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Dani P
Topic: Untitled War/Action Story in need of help
Ok I admit, I suck at the whole grammar stuff. So what I'd really like help with is the grammatical stuff, making sure the story line makes some sort of sense and any other bits of advice that'd be helpful. Yes i like hearing how much people love my story, but what is your favorite part? why do you like it? etc... I'm at chapter four and bout 17,000 words into it, and nowhere near done, but if anyone could read what i have id be eternally grateful.

Oh and any title ideas would be apreciated muchly!

#1 Jan 25th 2007, 6:43pm
Dani P
well I now finished chapter four and I'm at 21,000 words give or take a few hundred. I still could really use someone to look over my stuff.
#2 Apr 13th 2007, 12:45pm

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