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Chris Taylor
Topic: I've got a story that could use some work.
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2224795/1/

That would be Fyre Eyed, it's a story that has been brewing in my head for the better part of the last half decade, and I think I'm more into it now than I was back when I was in high school, but a little constructive criticism never hurts.

#1 Mar 23rd 2007, 12:47pm

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