I have a story that I would like people to read.

It's called The Perfect, but I don't want to say what's it about because I might give away too much. Please read and review, and tell me what you think!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2503267/1/The_Perfect_Club

Please review!

my names amanda and I have eight different stories on here and two poems (writing is slowly engulfing my life,gah). i have some reivews but I'd love some more because its the biggest incentive to write and critiques from other writers help alot. and i usually return the favor, too so if you need reviews....

here's the link to my profile....PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!

http://www.fictionpress.com/u/602618/amandaj2351

my favs

very new:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2517298/1/Livid_Shadows_An_Urban_Faerie_Tale

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2512989/1/Walls_Facades_and_Fakery

main stuff:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2500502/1/I_see_London_I_see_France

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2489091/1/CHLOE

Um.. hi..

I'm not a great writer, but I'll write whether or not I'm good.

I'm making a story about two people trapped on an island. Two teens. Cast and Diego.

Cast was a castaway ( hence the name Cast ), she has been on an island for about nine months, and she lost her memory in the last two weeks. Her parents, spent that time searching the ocean for her, and end up getting marooned by pirates. Diego, one of the pirates nephew, was a castaway too, and now there both trapped on the island. He knows who she is, but to save himself, he must lie, and cheat. But can love over come the pain of treachery? um... bad a summarys... Currently rewritting it.

Cast away: Forgotten

Um, hi!

So I used to be a fan fiction writer, but I've moved on to writing my own stuff. I've been writing since I was 10. On this site, I mostly have just one shots and drabble, but I've started a multi-chapter story called Here's to the Nights. It's told in the POV of two different characters (Brandon and Jennifer) about their relationship. They're going in opposite directions telling the story though: Brandon starts at the end (post break-up) and finishes with the beginning (the first time he saw her). Jennifer begins at the beginning (the first time she talked to him) and ends her story awhile after the break-up. I'd really like people to read it. Constructive criticism is always welcome!

HEY! :D

Wanna check out my story? It`s called Time Won`t Let Me Go.

Yeah, I pretty much suck at ads, so yeah...

pwease? anybody ?

I'll give you a pixelized cookie! chyeah!

I'll check yours out too, if you do mine. ;)

Hey guys,

Just a little bit of shameless advertising here. I have two (relatively) new stories that I'd like people to check out, if they possibly have the time. I'm big on returning reviews, so if you just drop me a line saying what story you'd like critiqued then I'm happy to help. Um, yeah, my stories are:

1.Cinderella's Real Name Was: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2538756/1/Cinderellas_Real_Name_Was

2.And Permanent Progress: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2508399/1/Permanent_Progress

Hello! My friend and I have been writing a story together for about half a year now, as a bonding agent and a creative outlet. We've poured our hearts into it during any stolen free time - we're both terribly busy, and never see each other! - and it means a lot to us!

It'd mean the world to me if you could please check it out and submit a review! Please & thank You!

it's called Paper Fireworks : http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2461735/1/Paper_Fireworks

Thanks again, friends! =)

I'll advertise a biiit.

I started writing my newest story when I was eleven, but now it's being rewritten with a new title.

It's called Claudette.

It's about a fifteen year old girl (Claudette) who's mother died when she was younger, and now her father has remarried to an abusive stepmother. It's a dark story, but it's very, very good. No reviews yet, and I'd love for someone to read it. Plus, I'm looking for new stories to read that are darker, too, so it'd be great to find some writers who like what I like.

I'll be reading your story Claudette, sounds interesting. You might like my story Livid Shadows. Its very dark but also has some fantasy aspects in it. I don't know if you've ever read about Faeries or not, but thats the main premise--its much darker than my other stuff.

Summary: Alaina has always seen fey-- and being the terrifying, beautiful, dangerous creatures that they are she has had to strain to stay away from them all of her life. But they weren't the only dangerous factiors in her life. Lestat is the king of the Dark Court, and is desperately in need of a queen, a naive mortal one. When he picks Alaina, he pictures a simple courting--mortals are easily swayed by his charms. But she isn't as naive as he thinks.

Or maybe my story Chloe. Also a bit of fantasy. Vampires this time though.

Summary: After Chloe Gunn is diagnosed with depression her parents move her to a small town, where she for the first time can't hear someone's thoughts and learns that the boy she's becoming mildly obsessed with is on the road to becoming a vampire.

And even another story, only a few chapters though. Its called Fame.

Harley's living a quiet life in Suburbia biding her time until she could get back to LA. But when a girl in school finds out who her boyfriend is, she has to leave town. Joseph Tory’s living what most would think is the perfect life—he’s a rock star, loaded, and can have anything he wants. Too bad the one thing he’s completely interested in is terrible for him—Shiver, his new vice in life. Enter Harley; she didn’t know he was addicted—to a new drug that hasn’t hit the mainstream yet but it is mainlining through his blood. She’s terrified but she’s been pulled into his world and can-not get out.

The second chapter of that story is pretty dark and different than what I'm used to. Its a work in progress.

Here's the URL to my account.

http://www.fictionpress.com/~amandaj2351

Please review my story, Summer Blues. Read and reveiw mine. I'll read and review yours. Gauranteed!!

So, new to fictionpress. I was wondering if anyone could check out my Reconciliation story. Not the greatest title, but hey. I'm working on it. Any feedback is really apprecitated!

I just started a new story, it's called Little Girls Lost.

Its about two girls who were previously best friends. One, Leila, has started to let everything of importance in her life fall by the wayside, now she spends most of her time getting high with her ex-bestfriend's brother. Leah is seen by most, as little miss perfect. But she wants to tap into what Leila has and Garrett's there to lead her astray.

URL: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2559333/1/

I'll definitely review back to anyone who reviews it. I usually review each chapter a story has so far, so if you need reviews I'll help you.

Hey sup people??? well, time for more of what I like to call... ADVERTIZING!

is that supposed to be an s instead of a z???

w/e. Ok I have a story that I am pretty much in love with, and it is called Lighthearted, and it is a young adult fantasy story. (never fear, it's not a heavy fantasy- no dragons/elves/ice queens etc. but there are vampires, mystical creatures, sirens, physics, and a really sweet romance story arc. but as I was saying.) I really like it, but it never hurts to get more reviews. chapter 5 is on the way.

link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2548129/1/Lighthearted_Part_1_of_the_Athrophy_Series

and also, check out my poll and community!

Hey y'all!

I've got a story that's has very few hits and I would absolutely love feedback on it (good or bad).

It's called Our Silence: Memoirs from a Catholic School.

Thanks a bunch!

I've been working on the same story all summer, although I've tried to write it numerous times before it never seemed to work out until now. I've written the first four chapters, and a prologue. I've gotten reviews and everything, but they're always like "oh my god, keep writing, I love this", which is good, but I want something a little bit more constructive, showing positives and negatives, so I can go back and edit, and make the future chapters even better. I also want ideas on what types of problems I can write about and what other things I should add to make it more interesting. Thanks for any help I can get!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2552528/1/Girl_14_Takes_the_World

Hi. _ Im Rachel.

http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live_preview.php?storyid=2567342&chapter=1

Yay! Prolouges! Yeah, the first chapter's not up yet.

I like this forum, it gives you a chance to advertise your story. Here's my current one, its a sequel of my best story.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2567921/1/With_Friends_Like_These_2_The_Next_Generation

anyone wanna review my stories?

i honestly need your opinions, just drop a review and tell me what you think!!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2556437/1/Were_in_Heaven

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2512173/1/The_Skinny_Diaries

I would love to read some of your work. I'll give you my honest opinions like I always give.

Would you mind reading something of mine?

Please Check out my New story Bowling? Sure what could go wrong? and Lucky girls I'm having alot of fun writing them, but still havent gotten any reviews for it :( I have hits for them but no reviews , i cant tell if people like my stories or not please tell me what you think

I'll read someone's story & review it constructively (pointing out the good & bad aspects of it) if they'll do the same for mine.

Read CLAUDETTE.

By me.

Eleven chapters.

Twelve almost done.

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