You've opened the door, might as well make yourself comfortable.

Ramble.... but most of all HELP EACHOTHER OUT...

We're all writers right?

So let's be a group of helpful writers...

uh people helping people... writers helping writers and all that jazz...

LoL So pull up a chair... whip out your ideas and have your stories handy, let's make this a forum worthwhile? LoL

L.L

And while we're on this topic :) I'm going to advertise my revamped novel These Circumstances

It's about a teenage girl who's lost her parents. One day, while she's still emotional over her loss, she spies a guy in a cafe who looks like her dear father. And so she begins to follow him...

I'll just tell you that much and let you figure the rest yourselves~~

Well my story is called Just A Girl. It's actually a story about a girl named Jill. It all started when she was in sixth grade, when she liked a guy, her twin brother's best friend. They used to be like best friends, however, when Jill had the courage to tell him how she felt, he didn't take it seriously (she's been dumped perhaps, lol).

So the story continues in junior year.

Just uploaded the prologue though. Please R&R. Thanks.^_^

Morose Shade of Yellow

Thanks,

RXH

So like everyone else, I'm just looking for someone to read my newest story, Shattered Fools, and possibly my older one Waiting at the Sidelines. Right now, I've got writer's block for WatS... Shattered Fools is coming along nicely, I'd like to think.

And now is when I stop rambling. xD

I don't know if it's because it completely sucks, or if it's because there's just so many stories on this website that no one gets to it, but if anyone would reveiw mine then I'll try to review yours also. I would really appreciate constructive critisizm or whatever else you have to say.

thanks to whoever reads it =]

I've posted some short stories up, and I'd love it if someone would read and review them! Thanks so much, it'll hopefully improve my writing. I'm thinking about starting a new story with frequent updates.

-Kyle

I'd love it if someone would read and review some of my short stories, I'm thinking about starting a long story with frequent updates.

-Kyle

But yeah, knock yourselves out.

I should be working on it now, probably.

But basically it's about two sisters;

Jasmine (the smart one) is seventeen and has the whole 'big sister' thing down pat. Protective, caring, and loyal, it often seems like she cares more about her sister's life than her own, even though she's star of the debate team and generally better liked than her sister.

Caris (the pretty one) is fifteen and beautiful. She can't help it that all the boys are after her and she doesn't really mean to be a flirt. But she's definitely got the whole 'heartbreaker' reputation going, which means that she's not the most popular among other girls.

And then there's Trevor.

He's the class clown who's been in love with Caris since he was in the 8th grade, and the fact that he's always been her 'guy friend', that she's never thought of him 'that way' doesn't seem to be bothering him.

If this sounds interesting to you (and I hope it does) please read and review!

My Fake Heart; Cataclysmic! The story of Amanda, her friend Natalie, Natalie's ex-girlfriend Janis, Janis's cousin and Amanda's ex Zach, Amanda's brother Leonard, and how a little lie brought them all together and rearranged what they called reality. Janis dumped Natalie, and Nat just wasn't ready to let go. She jokingly tells soemone that she and Amanda are dating, and it gets around. So, better than trying to deny the rumor, Amanda decides they should go along with it, and make Janis jealous in the process. Janis, believing that Amanda is only dating Natalie out of pity, becomes angry, and begins to realize she just might actually want to commit for once.

Zach, who is a jackass, gets dared to kiss Leonard. Deciding he actually liked kissing poor Leonard, Zach sets out to frustrate, tease, and infuriate Leo. But eventually, he starts wondering...is he still kissing Leonard to mess with his mind, or could he actually like a boy?

Yeah, did i mention lots of slash...? I've already gotten a good number of reviews, but they're like crack to me! yummy...anyway, does that sound like a good manga or comic to you guys? cause i was thinking of making it into one...

Full Preview below.

Jon is an average 16 year old boy, trapped in the hopeless suburbia of mediocrity. What starts as a sparring match with his friends, ends with an encounter with a being named Azura. Azura is part of an Organization known as the Rift. And, as she comes for Jon, his life is thrust into an epic trans-dimensional conflict for the concept of balance. The mechanism that allows all life to function has been thrown off its hinges, and its up to Jon and his allies to return equilibrium to the equation, before Chaos and Sin tip the scales in their favor.

I really hope you guys read it! THE RIFT: Balance

But I do have a story what im about to say is the best thing ill get to a back cover summary

Blackwater Middle School, it was a average school filled with its problems, fights, cliques, test hysteria. But it never expected a shooting. 4 students entered with 9mms, Uzis, homemade grenades, and AK-47s determined to make Columbine a joke. But there is more than a shooting

The school has become a testing ground for a new breed of weapon

It was The Third Reichs dying hope

It is more deadly than a Nuclear weapon

And now it will be unleashed upon the students who must escape it or die

Shootout!

Any reviews or constructive criticism is appreciated :)

The one I have currently up is one called "Margarita Lullaby". It's basically about two schoolgirls who become fast friends, despite one having a crush on the other, and the downfall of one of them through a series of odd events that seem to be coincidence, but seem too weird to be as the story progresses. It's hard to explain because of all the suspense the story has, but it's interesting I guess. Constructive criticism is very welcome for the story.

I also have a quick question. I'm writing a young adult book, but it is a science fiction. It doesn't seem to be getting any attention AT ALL in the young adult section. This is a huge disappointment because it really turns into an amazing epic story/idea. I really don't know how this story came to me, but it has been nagging at me to write it down for years. When I do write it down no one sees it! So, after all that, my question is: Should I move it to the Science Fiction section?

Oh, and if you happen to be bored and need entertainment please try reading it. Test the water because it is not meant for everyone (not everyone likes sci-fi)!

And, Vivi8706, maybe you should move your story to the Sci-Fi section, but explain that it's for young adults.

Because I have no problem shamelessly advertising my stuff, I would love if people would read my other two (uploaded) stories as well.

Bridges Fall is a sci-fi story about a mercenary rescuing a man she despises in order to collect the paycheck of a lifetime.

Getting There is a fantasy novel length story about a teenage theif who ends up in another world and finds herself caught up in the journey to prepare for an epic battle against the tyrant of their world. This story is not hosted on fiction press, just a few short passages are, so if you would like to read all or some of it just contact me (contact info is listed, or just use what fiction press provides) and I will give you the link to it.

Also, I have another story that I have just posted up. It's called DreamBoy. It's about a boy who dies in a motorcycle accident, and what this has to do with a girl's realistic dreams...

PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!

Anyway, I would totally appreciate it if some people would read (and review) and tell me things that could be better, because that would be awesomely helpful.

Best of luck with your story.

Especially for "Boarding school secrets"

I will try to read others' (here) when I get a chance~

I'd appreciate some C&C on an ongoing story, I'm working on.

It's called "Queen of Convenience"

I'd be more than happy to C&C anyone's novel who asks me to specifically, via e-mail/message/through review.

it's basically about this girl who's an artist who gets a hold of a magical pen that brings her creations to life. her first creation that was brought to life was her character Austin. then her and her best friend, once she finds out, starts showing him around and giving him a taste of human life. but then once someone learns of the pens existence that person wants it for themselves. what will the girl and her character do once they learn about this person and more about the pen itself.

i personally think it's a good story but i need someone else's opinion on it other than my friends. so please could any of you read and review me telling me what you guys think of it?

Also, I don't wanna seem like a gimme-gimme but if anyone's interested, I finally finished The Art of Deception. Please check it out, I'm rather proud of it if that's not too bold.

Elegant Emotions

Summary:

Little does Luna know that her flawed life is but a part of an engineered competition that her brother participated in. However, there is a lot more than simply a competition and a prize it's an evil attempt at altering humanity for life.

Keep in mind though, I'm a narrative author- so "show, don't tell" is beyond me. I tell a story.

Thanks,

-J

Smiles

Meg

P.S. I'll but up chapter 2 as well! ^.^

Hyperlink: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2492242/1/Who_We_Are

Anyone who reads, please review? I'd really like to know what people think.

I'd love if you could give my story a try. The first chapter isn't completely translated (it's long, really long) but I'm dwelling with school and it takes time and patience to translate and type at the same time (it's handwritten to half of the second chapter) It's more edged to character complexity and action than the all "chicésness" of vampire stories. Please give it a try and tell me what you think if you're too curious about what comes next I can tell you if you ask. (: thx

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2467029/1/Cinammon_and_Chocolate

Hey, I'm new to this site. I know this is irrelevant but is there a way to post a message in a forum without having to press reply to a message. I have no idea.

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