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DarkBlysse
Topic: Incarnate
Hey. Recently, I've found myself lacking in the 'useful reviews' department. When I first posted my story (the name of which was 'Kipic' back then) I had several faithful reviewers who would tell me all the wrongs and rights, should-have-dones and what-the-hell-were-you-thinkings of my story. I was grateful beyond belief that someone new to Fictionpress and to writing had garnered so much attention. But alas, that has gone away. Now, I have but one reviewer who will leave critique and one other who only says they love my story to bits. Much as I appreciate them, I'd love for people to check out my story and give me the help I feel I need. I know that my story has a lot of potential, but I also know that it's lacking in certain areas. I hope that with your and others' help, I will be able to improve 'Incarnate' beyond what I could on my own.

http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2282093

Thank you.

--Blysse

#1 May 15th 2007, 10:39am

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