited 6/13/2012 #8
Sufrir

yeah check it out ;) http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3031736/1/Days_Light_Nights_Fleeting_Dream

6/13/2012 . Edited 6/13/2012 #9
Midnight.raindrops

Read and review mine? I just finished the third chapter and I think it's a lot better than the first two. Mostly because I made it longer and put in more details. I'm thinking of rewriting the first two chapters. Let me know what you think!

Thanks a ton!

7/09/2012 #10
Tortillion

I'd appreciate any feedback on my story "The Pretty, Burning Sea"

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3040759/1/The_Pretty_Burning_Sea

It's slow right now, but once I get a few chapters in, it'll move a little more smoothly. :)

Summary: Chloe Johnson is on a cruise to sail away from all her problems. Her dream cruise turns into a nightmare after pirates sink the liner and kidnap her. Trapped with two other women aboard the pirate ship, she's relieved when the captain's brother, Jack, frees them and allows them free reign of the ship. Chloe attempts to use his niceties to her advantage but ends up succumbing to them in the end.

I suck at summaries. :c I promise it's better than I make it sound.

I love reviewing other people's stuff too, so if anybody wants to shoot me a PM with a link I'd be more than happy to read and review!

7/10/2012 . Edited 7/10/2012 #11
ceryslikesturtles

Heya. I was just wondering if you could check out my story, In Pieces. I have only just posted it today and only just worked out how to use fourms! Hahha. But I would love it if you did read it!

7/19/2012 #12
Hammsters

Hey, so I just recently joined FictionPress and my stories...well...they're not nearly as popular as they were on FanFiction. I'm gonna be posting a story called Untouchable soon, do you think you could read and review just so that I know it's worth posting?

7/27/2012 #13
stuck in bed

I'm sorry, but as I'm quite busy at the moment, I don't have much time to review.

However, in a month or so, I'll be free and I'll do review then. Hope that's alright!

8/04/2012 #14
iheartyouinfinitly

Could you read mine? I'm looking for some serious constructive criticism.

8/05/2012 #15
auroraglider

I am a new member and have just started to post my first story. It is titled, "Unconcious Love."

1/26 #16
abct

Wow, of course, I'd be glad to have you review my work especially since its the first thing I've written in year. Please do read The Right Kiss by abct. Its rom-com and is loosely inspired by Pride and prejudice.

2/09 #17
Windzor

If you're still looking for stories I have a fantasy romance that I would love for you to look at. I've had one great review about it recently and I would love to hear what others think about it. I'm still in the progress of writing it, though. I hope you R and R.

Thanks

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