Hwangish SallyTopic: HELP MEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WANTED.PLEASE REVIEW. HOLA PEOPLE! [= JUST AN ANNOYING NEW PERSON HERE AND AS YOU WOULD EXPECT, ASKING FOR SOME GOOD CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ON ANY OF MY CRAP WRITING PIECES. ILL TAKE WHAT I CAN GET. WHY AM I WRITING IN CAPITALS? IT LOOKS MORE EXCITING THUS DRAWING YOUR ATTENTION! [= SMART MOVE HUH? HAHA. ANYWAYS, MY COLLECTION OF WRITING CONSISTS OF A FEW NICE BUT VERY DIFFERENT POEMS AND A ROMANTIC DRAMEDY WHICH SERIOUSLY NEEDS SOME OF YOUR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. SORRY FOR SOUNDING DESPERATE AND LIKE AND ADVERTISEMENT BUT YEAH I KIND OF AM DESPERATE AT THIS POINT. [= -Hwangish Sally |